Lie down in front of the computer.

After chatting with Xinlan about the matter of the manuscript of "Death Note", as a diligent author, Su Chen immediately began to burst the subsequent chapters of "Violet Evergarden".

According to this sales momentum, as long as you work harder and control the plot well, it will really not be far from the day when the physical book is released.

Due to the purpose of surprising readers at the beginning, Su Chen made a slight change in his previous works, adjusted the order of the chapters, and arranged An's story, which was supposed to appear in the second chapter, to the first chapter.

So now he needs to write the first chapter of the original work.

That is, the content of the seventh episode in the anime.,The only blank title.。

In the middle is the title "Home and Automaton Puppet".

This chapter tells the story of a screenwriter who dies of illness and premature aging of his daughter. Violet, who came to ghostwrite the letter, fulfilled the agreement he made with his daughter, so she finally realized the importance of the agreement to people, and the loneliness of not being able to be with important people when they left.

Although it is not as amazing as the episode of Ann and her mother, the level of tear-jerking is no less than a tear gas.

nbsp; Especially in the anime of this episode of the previous life, there is also the famous scene of Violet walking on the lake, click on the seventh word 16 minutes and 15 seconds, the whole process is high-energy and beautiful, and almost every frame can be screenshotted as a wallpaper.

But now Su Chen has no way to restore that kind of detail. br />

He's just writing, not animating.

At present, all he can do is to put more effort into the illustrations, so that readers can feel as much as possible the shock of Violet walking on the lake in the original work.

As for the arrangement of the plot, how to say it, Su Chen still plans to change it and knead the anime and the original work together.

nbsp; After all, there are a lot of flaws in the original work, and the anime is too badly changed, so Su Chen plans to compromise and advance with the plot of the original work, but the details are still based on anime.

In short, it has both the soul of the original and the details of the anime, and the entire enhanced version of "Violet Evergarden" has no flaws.

As for the follow-up, how should Violet's Shaozo be written......

emmm。

That's a problem, too.

First of all, in the original work, the first volume is almost always playing guessing with readers, so that readers just know that there is such an important character, but in the book, life and death are uncertain, and it was not until the next volume that it was clearly stated that Shao Zuo was not dead.

But it's different in the animation of the original crusher KyoAni, Shaozo was cool from the beginning, sacrificed in the war, and the whole series has always existed only in Violet's memory killing.

And then the problem becomes.

For Su Chen's porters, should he let Shao Zuo receive a boxed lunch?

The answer, of course, is yes!

Writing like this is the blade...... Ahh

The first volume is the same as the original book.,Be an old riddler.,Don't mention Shaozuo's life and death until the end.,And then the content at the beginning of the second volume.,Give the reader a fatal blow.,The information about Shaozuo's death will be disclosed at the beginning.,Then enter the main line of the later anime in one breath.,End at the speed of light.。

This is what Su Chen calculated.

Two volumes, more than a dozen chapters directly complete "Violet Evergarden".

Because of the pinnacle of this work, there are only two volumes, as for the other extras, love stories or something, in Su Chen's opinion, there is no high level at the beginning (of course, it may also be a problem with domestic translation, except for the first volume, the rest feels like a soulless machine translation).

The ideal violet in his heart is to go to the original book in the first half and the main line of the anime in the second half, and finally have an open-ended ending, leaving the reader with infinite reverie and a perfect curtain call.

After deciding, Su Chen brushed the draft of the second chapter, and then compared the content of the anime and began to revise.

When the finished product was finished, he yawned, threw the manuscript onto Yuzu's QQ, and then picked up the sketchpad and began to design the illustrations for the second chapter.

Classic dual-threaded.

You'll never guess what your favorite light writer is doing behind the scenes.

On the other side, Yuzu at work quickly noticed the manuscript sent by Su Chen.

"Home and Automaton Doll ......"

Staring at the title of the chapter, nodding with satisfaction, and thinking in his heart, "Teacher Ghost really didn't disappoint me", Yuzu began to review the manuscript.

As imagined, it is still comparable to tear gas, a short story that hits the heart.

It is said to be ghostwriting, but Violet is more like a growing recorder, harvesting her emotions from people's different feelings.

Unexpectedly, but still a heartwarming and memorable ending, Yuzu's eyes moistened again.

bsp; But this time it's much better than the first audit.

If the first chapter expresses the mother's deep love for Ann, then this second chapter is to use Oscar as the main character, from the identity of a father, through ghostwriting to express the father's longing for his daughter who is no longer alive.

The style of writing is still delicate like a drizzle, and the warm atmosphere is shaped, so that the grapefruit can hardly find any fault.

For other works, as long as the manuscript is handed in, the editor will pick and choose, and ask for all kinds of revisions and deletions.

Only "Violet Evergarden" is here, which makes Yuzu the most worry-free, and the manuscript handed in is not picky, not violated, not watery, not white, and does not need any revisions at all.

Now you only need to show it to the editor-in-chief, and after getting affirmation, you can go through the procedure and communicate with Mao Xuewang about the illustration.

Send a copy of the manuscript to the editor-in-chief.

However, what Yuzu didn't know was that the editor-in-chief was more attentive than her, and took out the manuscript seriously, gnawing word by word for more than two hours, in order to help the little vampire point out the shortcomings, for fear that the quality of the work would decline.

As the editor-in-chief of an independent group of Lightning Strike Library, he has of course read countless books, and can easily point out the faults and deficiencies to new writers.

Because theoretically.

There is a complete difference between an editor reading a book and a reader reading a book.

How can you say this feeling?

If you're a former author, you'll probably understand the difference.

nbp; When an author or editor reads a book, he will always unconsciously begin to analyze the various foreshadowing of the work, whether the writing is excellent, and whether the plot arrangement is reasonable......

It's like an occupational disease.

This leads them to read books objectively without a strong sense of substitution, not deep into the play, and thus pick out some flaws that even the author of the book himself does not notice.

It would be hard for a pure reader to notice this.

The editor-in-chief is now reading in such a mode.

And then......

Carefully analyzed from head to toe.

He was shocked to find.

This work actually made him unable to find any flaws!

……