Volume 1: Our Own League 155: The Great Writers of the Eleventh Class of the First Year of Junior High School
Seeing Li Liying leave, it was too late for Xu He to stop her, and he had to give up.
Li Jie suddenly said in a weird way: "What? Reluctant to let her go? ”
Xu He saw the gossip expression on Li Jie's face that couldn't be hidden, he was speechless, and said directly: "What are you thinking?" I just wanted to ask Muyang a question. ”
Hearing this, Li Jie also fell silent.
To be honest, he was also full of doubts about this matter.
Why did Muyang suddenly withdraw from the assessment?
He sighed and said, "Muyang is really a pity! ”
Li Jie also thinks that Mu Yang's withdrawal is a huge loss for the 17th Colonel of Jinguancheng, and he also wants to find out about this situation.
Xu He said: "It seems that we can only wait for the regular meeting of the whole school for a while. ”
Li Jie bowed his head slightly and said, "Yes! ”
Today is Monday, and it is the day of the regular school-wide meeting, and Muyang will definitely show up.
The two of them paid attention, and then went back to the classroom.
There is also a Chinese class, and then the regular school meeting will begin.
The two of them planned to go to the playground to find Mu Yang after taking this Tang language class to find out what was going on.
At this time, Xia Yu, the Chinese teacher of Class 11, walked into the classroom.
Xia Yu is still wearing a Tang costume and holding a folding fan, which looks different.
But now that the weather has turned cold and cold, he is still holding a folding fan, which makes Xu He and others criticized.
Xia Yu didn't seem to feel inappropriate, and he held this folding fan in class this time.
And according to the seniors, Mr. Xia Yu has always been like this, whether it is hot or cold, he always holds the folding fan in his hand, and the handle of the folding fan is covered with pulp for him.
Xia Yu put the textbook in his hand on the podium, and then said: "We are not lecturing today, let's talk about the essay about 'family affection' that everyone wrote this time!" ”
As soon as they heard this, Xu He and the others were all happy.
Because of this, the study task is not so heavy, it will be much easier, and they will naturally be happy.
Xia Yu said: "All the students in our class have written the topic of the national middle school students' new concept essay primary selection, and some of them are very well written. ”
Xu He and the others bowed their heads one after another, indicating that they knew.
Looking at the students' reactions, Xia Yu bowed slightly, the reactions of these little guys were not bad.
Xia Yu said: "This topic is actually very clear, and it is very simple, there is no need to review the question or anything, everyone should be able to understand it, I don't think anyone will write bias or write off-topic, right?" ”
Everyone shook their heads, this is really difficult to write off topic.
Xia Yu was very satisfied, and then said: "So I don't need to talk about the examination of this topic or anything, I'll talk about the rest." For a topic like this, it's easy to solve the problem, and everyone can write it. But it's not easy to write a good job or write a good topic like this......"
Xu He listened carefully to the lecture and listened very carefully, he was a good boy who studied seriously.
Xia Yu said: "When writing similar essays, I generally see the big from the small, and the trivial things around me are extraordinary, which requires very detailed details and delicate emotions...... In fact, this kind of essay does not need to be decorated with too flowery rhetoric, as long as it is written with true feelings, it is a good composition......"
To tell the truth, Xia Yu has already spoken very thoroughly and is easy to understand, but some people are still confused and don't understand.
Of course, Xia Yu also knows that this is easier said than done.
Even if they are Chinese teachers or some writers, it is difficult to write well and brilliantly on the topic of "family affection", so it is even more difficult for these first-year students.
However, there is no shortage of well-written works in this essay.
Of course, this is relative to the level of junior high school students.
Xia Yu said: "There are still several well-written essays in this essay, such as Zhou Zheng, Lin Xinya, Yang Juan and Xu He......"
When he heard his name, Xu He's eyes widened, and he didn't expect to have himself.
To be honest, Xu He felt that he should not be able to get a high score.
Because when he wrote this composition, he did not use flowery rhetoric, nor did he use momentum to arrange sentences, and he did not frequently point out the topic. What he wrote about was some of the trivial things that usually happened between him and his mother Tang Qian, especially those things that were extremely demanding on his studies.
He felt that his writing was a little messy and trivial, and he shouldn't get a high score, but he didn't expect that Mr. Xia Yu still thought that he wrote well, which made him a little unexpected.
Teacher Xia Yu continued: "Among them, Xu He's essay is very different from everyone, but it is very brilliantly written! ”
Xu He's eyes widened, and he didn't expect that Teacher Xia Yu would also praise him by name.
Li Jie turned his head to look at Xu He at this time and gave Xu He a thumbs up. Of course, the other students also turned their heads to look at Xu He, their eyes were full of envy and shock, and they didn't expect Xu He's composition to be so brilliant.
However, Zhou Zheng's gaze at Xu He was full of jealousy and suspicion.
Xu He ignored these gazes and looked up at Xia Yu.
Xia Yu picked up Xu He's composition, looked at it and said: "Xu He's essay doesn't have any flowery rhetoric or use too many rhetorical techniques, it is more of a flat and straightforward narrative, and it describes some trivial things that he usually interacts with his mother. However, the few things he selected are more representative, they are the hot spots of mother-child and education, and the most important thing is that these things and details are real, you can clearly feel the true feelings from between the lines, and you will feel as if these things are happening right in front of your eyes, and even similar things have happened in your life. His ordinary words resonate and empathize with readers...... It's hard to ......."
When he said this, Xia Yu also looked up at Xu He, his eyes were full of encouragement and appreciation.
To tell the truth, he really didn't expect a first-year junior high school student to write such a good article, and this true feeling really came to his face.
The simplicity and youthfulness in the text are also very strong, which can move people even more.
This essay was definitely the best one written in their class, and he himself gave it a perfect score. Even he found other Chinese teachers in the office to refer to the paper together, and the other Chinese teachers also agreed to give Xu He full marks.
Of course, this is not to say that Xu He's essay is not written with any problems at all.
In fact, there are still some obvious problems in Xu He's composition, some words and sentences are still problematic, and there are also typos. It stands to reason that such an essay will not give full marks. But at Xu He's age, being able to write such a sincere feeling and be able to move people and arouse readers' resonance and empathy is indeed very, very rare and worth cultivating.
Therefore, there was a lot of appreciation and encouragement in it, and they gave Xu He full marks.
After all, the problem of word choice and typos, sentence formation and typos are easy to correct, and it is really not so easy to cultivate the thing of being able to write real emotions, and it is even more rare to write something that can resonate and empathize with the reader, which is due to talent.
Xia Yu continued: "Xu He's essay is the best one written in our class, and it is also the only full-score essay in our class, and it is the only full-score essay in the first grade of our school. Xu He studied very hard and hard, and everyone should learn from him. ”
Everyone turned their heads to look at Xu He again, as if they had only known Xu He now.
Xu He was also stupid by everyone's gaze, and he was a little embarrassed.
If Xu He would attract everyone's attention in football, he would definitely be very stinky and proud to despise the audience. But in this regard, he really didn't dare, and felt a little shy.
He really didn't expect his composition to be so brilliant this time, and he even thought that it was not Teacher Xia Yu who was wrong.
Xia Yu also said: "I won't read this essay to you, because this article will be published in our school newspaper, and you can read this article from the school newspaper at that time." Of course, if you can't wait, you can also go to Xu He after class to borrow his essays and read them. You have to learn from him......"
Suddenly, the eyes of the students looked at Xu He differently, as if Xu He's compulsion was much higher in an instant.
This is the first person in their class to appear in the school newspaper, right?
No one thought that the first person in their class to appear in the school newspaper would be Xu He, which made many people feel incredible, especially Zhou Zheng. Even Zhou Zheng couldn't hide the envy, jealousy and hatred in his eyes, and he looked at Xu He's eyes unkindly.
Xu He didn't notice this, and he himself was shocked.
Your own article is on the school newspaper?
Wow!
I didn't expect myself to be so powerful, huh?
Xu He, you are really amazing, you are usually too low-key!
Li Jie stared at Xu He with wide eyes, and said after a while: "Old Xu, should I call you a great writer now?" Oh no, I should call you a great writer! ”
Xu He glared at Li Jie speechlessly and said, "You don't talk in a weird way, we are still good friends!" ”
Xia Yu on the stage said: "Okay, let's stop discussing!" Now listen to me, in addition to Xu He's article, Lin Xinya's essay is also very good, her composition and Xu He's composition are two completely different styles, her essay is a lot more gorgeous, and the words and sentences are also a lot more delicate. Later, I will read this essay to you......"
Everyone looked at Lin Xinya again, and they were all very envious.
Xia Yu continued: "The candidates who passed the preliminary selection of the National New Concept Essay Contest for Middle School Students this time are...... Xu He, Lin Xinya, Zhou Zheng and Yang Juan, several of you will participate in the semi-finals later, I hope you will prepare carefully, show your best level, and play in style and at a high level......"
Hearing this, Xu He thought he was going out to play a football game.
Li Jie immediately congratulated Xu He: "Great writer, congratulations!" Keep working hard and strive to come back with the champion of a new concept essay contest and become the next Muhan! ”
Xu He was really a little speechless, stared at Li Jie and said, "Will you still talk well?" ”
Li Jie smiled and said, "Didn't I wish I could have a great literary friend?" Wouldn't my writing skills improve? And if I say it in the future, I can pretend to be more forceful! ”