Seriously, I'm a little lost right now.

When I was writing the outline, I wondered if it would be too procrastinating to write like this, resulting in the front being full of daily life, and the appearance of Goldfinger was too late.

Later, I really couldn't think of any good way, so I wrote it first.

Sure enough, some people think that the water, some people think that the progress is too slow, and how many chapters have passed, the protagonist will only pretend to be 13 with children, and some people feel that it is not interesting to watch too much every day.

No way, delete the plot and increase the rhythm.

Many of the daily routines that have been designed are cut directly, or they are just brushed aside, and then transition to the Five Shadows War as soon as possible.

Originally, the outline was designed to be taken away by Madara.,Focus on writing about Madara's daily life.,And the daily interaction with the black absolute and so on.。

Then edit the notification and it's time to put it on the shelf.

No. 1 or No. 5...

At that time, I didn't have many manuscripts in my hand, and I was tossed back and forth by troubles every day, and then there was the afternoon plane on the 1st.

Forget it, what are you talking about.

In short, it was quite sudden, and in the next few days, there was no way to calm down and code words, so I simply pushed it to No. 5, and there were a few more days of buffer time.

Someone said, others are on the shelves are all Kagao C plots, you are in transition, who likes to watch it?

That's right, at that time, I had two ways, either to write the daily life according to the outline, or to delete it all, continue to speed up the pace, and directly write the plot of the protagonist as an adult.

I chose the latter, but I didn't want to be on the shelves and be called water.

As a result, I still didn't run, because the transition plot looks like water, but you can't help but write it yet.

For example, Madara's attitude has to be explained, probably what the protagonist has been taught to explain, when Madara's reincarnation eye has to be explained, and how the hidden dangers of the protagonist's body have to be explained.

If you don't talk about it, there will be a lot of people who will question you, what's going on with this, you have a bug.

If you talk too much, you will become Rory, and it looks like there is no nutrition at all, which is commonly known as water.

After these have passed, in order to take over the following plot, there must be foreshadowing, and from time to time I have to explain what has happened over the years and what changes have occurred.

I don't want to write these things, but I can't write them if I don't write them, I don't explain anything, how can I write them later?

And then it became like this, writing about daily life, talking about water. I don't write about everyday life, it's also water.

Although I had a certain amount of psychological preparation when writing the outline, it was still quite uncomfortable.

It's not your reason, it's my reason, the pen is not enough, I can't write some unimportant plots concisely and concisely, and I don't have enough control over the rhythm.

For this, it is all my fault to stand up when I am beaten.

But some people say that I deliberately wrote the water, and I was going to run away after a wave, or I just changed the person to write it, is it a little too vicious?

If you don't write well, your grades will be poor, and you'll work hard to get a few meals?

This book is not a buyout, so what's the point of finding a ghostwriter?

As an aside, more than once someone asked me to go to other websites to write a buyout, maybe not a lot, but at least it is guaranteed.

But the old faceless is more or less a person who pursues it, plus the person himself is a little nostalgic and troublesome, so it's gone.

So if it's really bad money, why don't I write a buyout? Why didn't you continue to write about the last book when the 7,000 were set, but chose to finish it directly?

To put it mildly, just go to a world and write a few hundred chapters, what money is there?

At that time, more than half of the book friends in the group supported Lao Wumian to continue writing and go to other worlds to die.

But at that time, Lao Wumian thought about it a lot, and felt that ending directly in the Hokage world was the best ending, and it was also the best explanation for himself and all readers.

So the opinion can be raised, and it doesn't matter if you think water, but it's really not the number of words that deliberately water, it's just this rotten money, at least the old faceless won't.

After talking about this problem, let's talk about the plot.

Some people say that nothing has changed in the past ten years of jumping in the middle, so that the protagonist can forcibly post back to the original plot, and ask why he didn't just fast forward to Shippuden.

I want to say that when the protagonist is small, some people are too small and have no sense of substitution.

Many people feel that the pace is slow and they are tired of watching the daily life, so they deleted the daily life of about dozens of photos and spots in the middle, which is the reason why you feel fast.

If I write a deleted paragraph, someone will spray me in a different way, so it doesn't matter.

As for forcibly pasting back to the original plot, it's fast forward to Shippuden, and I don't know if I'm crazy or you're crazy.

I'll just tell you this, I don't have any bullshit in my outline at all!

Where did you tell me where did you post the original plot?

As a result of the Vortex Clan, I have already left a foreshadowing, and there are even other foreshadowings that have not yet been revealed.

When the protagonist doesn't come out to make trouble, I can't force too much of the plot, right?

There are also people who say that what was written earlier is to let the protagonist return to Konoha again, and then how...

I'm really... Half in the bag.

makes people targeted in various ways, and then licks his face back to Konoha to lead everyone to live a well-off life, is it cheap?

Also as the Hokage...

From the moment the protagonist was taken away by Madara, the Hokage had nothing to do with the protagonist.

The only thing that was right was that I thought it was disgusting!

Because that's how I designed it.

Regardless of Kishimoto's definition of Ape Fei in the original book, as far as I'm concerned, Ape Fei is a hypocritical and scheming guy.

It seems that the worst is Tuanzang, but in fact, how much of Tuanzang is the pot that is carried by Ape Fei?

How many things that Ape Fei can't do with his character are explicitly or implicitly handed over to Tuan Zang, and then pretend to be very aggrieved and angry afterwards?

kept saying that he was for Konoha and even died with honor.

Damn, it's amazing!

It's a miracle that Naruto didn't blacken, it's all AB's fault!

So in this book, if you want to see that Ape Fei is a good person, you can directly click × and leave.

The main characters must do Danzo and Sarutobi!

In addition to personal senses, this design is also to give the protagonist enough motivation and explanation for the choices he makes.

There is also the section where I go to the Land of Rain, and some people think that the protagonist didn't do anything, so he just glanced at Nagato, and then he took two waters.

I feel like I've been wronged.

This piece has several functions, one is to use the perspective of Nagato to describe what stage the war has entered at this time.

The second is to let the protagonist show his hand and tell everyone that the protagonist is already very good, and by the way, he will reap a wave of worship from Nagato and others.

In the original book, Nagato and the others decided to catch up with the apprentice because they saw the battle of Jiraiya.

So designing such a foreshadowing is also convenient for the protagonist to come back and receive the younger brother.

Third, all the descriptions of the current tragic situation in the Land of Rain, as well as the descriptions of the protagonist's Shui Dun in the Land of Rain who can exert stronger strength, are all foreshadowing!

This piece will determine the protagonist's subsequent choices.

Fourth, give Madara a reasonable amount of time to make trouble, so as to lead the mirror to the protagonist, and then notify Danzo at the same time, and start to intensify the conflict.

When I was designing this plot at the time, I thought I was quite good, and many problems were solved at once, and I could also let the protagonist pretend to be Bo B by the way.

And then it became to look at Nagato.,I took two of them by the way.,I'm really special...

Forget it, I wrote it so long all at once, I don't know if anyone has read it.

Now I don't even know how to write it myself.

What's even more interesting is that now some people run out and say that it was written before it was put on the shelf, but it didn't taste so much after it was put on the shelf.

I just want to say what are you doing early?

If you had come forward earlier and said that it was written like that, and the rhythm was good, would I have deleted the outline and changed the plot with a batch of panic?

In this way, it seems like I'm throwing the pot again.

Really, I can't change this problem, every time I read the comments, I will be relieved, and I can't sleep thinking about it over and over again.

Obviously, every time I know that it is difficult to reconcile the people, there are always two people who make opposite suggestions, who should I listen to? I always can't help but doubt myself, thinking that it may be my own problem and I have to change it!

In the end, the two ends are not pleased, and I am the only one who deserves it!

Okay, fast forward, fast forward, just write it down, and then the plot where the protagonist really begins to rise and the golden finger that delays things should also show his face.

Comments, I don't read them either.

I have explained everything I can explain the question of whether water is water or not, and there is nothing to say.

Then it's time to write an essay, write an essay. It's time to read books, read books.

It is impossible to be a eunuch, at least these things designed in the outline will be written later.

It's just that some book friends may be disappointed, not meeting expectations, if you have the chance, I hope to see you again.

Finally, to sum up, all the mistakes are my fault, the spicy chicken I wrote, the water I wrote, I am guilty.

Please be merciful, the miasma in the comment area these days is really unwatchable.

It's been hanging for days, and now I'm going to let people delete it, right?

If you have to say that I am criticizing, then I will admit it.

Otherwise, when the newcomer saw that the big guy was so enthusiastic, he didn't turn around and run away immediately, for fear of being caught and pressing his pants on the ground for injections.

2020.11.12

The humble old man who was beaten upright was faceless