Having said that.

It's not that the eggs are always badly written.

On the contrary, looking at this kind of brainless Long Aotian, sometimes he is really upbeat.

Of the 100,000 words, Su Chen brushed it twice without much resistance.

However.

Character design, character design, spit, spit.

The selling point of light and online articles is different.

Reading this book is estimated to be like a sports student reading C language.

I can't understand anything, and by the way, I have to slander in my heart, "What the hell is this thing written?" ”。

So, after organizing the language a little, Su Chen also replied in a private message: "Say something you don't like to hear, brother, this book is hopeless, it's too routine for online articles, and if you want to change it, you can only make a big change from head to toe." ”

Mr. Dan, who was staring at the computer in a daze, was quite excited when he heard the prompt sound of Weibo, showing that the little ghost teacher replied to himself.

However, after reading the content of the message, he only felt that his body was pierced by a sharp arrow.

Sure enough, life is like this.

I'm a god of online literature, but I can only get this kind of evaluation from idols......

It's uncomfortable.

Reply to the imp on private chat, "Oh, thank you." After ending the chat, Mr. Dan began to be depressed again.

To be honest, he didn't accept the other party's suggestion, but because he took the initiative to ask for guidance, this will, Mr. Dan did not express any resistance.

This thing.

Let him make a big change, how much effort it will take!

Besides, after the whole book is revised, is it still what I want to write? Is that still my book?

Mr. Dan was extremely indignant in his heart.

He won't give up on this field easily.

He even swore in his heart.

Even if I starve to death and die outside, I won't do a whole book that loses my soul and jumps from here!

It's bound to be written on your own!

In this way, the upright-minded egg always pulled out the keyboard, and it was a burst of modifications to the details of the original text.

Three days passed.

During this period, he revised six times and was rejected six times.

The last time, the editor seemed to be unable to stand it, so he sent him an email and said in an almost pleading tone, "This is the editorial mailbox of the Oriental Library and the Light Literature Society, both of which have cultivated relatively famous light masters...... So, I beg you to stop contributing to me! ”。

That's right.

The editor who was targeted by the egg was also quite unlucky.

In the past few days, I have been reviewing online articles almost all the time, and everyone is going to be stupid.

He even began to wonder if he had come to the wrong unit.

This is the Lightning Strike Library, right? Is it a light publishing house? Right?

Then why do people submit online articles to themselves every day! I'm cracked!

And it's the same person who meows!

Are you sent by the enemies of labor and management to torture labor and management?

This email made Mr. Egg completely embarrassed.

For a while, I was a little embarrassed to continue to submit.

But considering his ambition, he also had to continue to submit.

As for the other party's change of publishing house...... What are you kidding, now with the light of the little ghost boss, the lightning strike library is the birthplace of a single major light in China, not to mention that the lightning strike library is also in a friendly relationship with Bilibili, and there are countless linkages......

Its composition is the same as a certain point of Chinese in the online literature industry, the undoubted NO.1, the leader.

"Damn, what's the problem?"

Staring at the final rejection email, Dan always had a headache.

In order to learn about lightness, he has been in a hurry to go to the doctor recently, what a sticker, Zhihu, forum, lightning strike library official website and other communication places, there is one count, he has put forward more than one consultation post.

But sand sculpture netizens are just sand sculpture netizens after all.

It's not good to talk about anything, the first place in the whole life.

Nine out of ten replies have nothing to do with dry goods.

The only one that is useful, maybe the level and understanding are not as high as the egg himself.

It irritated him.

If you asked him what his dream was half a year ago, when Mr. Dan had not yet come into contact with light, he might answer "become a platinum writer" or "become a certain brother in the future, a big man in the literary world".

But now!

His biggest dream is like returning to the stage of the budding period.

Very unpretentious.

Just be able to pass the manuscript lightly.

While thinking about it, another few minutes passed.

One more day is Monday.

At that time, it is estimated that Bai Yu, the editor in charge, will check the data and tell himself because his state has not picked up......

How can it be repaired!

What should I do?

The more I think about eggs, the more irritated I become.

The demon of the manuscript pressed on him like a mountain, making him unable to adjust his writing state.

The cutting is continuous, and the rationalization is still messy.

Suddenly.

Mr. Dan thought of the proposal given to him by the little ghost on Weibo three days ago - the full text was overhauled and the routine writing method of online articles was abandoned.

Could it be that it really has to be like what the little ghost teacher said, and the whole book will have a chance to be overhauled?

He couldn't get tangled.

Obviously, he created this story very carefully, and the plot is also a vampire plot that he has been thinking about for a long time...... It's a pity to say that the big change is the big change.

What's more, a few days ago, I had rejected the proposal of the little ghost teacher in disguise, and now after three days, I will pull down my face and beg the other party, and the other party will take care of me?

Indecision is only for a moment.

People who are truly humble and seek progress will not care about such a useless thing as face.

What's more, there is another word called shameless questioning.

After a brief consideration, Mr. Dan decisively sent a private message to the ghost's Weibo account:

"Little ghost teacher, I'm enlightened! Can you tell us more about the direction in which the major changes are being made? I've thought about drafting! ”

The other side.

Su Chen was also quite surprised when he happened to see Mr. Dan who wrote again.

To be honest, judging from the reaction three days ago, he also thought that Dan always didn't accept his opinion.

But he didn't want to, but the three-day period had come, and he still came (fog).

If it were someone else, maybe Su Chen really didn't have the heart to give any more advice.

But who let the other party be the egg, since the other party is really determined to think about the draft, he has to show a little seriousness.

Su Chen: "No problem, first of all, can you briefly summarize your outline and what you think are the highlights of your work?" ”

He typed slowly on the private message interface.

A bold idea gradually rose in my heart.

Seeing that the little ghost still replied to himself quickly, while being surprised in his heart, he thought about it, and hurriedly typed and communicated: "Hmm...... The outline is that the protagonist defeats various strong enemies and walks towards the peak of life step by step. As for the highlights, I think that's the process. ”

“……”

Are you writing an online article?

Su Chen in front of the screen sighed, and then tortured his soul.

"Well, then I'll change the question, what does light seem to you?"

……