The controversy is quite explosive, so let's talk about it in a single chapter.

The last three chapters were written immediately after Xiaofeng woke up, and after writing one chapter, he continued to write the next two chapters after breakfast, and basically sent them directly after he finished writing, and he didn't have time to check them carefully.

There was indeed a problem with the description of the details, so it was also revised subsequently.

Helpless~

If you write quickly, there will inevitably be some details that you can't take care of.

After you have to send it, look at the follow-up reaction and go back to check, and then see if it needs to be modified.

The main reason is that sometimes, what the author conceives may not be able to actually express, and what may be written is one picture in the author's mind, and another picture on the reader's side.

In fact, this is also the most critical issue in writing, which is the so-called pen power, the stronger the pen power, the stronger the author's general control, the more able to express his own expectations completely.

If you don't have good writing skills, you won't be able to write well, like you know what it is, but you just don't know how to say it or how to describe it.

Like the Naruto Pirates, these hot-blooded comics, generally on the surface are sunshine, sand sculptures, and the darkness is hidden under the plot, and the author generally takes into account the audience, making the 'interesting' more than the 'logical', which is also the reason for the many bugs.

Compared to those comics with fewer bugs, there are very few that are popular.

Xiaofeng's personal penmanship is not very suitable for putting aside authenticity and logic, and only writing about the sunny and interesting side, so the consistent style of writing Naruto Pirates will add an analysis of the plot.

Needless to say, the darkness of the Hokage is actually needless to say, Danzo can assassinate Sarutobi Hizai, and he can be forgiven, and Sarutobi can force Hinata Hizashi to die...... Fog Hidden Village persecuted the family ninjas, and Konoha was doing the same thing, after the death of the second generation, the Thousand Hands clan fell directly into the two wars, and it was obviously unreasonable to say that it was natural development, and the Uchiha clan was fine.

And the Uchiha is not much better, he has been excluded since the second generation, and finally he couldn't bear to be ready to seize power, and then he was destroyed, and Hinata was not much better...... It can be seen.

By the way.

The plot development of this book is definitely not the same as that of Zhen Dun.

The most distressing part of Xiaofeng's writing of the same people is that he writes too much.,Almost all the plots that should be thought about.,I can't control the Hokage fandom style of the friend next door.,This is the most helpless.。

It seems like a bit too much.

Let's do it first~

Xiaofeng continued to sort out the plot codewords, and at 0:00 in the evening, he should be able to prepare the two watches tomorrow and send them first.