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I've basically read all the book reviews.,I also recognize some problems.,I've also repaired some places.,Of course,I didn't say where to fix it.,It's too trivial.,The degree of repair is not worth re-reading.,It's not an important thing.,If a new reader finds that the content of the text doesn't match the interstitial.,It should be repaired.。

But the main outline, the character design, and the heroine should not be able to repair, this thing is iron, and I admit it on the street.

Today, I will pick up a few of the most discussed issues in the book review area and say a few more words.

Speaking of which, it's not the first time I've written a novel, I know, those who ask questions, may have been poisoned by me a long time ago, and the rest of the people should be able to accept my article, his fairy grass and my poison, I understand this reason, I said that these may be useless, it's okay, just chat.

First of all, it's the problem of the protagonist's scumbag, which I recognize.

Let's not say that I'm a bitter hand in emotional drama, strictly speaking, as long as it's not a single heroine or no heroine... That protagonist isn't a scumbag?

There are many readers who compare the books under the sea with mine, this is my high climb, there are two writers at the starting point, I have ordered all their books, one is a dog under the sea, and one is a scumbag, the field is different, but they are all top writers.

The character creation and daily description of the bottom of the sea are really amazing, but even so, the 2.5 pairs of the master of the northern plains are still sprayed by the scumbag in his life, and I am far from his skills, and it is too normal to be sprayed.

You should spray, I should write, the first few sheets said, not a single heroine, I'm not a fraud.

By the way, Rin is really not a character in the snow.

I saw a person in the post before that it was unrealistic to say that the top students of Apricot were bullied, especially the new school, it was impractical, I don't know, I am not Japanese after all, but in film and television works, this kind of bridge is not new, being bullied has nothing to do with academic performance, depending on interpersonal communication and personality, as for the new school will pay attention to this, let's not say that Japanese schools have serious student autonomy, and the school is not so much managed, bullying is not just physical violence, who can manage verbal violence and cold violence? What's more, with that kind of timid and obedient character, even if you are bullied, will you report it to the teacher? I don't think this section is a poisonous point.

And then there's the plot of Akutagawa Ryunosuke's first appearance.,Maybe I'm a little wrong with what I'm describing.,My original intention was that Akutagawa Ryunosuke disguised himself as a police officer.,Test the character ability of the protagonist.,Failed to succeed.,Finally, he openly revealed a corner of the transcendent world.,Invitation to the protagonist.。

Some readers said that this attitude is not quite like the attitude of inviting people, but I think you can pull people into the gang, not just hearsay, it is still necessary to go to the bottom in person, maybe I described too hard before, did not pave the way well, and the atmosphere was a little tense? I'll be working on it when I have time, but I've been running out lately.

The character design of this thing is really a matter of opinion, and it is too easy to be led astray by brain supplementation.

I read a book review before, saying that Hidekawa Kamizumi went to threaten Ryunosuke Akutagawa, and he didn't look like a respected swordsman at all.

I wonder if this high morality is completely made up by your brain.

When did I add this character?

I've always mentioned that when Shangquan Xiuchuan was young, he was also a gentleman, a young man holding a sword, high-spirited, making friends from all walks of life, happy and enmity, kicking the gym and eating and drinking, the temper is not good, and then he has a family, he is much more stable, and he has become good at managing contacts, but the things in his bones are not so easy to change.

When his daughter was in distress, this person killed directly in the dream mirror world, regardless of it, he drew his sword and beheaded him.

This is a short-term protector, you move his mantle to pass on, and if you don't draw your sword, you can be considered restrained, and you still expect him to speak calmly with you with high morality?

Tut...

It's hard to top.

There are book reviews saying that I have too many dialogues and the plot is a little dragged, and I found this myself.

I used to write the same people.,Homo.,There's no need to set up a person.,The plot context is also clear.,It's completely different from the nature of this book.,So I also have some gains and losses when I write.,Some things are afraid of not being understood.,I'm afraid that the character design is not clear.,It's a little verbose.,The control of the original plot is also a little weak.,I'm trying my best to learn and change it as much as possible.,Anyway, it's a newcomer.,It's normal to practice a book.,Just pay tuition.。

As for hydrology ... It's really not.,What's wrong with the hydrographic map on the shelves.,I shouldn't have written a plot that has nothing to do with the main line so far.,Many places are actually foreshadowed.。

Well, it's not a whim of mine that Rin Kamizumi's ability has no limit, nor is it that I set cerebral palsy, her father only said that her ability is not limited, and she said it herself, so that's it, and there will be an explanation later.

There won't be a demon soul that is a woman.,In the end, they were all accepted as a harem.,The heroines are basically all on the stage.,It's just that the pen and ink spent are different.,Some haven't started to be active yet.。

As for the last few pairs, I'm not lying, I really didn't think it through.

Also,I remember a reader complained.,There was a paragraph in the early stage where the setting shook too often.,It's a little annoying to watch.,I also specifically mentioned this in the end of the first volume.。

Explain a little here.

At that time, my book was almost 100,000 words, but I haven't come to test the waters, and some readers may not know what this represents.

The most important thing for a book is the recommendation bit, there is no one, the quality is secondary, of course, the quality of the book is generally not less recommended.

I didn't recommend 100,000 words at the time, my heart was half cold, I felt that this iron must be pounced, and I quickly shook the setting when I thought about it, and then cut the branch line, and wrote five or six hundred thousand words to finish the settlement, there is a beginning and an end is not a eunuch, and our next book is a good man.

So I wrote out some of the settings that will slowly shake in the future.

As a result, I didn't think about it, I didn't write a few chapters, and I tested the waters.

I had very mixed feelings that I couldn't put into words.

Most of the editors recommended it, and we can't work so casually, so I had to get the plot back on track with some toughness.

I'm not saying this to find a reason.,Just to say sorry.,I think it should affect the reading experience.,What can stick to this is true love.,Thank you for your forbearance.。

There should still be something I want to say.,But I can't remember it.,I'll have a chance to talk about it later.,Originally, these things should have been put in the end of the second volume.,But it's no accident.,The second volume should be written after it's on the shelves.,I'll say it in advance.,I don't care if the person who asks the question can see me.,But whether to say it or not.,It's my attitude.。

Updated question... I'm not a little less than 5,000 words a day.,I'm not full-time.,Go home every day at seven or eight o'clock.,After eating, it's nine o'clock.,Don't play anything and start coding words.,Wait until eleven o'clock to finish two chapters, even if it's fast.,Recently, I have to save up manuscripts.,Since I wrote this book.,I haven't touched the Baiwen card for two months.,I've drawn all the SSR in front of Suzuka Goku.,I didn't have a chance to experience the experience.。

Of course, the shelves will explode.

Finally, I want to build a book friend group, I don't know if there is anyone willing to add, if there is a word here, I'll look at the number, I won't build it if it's too little, no one can add it, it's too embarrassing, a little embarrassing.

That's all, sleepy, go to sleep.

Well... Finally, thank you for your support, please rest assured, this book will never be a pigeon, I can not promise much, but this can definitely be done.