Some questions about the third volume, if you have any questions, you can take a look.
When the third volume opened, the angel had a premonition of a decline in grades, but he did not expect to cause so many people to be dissatisfied.
Since someone asks why it is written like this, what is the point? The angel explained it a little.
In the design of the first draft outline, Ivan and Althea have only known each other for a summer vacation, the relationship is not deep, the characters are not full enough, and temporary death is acceptable.
One of the original intentions of this line is to use this incident to make the protagonist of the traverser completely recognize his identity and recognize the mother of Althea!
Originally, after Ivan's "death" in Althea, the most in his heart should be guilty, after all, some things were triggered by him, and he saved Althea more because of guilt!
But then your attitude disrupted my plans, causing me to have to write about the deep relationship between the two...
The second purpose of writing this was to get acquainted with Sirius.
In the angel's vision, in the third volume they are two people who have lost some of them, temporarily cooperate because of their respective purposes, and finally care for each other, understand each other, and save each other at the same time.
Sirius wakes up from the abyss of hatred and regains his senses, no longer making revenge his only goal in life.
Ivan, on the other hand, regained his strength from guilt and dead silence, and actively tried to reverse the past.
But due to the previous misjudgment, the angel did not dare to write too ruthlessly, and finally became a failure.
In addition, it is also convenient to deepen the emotional line, deteriorate the relationship between the protagonist and Lao Deng, reveal Ivan's life experience through the perspectives of all parties, understand the past of Doggett and Althea, arrange some small foreshadowing, etc...
The most important thing is to prepare for the task of controlling the werewolf and becoming the king of Tumbledown Alley, so that the other main line of the book can smoothly make the plot continue.
After all, after getting enough money with the protagonist's personality, he will go to the safer Diagon Alley, instead of continuing to stay in Tumbledown Alley. (Of course, this money will be used for other purposes in the future) and there is no reason to be the king of Tumbledown Alley...
The first volume of this book is the most satisfying for the angels, although the previous was scolded very badly, I don't know how many people abandoned the book because the protagonist chose Gryffindor and followed the plot in the early stage, but this is the only volume written in full accordance with the outline!
It was not affected in any way.,All the foreshadowing was used.,It took dozens of chapters as foreshadowing to carry out the main line.,The plot is gradually transitioning from a relaxed daily transition to a tense battle.,It's really not a useless plot.。
But from the second volume onwards, in view of the dissatisfaction of some book friends, Angel had to speed up the progress of the plot, resulting in the overall plot being a little scattered, and many foreshadowing chapters were cut like this.
The two people who have spent a lot of pen and ink to portray, Lockhart and Tom, hurriedly received the lunch, and some of the plots did not achieve the expected effect at all.
So when the third volume opens, the angel doesn't want to compromise anymore, because that will only continue to destroy the integrity of the plot, and the angel has always believed that telling a good story is more important than the others...
This is also the reason why the angel has been sprayed no matter how hard it has been sprayed, and it has not been spoiled, just to make it better for you to see the puzzle chapter. (I also hope that you don't deliberately spoil the previous chapters, or be vague when saying spoilers.) )
But it's a pity that the angel still compromised and solved the mystery in advance, and Aisyah's body was disguised with a compound decoction, which also made the subsequent puzzle-solving process a big disappointment...
According to Angel's previous expectations, this should be the most wonderful and important volume of the book, but it was not written as expected.
So please read the book to be a little patient.,There's no plot that doesn't come back.,It won't be written....,
Finally, the angel would like to thank you all for your support,
It is your every subscription, every reward, and every vote that allows the angel to be able to keep writing as always, without being too affected by the bad reviews in the book review area...
Thank you very much!