"Every day, every day, the same thing is repeated...... Extremely boring......"

"This world is rotting ......"

nbp; The editor-in-chief frowned: "That, Xinlan, review is review, you don't need to read out the content of the comics......"

"Ahh I'm sorry! Xinlan hurriedly apologized.

In the spacious office, all the editors of the first editorial team are cross-checking the first episode of Death Note.

After downloading the draft, the editor-in-chief begins to browse through them one by one.

Forty pages of plot is not too much, and too little.

It took ten minutes to read it carefully several times, and the editor-in-chief was very shocked.

The content of the entire first episode is not muddy, and the character of Mr. Mao Xuewang is portrayed very online, and he sets an extremely calm and intelligent image for the protagonist at just one beginning, and lays a lot of foreshadowing.

Especially at the end, after the protagonist kills people and experiments with the authenticity of the death note, he actually decides to become an existence that erases all the evil in the world, and even uses the note to kill all the criminals to create a new world.

"Teacher Mao Xuewang's creativity is too strong." The editor-in-chief praised without hesitation, "The foreshadowing and setting of this first sentence are definitely another masterpiece." ”

"But the problem is, just looking at the first episode, I can't see the meaning of a suspenseful comic at all."

Soon, there were cross-vetted editors who commented.

Indeed, the setting of the Death Note, you can kill people by writing your name, and you can also set up the process of killing people in the air in detail, no matter how you look at it, it is the setting of the invincible text.

If you want to talk about suspense, is it possible that you will still let the police catch a murderer who kills people in the air like this? Forced suspense?

It's simply impossible, right?

How could the protagonist of the invincible text be caught by the police?

This is a bit like the setting of those heroes in some martial arts, where the protagonist kills the wicked by his own will.

and suspense as if you can't beat it.

The editor-in-chief also thought of this.

But he has been very optimistic about Mao Xuewang before, and now he must be willing to believe in each other.

So the editor-in-chief groaned and said: "There is indeed this hidden danger, but the setting of the first episode is very rigorous, which is very in line with the standards of suspense works, plus the author is Mao Xuewang, so I think we can have expectations for this work." ”

bsp; "That'...... Editor-in-chief, what do you mean? Now it's going straight through the review? ”

"Isn't it a little too hasty?"

"Yes, should we try to let Teacher Mao Xuewang modify it again?"

A group of editors chattered inquiring.

"No need!" The editor-in-chief waved his hand.

"Just go through the review directly, and then recommend it, with the strength of Teacher Mao Xuewang, no matter how bad it is, it is impossible to collapse."

The powerful voice made the editors look at each other.

Okay.

Anyway, you're the editor-in-chief, so I'll listen to you.

As a result, the work passed the review at the speed of light, setting off a wave of craze in the online comic circle.

The comment area of "Dry Sister Buried".

"What's the matter, the little burial is gone?"

"The day after the publication was permanently closed, I miss it."

"Does anyone know the address of this dead eunuch, I'll send him some souvenirs."

"Earlier, if you want to send it to the starry sky, right?"

nbsp "There is one thing to say, the starry sky is a real dog, and Mr. Mao Xuewang does not draw a small burial is his pot."

"What about the new pit? Didn't you say that it would come out today? ”

"Mao Xuewang ran to paint suspense, my youth is over."

"Green knot workers to climb for the master!"

The atmosphere in the entire comment area was very sluggish.

It can be seen that after the publication was permanently suspended, readers were more or less resentful in their hearts.

Then.

Suddenly, someone refreshed the page of Mao Xuewang's works.

Then I saw that there was an extra work in the background.

Death Note!

The person was directly excited about a laser dance on the spot, and hurriedly reminded everyone in the comment area of Xiao Burying.

"Look, everyone! Mr. Mao Xuewang's new work has been reviewed! ”

"Damn, there really is!"

"The first episode of the Death Note is out!"

"Finally waiting for you, fortunately I didn't give up."

"Where? Why didn't I see it? ”

"Fool, you can refresh it."

"Uh-oh."

The comment area immediately boiled again.

The brother who ended his youth just now, this will order faster than anyone else, and he couldn't wait to open the first episode of "Death Note" and watch it with relish.

After reading it with a frown, the brother originally wanted to come out and grab a sofa to brush the first, but he didn't expect the comment area to be overcrowded at this time.

Below, a large number of readers who have completed the drug test are bubbling to sign in.

The speed at which this heat is increasing is outrageous!

"This first word is really good! It's just too little to see. ”

"Forty pages in front of me isn't enough, you see I didn't expect it."

"The style change is too big, is Mr. Mao Xuewang really okay?"

"Well, it's a big contrast from the previous one, but it's still good."

"Teacher Mao Xuewang's Creative Rebellion 666"

"No one really thinks that Mao Xuewang can't draw suspenseful comics, right? Wouldn't it, wouldn't it? ”

"This is the beginning! The setting of Death Note is also too awesome. ”

Someone discussed the plot and said, "Uh, is this work a suspense?" When the protagonist gets the note, isn't he directly invincible? Where did the suspense plot come from? ”

Many people replied and participated in the discussion of the plot.

"Indeed, this opening is too dreamy, the night god moon is so high as the double quotient, plus the death note can kill people in the air, I don't know what the follow-up plot can draw at all."

"Maybe the police arrested him?"

"Police? It's impossible, Ye Shenyue is so incomprehensible, the police can't catch him at all, and even if he does, there is no evidence. ”

"It's true that people just write a few words in their notes, so is it possible that writing is also illegal?"

"I like the character of the night god moon, the IQ is online and the mind is clear, and it is very comfortable to watch."

"The beginning of this comic is good, but can the follow-up author control the plot?" Someone worried.

"It depends on how high Mr. Mao Xuewang's double quotient is, 2333"

Of course, in addition to these normal comments, there are many people who express regret and burial under the comment section of Death Note.

"I raised a child and buried it for half a month, and then came back and told me that it would be permanently suspended, I was stupid."

"The crispness of this book is decisively frightening."

"Can you continue to draw a small burial, the death note or something is really insensitive."

"I only love small burials! Don't draw a small bury your ticket is gone! ”

However, when Su Chen saw these comments, he didn't panic at all.

Because the backstage clearly shows that these complaining little buried readers voted very honestly.

Especially the reader who threatened that your vote was gone, cast eight votes in the background in one go!

Alas, the old tsundere.

It's so cute.

……