Act XX. Comments

"You mean, that Reiner. Ian Gray approached Antoine? ”

Dozens of miles away from Crescent Academy, in a luxurious office, a man with a big back put down his pipe and stared at Sanderson with sharp eyes, which made the thin guy shiver.

"Yes, Mistress Piram, they seem to have made a deal, I have been looking for someone to keep an eye on the old street for the past two days, and Antoine is indeed producing something."

Sanderson didn't dare to look the boss in the eye, replied timidly, and asked back in a low voice.

"Ian Gray's house, isn't it easy to deal with?"

"You don't need to talk too much."

Pieram glanced at Sanderson and silenced him, not daring to move.

"Let's go and find out what they're working on, and we'd better get a sample back."

"Yes, sir."

Sanderson nodded again and again, not daring to disobey.

"You go down first."

Pilam waved his hand, and Sanderson slipped away, not daring to make a sound.

The office door was shut, and Pyram spat out a smoke ring and looked at the open letters on the table.

The sender of the letter was Hailar. Ian Gray, the second son of the Ian Gray family.

The letter gave a rough explanation of the current situation of the Ian Gray family, and Piram knew what was going on in this business empire and why Reiner. Ian Gray will be in charge of Crescent Academy.

Piram was promoted by Hailar and obtained the first funds, so he successfully had his current wealth and status, so he has a lot of respect for Hailar.

At this time, Hailar learned that his unsuccessful brother had come to Crescent Academy, hoping that Piram could educate this noble young master who was not deeply involved in the world of reality.

On the one hand, he lamented that the Ian Gray family was so ruthless even to his family, and on the other hand, Piram had a legitimate reason to deal with Antoine.

"I'm sorry, Master Reiner, it looks like I'm going to have to trouble you."

Muttering to himself, Piram looked back at a picture frame on the table.

In the frame, it was originally a group photo of three people, but one of them's head had been blacked out, which looked quite scary.

"As for Antoine, it's time for you to pay the price."

Piram clenched his fists, the rattle of joints echoing through the office, and a little electricity flashed through the air.

......

Thousands of miles away in the Rainbow Tower, Jury Member Green hesitated and watched the clock on the wall pass by little by little.

There is still half an hour before the deadline for the paper review, and he must write and submit the review opinions of the paper in hand before this, otherwise it will be considered a dereliction of duty, not only will his points be deducted, but also he will have to encounter troublesome qualification review.

But Green's review has been in the making for three days.

He wanted to write countless times, but he dispelled his thoughts, and so on, and finally dragged it to this point.

"Forget it, if there is really any problem, it will be handed over to the judges at the next level."

Finally, Green gritted his teeth and began to write his comments on parchment.

"The paper successfully prepared a new gas with special properties by modifying common experiments, and at the same time, according to this, the paper raised several questions about the process of the combustion reaction of the fire element......

Green first summarized Reiner's entire paper with his own understanding, and then commented on the experiment itself, because the experiments in the paper are very detailed, and the points that should be considered are basically taken into account, so this part does not take much ink and paper.

Then comes the comment section.

Green thought for a moment, swallowed his saliva, dipped his quill in ink, and continued writing.

"Based on the above reasons, I think this paper is quite groundbreaking and rigorous, for the first time the quantitative weighing of substances before and after the experiment, its research ideas are quite worthy of reference, and at the same time, the experimental design is rigorous, the expansion is deep, and the properties of this new gas are basically demonstrated......

At this point, Green paused, and the next discussion on the combustion reaction was the most important, and he took a deep breath before continuing to write.

“...... Several questions about the combustion reaction in the experiment are of great value for discussion, but unfortunately they are not explored in depth, which is the deficiency of the paper, but the spirit of questioning and inquiry displayed in it is worthy of affirmation, and the questions involved are enough to attract the attention of all alchemists......"

After writing a comment that he couldn't even believe, Green sighed and finally wrote the judging score.

"If the paper is approved, it is recommended to reward 100 academic points."

......

In another office of the Rainbow Tower, Garon had already finished writing the review of the paper, and was reviewing it at this time.

“...... The experimental method designed in this paper is groundbreaking and inspiring, the paper format is rigorous, and the logic is clear, but due to the author's lack of understanding of the latest theories and the limitations of the times, the conclusion of the paper has obvious errors, and its content is for reference only. ”

Putting down the judges' comments, Garon took a sip of his coffee.

Originally, according to common sense, this kind of paper with the wrong conclusion should not be passed, but considering that Mr. Fleming's paper has not yet been published, it is quite rare to be able to write this paper in this environment, so Garon still decided to pass the paper to give this author a little encouragement.

And he liked the neat format of the paper so much that he even had the idea of writing his own paper in this format in the future.

With a shake of the bell, Garon placed the paper review comments into the teleportation array on the table, and a green flame burned, quickly engulfing the parchment.

......

Two floors above Garon's office, the reviewer Angel had just finished his review, and the paper was so impactful that he immediately sent a letter to his old friend who ran an academic journal, and he was thrilled.

Towards the end of the submission period, he glanced at the review comments he had written.

“...... The experimental method of this paper is groundbreaking, for the first time the method of quantitative analysis is used to monitor the whole process of the experiment, and the change of the mass of the object before and after the experiment has an intuitive display, at the same time, the gas generated in the experiment has extremely special properties, and the application prospect is broad, and finally, the experiment has raised reasonable doubts about the traditional combustion reaction of the fire element, and I cannot answer these questions due to the limitation of knowledge, but I believe that these doubts will lead the alchemy system to a new development direction, according to which, the paper was approvedIt is recommended to award 200 academic points. ”

Two hundred academic points is already a high reward, and in the field of alchemy, usually only those who discover new elements can barely reach this number, and it depends on the practical value of the new element.

But Angel felt that this paper did have this value, and it was not excessive, so he nodded and put the paper into the teleportation circle.