Summary of the first phase
With the end of the Laurel Contest and the evolution of the fire dinosaurs, the first phase of the story of "Elf Global Superstar" has basically come to an end, so I will make a small summary with you here.
We have achieved very good results in the previous recommendation activities, thanks to everyone's support and tolerance, Maofan is here to sincerely thank all the readers, thank you for the help of the editor Yuanshen, thank you for the recommendation of the undersea brother, thank you to all the Py big guys, thank you all!
Because of the relationship between the manuscripts, in the more than a month of this update, the overall process of Maofan feels relatively smooth.
Although there were also some problems (such as the final championship was not particularly cool, and some were rushed and not ideal. But overall it didn't exceed the expectations of the cat's meal.
Of course, we must also learn the lessons we should learn to avoid repeating them next time.
Let's get down to business and talk about the first part of the plot.
The first stage of "Elven Global Superstar" is, in a word, to introduce you to the world, the modern society where Pokémon exists in Quartz.
Maofan has done market research before, and the readers at the starting point are basically the following two questions about a elf text: what is the initial pet and will accept XXX (XXX is the elf that the reader likes)?
That's right, those are the two points.
Is there something missing?
In the three elements of the novel, the character image, the storyline, and the typical environment, except for the first point of the character image, everyone almost doesn't care about the others.
It can be seen how tolerant readers are of elven texts and how low their requirements are...
However, in the elven text's "The Head" and "The Courtyard Tree", the shaping of the worldview environment is very successful (the character creation of the cloth god is even more successful), and Maofan thinks that this is a place to learn, so he wants to work hard in this area.
But words are not like pictures, and it is difficult for the novel to give the audience a strong visual impact like the long shot that just entered Lyme City in "Detective Pikachu", but the text is better than moisturizing things silently, and you can delicately explain the world view from all angles.
Quartz traveled from crossing over to obtaining the Little Fire Dragon, and then slowly approached the trainer circle, and started his own path as a trainer through a competition. All these plots are going on step by step, and the side description of the world view has never stopped.
Therefore, the purpose of the first stage has been basically completed, and it is gratifying to congratulate and gratify.
Let's talk about a few of the issues that have been discussed a lot.
To be honest, except for a few memes, "Global Superstar" is basically composed with reference to the model of several best-selling online articles.
For example, how many chapters appear as plug-ins, how many chapters appear as villains, how many chapters where supporting characters appear, and even how many chapters to how many chapters the plot outbreak are all designed, trying to give everyone a better reading experience.
During this period, Mao Fan also thought about how to avoid the problem of poison points, such as the appearance of the two poison points that were originally expected to be the "system" and the "duck god"...
Mao Fan feels that these "hanging" may cause unhappiness to some game parties.
As a result, there was no such thing at all!
Nope!
(ФДФ)
Why?! I'm ready to be squirted!
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However, the majority of light readers complained about the two places of "traditional arts" and "disgusting cousin", saying that they couldn't accept it.
How to put it, it feels subtle...
The likable characters are easy to write, such as Bai Xueyan, who praises her beauty, and then gives the protagonist benefits for free, and it's over.
And the three characters of Huang Songtao, Han Han and even Fan Li were originally designed to be unlikable characters, but now they are hated by everyone, and they can be regarded as achieving their goals.
Little Yellow Hair, a classic villain, the prototype is the predecessor of the previous fire lord in the animation, and "watching the game on TV at the beginning" is a tribute to the original work.
As for my cousin, she is a typical bear child, who has more than enough success and more than failure, causes trouble every day, and is angry when she sees it. (I'm sorry, but if you see your sister, you want to be an orthopedic reader, a real sister is such a creature.) )
But the annoying character traits of these characters are also derived from reality.
You can carefully analyze that Huang Mao and his cousin are typical uneducated bear children, even if they have very successful parents, but their busy parents lack discipline for them, and when they are older and want to enhance their relationship, they will only use money to make up for it.
In the end, the children who are educated are such domineering personalities, because they feel that their parents owe them and how much trouble they have caused their parents have the obligation to settle for them, and I believe that there will be more or less similar characters around everyone.
On the contrary, although the protagonist Quartz has an ordinary family background, and his parents are a little picky and cheesy in love with vanity, they do not let go of their children's education, he is a good child who is educated, polite, grateful, and wants to share responsibilities for the family.
Talking about the protagonist in his book feels like he is boasting...
Shame on you
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Finally, let's talk about the next stage.
I'm sorry~~~ I'm sorry, Quartz has to wait a while if you want to enter the idol life, so don't be impatient.
In the second stage, it will leave the stage of Xiangcheng, and Quartz will also subdue two new elves, namely the water system and the ghost system, and they are not popular favorites, and no one even writes about them on the whole network...
You can guess, there is no prize for guessing correctly.
Finally, at the end, I beg all readers to stop embarrassing the cat...
Legend has it that the wind speed dog came out of the egg, the timid personality evolved into a Y spray, and the blue-black egg is Lucario, and you've all finished talking about these stalks, and guessed right (in fact, it's not right), how will I write it later!
Storm Cry! (१д१)