Testimonials at the end of the volume
This is the end of the third volume.
In fact, according to the original assumption, there are still about three events in the third stage of the schedule after halftime, and the fourth stage of the schedule, with a plot of about 80,000 words, including the old era planetarium standing alone in the endless clouds and the alchemy puppet that is on the verge of damage and just wants to see the starry sky again, trapped by the "Kraken" in the swamp, and has to sing through the "Kraken Island", as well as the robbers who meet the wasteland, the boss's ability is the movie commentary, As long as the ability is explained, it will be in an invincible state.
These plots are mainly used to describe Bai Ge and Bamboo Frost, as well as Wilbur's interaction, to enrich the characters, in the initial plan, Wilbur is indeed at the end of his life, so he chose to burn his life to carry out a big adventure that is enough to be remembered by the world.
But then I thought that dragging it was not a solution, so I directly accelerated and skipped it.
This book should end there.
I mentioned it in the group before.,Now let's briefly talk about the plot after that.。
In the fourth volume of [The Fraudster], Bai Ge's name is Lewis Carroll, that is, the author of "Alice in Wonderland", in addition to being a fairy tale writer, he is also a mathematician who is proficient in cryptography, and the abilities corresponding to the name include [Cheshire Cat's Smile], which can disappear into thin air, avoiding all perceptions, and [Mad Hatter's Invitation], that is, the power of a fairy tale that turns lies into reality, and of course, the ability to become bigger and smaller for a short time, in addition, Bai Ge's realm will be upgraded, and two modes will appear, When you are in the realm of other people, you are a [Trojan Horse of Contrarian Reason], and you can take the initiative to open it is a [Crazy Tea Party], which can make your personality mask affect others, so that the underlying logic in the field is distorted, and the ability to defraud is also a derivative of this field.
The story of the fourth volume is that Bai Ge helped the trapped rich lady escape, disguised as a gentleman who fell in love with her at first sight, and haunted various high-class banquets, this young lady's matter should appear in the news of the second volume as early as possible, Bai Ge proposed that the two pretend to be lovers, transfer the property to him, and then the pseudo-** Lipier died and successfully escaped.
OSTENSIBLY, IT WAS THE THIEF JOKER WHO TRIED TO STEAL THE HOLY ALLIANCE'S ARTWORK, BUT IN FACT, IT WAS A PLOY BY BAI GE TO FIND A HIDDEN ABYSS RELIC FROM HIS MOTHER THAT THE HOLY ALLIANCE HAD HIDDEN.
IN THIS VOLUME, LOVE AND BAMBOO FROST WILL JOIN HANDS AND APPEAR AS A SUPPORT FOR THE PAST CONFRONTATION WITH THE MONSTER THIEF JOKER IN THE SUMMER, AND ON THE HOLY ALLIANCE'S SIDE, THERE WILL BE A SHERLOCK HOLMES NAME RAIDER WHO WILL PLAY A BATTLE OF WITS AND COURAGE WITH THE MONSTER THIEF JOKER BETWEEN SEVERAL THEFTS AND BANQUETS, AND AT THE SAME TIME, YESTERDAY THE ORDER WAS ALSO SECRETLY ARRANGED, PREPARING TO MAKE BIG NEWS.
In the end, under the attention of the world, Bai Ge deceived everyone and stole the abyss relics, yesterday the Order appeared at this time, trying to reproduce the tragedy of Jingjiang, and it was revealed at this time, it turned out that the name attacker of Sherlock Holmes was disguised by Bai Ge, and he was controlled and hidden, Bai Ge and others successfully prevented the tragedy from happening and saved the city, and then, because he stole the abyss relics, he was designated as a major crime by the Inquisition, the arrogance of the seven deadly sins, Dawn Qing, "hijacked" Love and Frost fled to the far north, and Elifer gained the freedom she wanted most, and the entire Holy Alliance began to think about the meaning of faith because of what they saw.
In the fifth volume [Heresy], Bai Ge's name is the abyss relic stolen from the previous volume, a photo, the name is [Solvay Conference], that is, the photo left by the meeting where all the world's influential scholars gathered in Brussels. The ability [God's dice] corresponding to the name can force the impossible to become possible, manipulate the probability, [Schrödinger's cat] manipulates the invisible in the shadows, creates something out of nothing, erases existence, [selection delay], can calibrate the result in a certain way in advance, so that things that have not yet happened develop towards the predetermined ending, etc., in a nutshell, it is [small-scale miracle].
The plot of the fifth volume is that the contestants of the [Marathon], at the invitation of Alexander Paplovich, Bai Ge went to the extreme north, the capital of the extreme north, the Kremlin. It is a city built in the middle of the abyss, and it is the front line of humanity's fight against the abyss. Alexander's purpose was to compete for the throne.
The royal families of the Far North all think that the emperor is dying of old age, stupid, and difficult to suppress the process of abyssalization, everyone is ready to move, some of the royal families are even ready to carry out revolution, the prime minister focuses on research, it looks cruel and ruthless, yesterday the Order is even more ready to wait for the opportunity to create chaos, in this case, Alexander wants to use the power of Bai Ge, who has become a demigod, to ascend to the throne and bring the Far North to a better future.
The focus of this volume is the exploration of the abyss, the embodiment of the abyss with different affixes, including the previously mentioned [abundance], in the exploration of this abyss, there will be white songs and love, and the "child" of the bamboo frost is the product of erosion by the power of the abyss, anyway, it is biased towards easy and interesting exploration, and then you will meet the Dmitry at the beginning of the first volume, he is named [Fenrir], and at the same time, he is also one of the emperor's sons.
At the end of the fifth volume, the fact that the emperor of the extreme north is trapped on the throne is because of the mission of his position, the emperor of the extreme north must be promoted to the seventh rank, and then use himself as fuel to curb the spread of abyssalization, the extreme north is the first line against the abyss, and choosing to inherit the throne means that he has chosen to sacrifice himself and inherit the throne, and his fire will be ignited, and the lighthouse of the Kremlin is the most dazzling light in the eternal dark abyss.
After that, the abyssal erosion intensified under the influence of yesterday's order, the emperor of the far north burned out his last life, the bell rang, the fire was about to be extinguished, and the king was gone, countless abyssal monsters attacked the Kremlin, and the whole city resisted desperately, "Although the far north is big, we have no way to retreat, because behind us is the Kremlin", at the most critical moment, the ascenders from all over the world arrived, Dmitry chose to be promoted to the seventh order, took the emperor's place, burned himself, and the lighthouse shone on the abyss again.
The sixth volume, The Fire Stealer, is untitled, and is mainly an exploration and puzzle solving after the Abyss Invasion, explaining questions such as what the sun is now overhead if the starry sky is false.
The essence of the Great Collapse is not an ordinary nuclear war, but the human beings at that time predicted that the planet would be affected by interstellar disasters, and took away all the resources on the planet and around the planet.
His corpse is the [Night Sky], his blood is the crimson sea of the shallow sea, and the rainbow of ascension is the fragment of [Night Sky], which is why the ascender will have the stars in the night, the essence of several archetypes is his personality mapping, and the purpose of the chain of ascension is to cultivate new gods with history that has not yet been extracted by humans, take over the burning torch, and turn into the sun to shine on the world.
Bai Ge's mother, Bai Lu, is indeed a time-traveler, she has traveled from modern times to this era, relying on her understanding of history to upgrade at the speed of light, after becoming a sixth-order, Bai Lu learned this fact, she knows that when she becomes a seventh-order person, she will burn herself and turn into a scorching sun, and before that, several seniors have taken over this torch.
Therefore, when the sun was about to go out, Bai Lu chose to burn herself so that her children could see the dawn.
Where the sun shines, Bai Ge can feel Bai Lu's gaze, which is the warmth of "mother".
The real fire thief is not stealing the flame of the gods' charity, but the one who uses himself as firewood to ignite the eternal night of civilization.
Finally, in order to avoid the next catastrophe, humanity worked together to break through the false starry sky, bid farewell to the cradle that gave birth to itself, ushered in the end of childhood, and stepped towards the real stars.
By the way, in the ending CP, Bamboo Frost gave birth to two, after all, the alchemy puppet will not get pregnant, but anyway, the child has two mothers, and they are all spoiled, as for what "I want to lick your ball joints", as well as the use of pheromone play, I won't mention it.
Anyway, that's all for the book.
Because the results of this book are really not good, there are one or two hundred posthumously, and there are not many high-end books, in short, there are no new readers, and old readers can't be retained, and the recommendations on it have also been on, but I still can't get up, and I can't even say that the future can be expected, it's the problem of the book itself, which reflects my lack of level and ability, plus some things at home, I may need to work harder to make more money, so I chose this way to end.
Originally, I also thought about double opening, but first of all, the starting point is not very allowed to double open, all kinds of benefits are not supported, this book benefits full attendance adds up to more than the subscription money, and my time and energy do not allow me to double open.
Everyone has also seen it, although some friends persuaded me to write a makeshift ending, but the plot behind is a bit much, about a million words, it is impossible to end in just a few chapters, but the general framework, the important plot I know in my heart, it can only be like this, if you really close a bad ending, don't talk about me, can you accept it?
Although there is also a saying that I will put it aside for the time being and wait until I finish writing the rest before continuing, to be honest, I can tell you as a writer that 99% of this statement will not come back and continue to write, and I don't want to lie to people, so I'm so honest.
In the future, I may not write this kind of book that is contrary to the taste of mainstream reading, and I will not consider it very much.
I summarized it myself.,What I'm best at writing is to pave the way according to the mode of the unit drama.,The collection of short stories that finally broke out.,Including chasing the better principal.,Within the range of the best grades.,It's all this mode.,This book is essentially an expansion of the unit drama.,The whole is to end up with the explosion at the end of the end.,And then there's going to be a shortcoming.。
In addition to some common shortcomings,There is also the connection between events and events,The concatenation of the sense of expectation is not enough.,This is actually something in every book.,Don't talk about the bones.,The results are a little better than this one.,The principal himself has a history of science.,Intercepting fragments from history is actually a clever way.,And then station B is the subject matter to take advantage.,But it's not very good to be in the back.,Within the range is the difference in reading experience between short stories and long stories.,Of course,That book is a weak gold finger., Therefore, there is a lack of an upgrade and harvest link, and it is easy to lose the catch-up.
And then this one is even more inflated 233, the protagonist is non-crossing, no obvious gold finger, pure story drives the plot, and the editor told me at the time that there was a high probability of hitting the street, and I said I wanted to try, and that's it.
To put it simply, I don't know how to irrigate......
So it leads to an event.,Three or five chapters are finished.,Points like pretending to be forced haven't expanded a lot.,The foreshadowing will be a little thin.,And then it's a weak gold finger from the principal.,Station B has no upgrade line directly.,The range is all supported by the story.,Dense stories lead to reading fatigue.,Readers are tired.,The author is also tired.,Many books may progress one event a week.,My side may have several a week.,I need to think about more interesting plots that don't repeat routines.。
This kind of writing is actually not suitable for online texts.,What the online article needs is a stable daily update and the accumulation of the number of words.,Every time you write to the middle and back paragraphs,There will be a feeling of inadequacy.,It's a plot.,The normal way to expand is A.,But in fact, you can also think about it.,Use BCDF and other ways to expand.,But considering the update.,And I don't want to hydrology.,In the end, it's probably to expand in the way of A and add something.。
I'm not a full-time author.,The code words are basically after work.,Think about the plot when you go to work.,Use sticky notes to record some inspiration or something.,It's okay to work normally.,When you're busy, it may take one or two o'clock at night to write 4,000 words.,There's less time to revise and carve and check for omissions... Forget it, that's not really the point.
Anyway, having said all this, I don't know how many people can see here, because I have caused everyone to have a bad reading experience, so I'm very sorry.
I sent the new book directly.,I chose at least the first and middle of the Tokyo supernatural theme that I can control.,Of course,Recently, many old authors have overturned in the subject matter they are good at.,I hope I don't......
The title of the new book is "Tokyo Foodie", so you should be able to search it directly.
By the way, this book has a monthly pass plus a change, a recommendation ticket plus a change, and an alliance leader plus a total of eleven changes...... Let's pay back the next book, if you still want to continue reading it......
Chasing serials is actually very similar to watching vtb.,Always thinking about watching slices and selections.,Finally, I didn't react until V graduated.,I hope everyone can still chase the book they like.,At least if you chase it, you can scold me as a eunuch like now.。
Finally, thank you for your continued support, I couldn't present this story in its entirety, it was my lack of ability, it was like depicting a dream, but it didn't bring it to reality, but pierced it in general, very unwilling, but also helpless, very realistic.
I'm sorry.