Grumpy old brother, online education.

If you feel unwell, please quit.

Don't say much, just spray directly.

Last night, a book friend posted such a post in the book review area.

"Anatomy? The author I want to curse.。。。 Dissecting dead bodies, I have no opinion, but isn't the dissection of a living person a little inhumane, and is the protagonist of the dungeon world too mature? From a novice who has not been deeply involved in the world, he has suddenly become a business tycoon who has turned his hands and rain, is this turn a bit too big? ”

I habitually opened the writer's assistant to prepare to explain, but the more I looked at the id, the more familiar it became, and then I remembered that in the previous chapter, this is the real grumpy brother.

After I turned to the previous chapter, I remembered that I had posted such a screenshot in the old group a month ago.

Ask the group friends, are people so angry now? I don't know how many people can see it, but I can definitely find it by looking through the group chat history.

There is also the ID and avatar of the book friend.

At that time, it seemed that a few casual words passed, but this book friend still left a deep impression on me.

Because the first one to shout Tu Cun and Father X in this chapter seems to be the first.

And I said this for two chapters in a row, so it's hard not to be impressed.

I was surprised, but I didn't say much. After all, the anger on the Internet is inherently heavy, and most of the villagers are portrayed by me as ignorant villains, and being able to say such things shows that I portrayed them in place.

For the time being, it's okay to be a "grumpy" compliment.

Later, I saw that many people also liked it, or other suggestions.

After all, this is a two-dimensional book, and the reader's age is younger than other types, and his emotions are more susceptible to infection, bias, etc., which can also be understood.

I was thinking, should I write something darker?

Later, I half-whitewashed the gods, and made it very clear, and some of the older ones may understand more deeply, and I agree more with their views.

The god lord has already made it very clear that Yaeji is just following his old path again. When the god lord was young, he wanted to save his sister, but unfortunately he didn't have the combat power of Yaeji.

From some of the details, it can also be seen that the gods still love their children very much, but since the death of the previous generation of shrine maidens, his heart has died.

Like the book friend 'Qingmei Xiang Freedom', my views and his views are highly overlapping, and his comments are also extremely good.

"I didn't have a choice before, and I don't have a choice now."

And what about our grumpy book buddy? I typed out his comments in the comment area, but I couldn't post them at all!

What did he comment on?

Volume 1, Chapter 48 might as well leave

Text: This strange atmosphere lasted for about five minutes, and the hoarse voice of the Yae God Lord came: "Let's talk? ”

A book friend: Talk about your MB, you have to die!

It's still understandable.,After all, it hasn't started to be whitewashed yet.,After the next chapter of the god is half-whitewashed,Qingmei book friends said my favorite sentence at the moment.,That's what was it before......

And then Chapter 49 Everyone will finally become the person they hate the most

The last sentence of the text: "After all, this is my home." ”

A book friend commented: Come back with a hammer, and the next time you come back will be when you slaughter the whole village! If the author writes the protagonist as a virgin, he will be sprayed directly!

It should be this sentence, I took a screenshot and sent it to the old group, and asked all book friends jokingly, are people so angry now?

Then I was extremely impressed with him, which directly caused the scene where I exploded emotionally and sprayed directly.

The first one says he's a bar! It was my emotional explosion at the time, and I just thought of the previous three chapters describing the beast tide, less than 7,000 words, and the portrait of five people.

That's when I was an instant explosion! I was out having dinner with friends and almost dropped my phone.

After all, it's the same person.,Destiny starts.,Reward dungeons and the like have been said many times.。

The language mastery + efficient learning buff also appears at least three times in the text.

The protagonist comes up with the beginning of the Mandate of Heaven, a United Statesman, who has a large amount of shares left to him by his parents, and then sells them logically and becomes a start-up capital.

Those chapters are really dry.,It's still that sentence.,This is a fan.,I'm going to write a detailed business war.,I don't have to guess that someone will jump out and criticize me.,Say what you wrote? Is this still a Tokyo meow?

So I checked a lot of information, the subprime mortgage crisis in the United States in 07, Wall Street's "empty god" John, and the collapse of two large mortgage groups, which led to the direct impact of many funds, and the Federal Reserve bailed out the market......

During the financial crisis, Citigroup's shares plummeted, and most of the world's financial markets mourned.

Note! By this time, Yaeki had been in this world for a year! It is emphasized in the text that in addition to exercising, sleeping, and eating, he has been in the buff of efficient learning and constantly absorbing knowledge.

For Yaeji with a "portable mother", that is not a problem at all, as long as you sleep, you will know which company will fall tomorrow and how much it will fall! If you can't make money like this, it's really a bad deal!

There are not a few financial giants who started in the financial crisis, and others can become legends, why can't Yaeji, who can "predict 100% correctly"?

I tried to condense every detail as much as possible, including Yaeki in the office in '09, and the assistant Christine entered, saying that the Financial Crisis Investigation Committee came to investigate or something!

Don't think I'm making it up! There really is this organization in reality! The Wall Street "Empty God" is the object of their investigation.

I think I've focused on all the details, and it's impossible to even miss any places, acquisitions, talents, etc., as much as possible, so as not to say that I am water.

In the last book, I am sorry for the name of "big water ratio" (funny) if I don't write dozens of chapters during the financial crisis.

As a result, I spent so much time and researched so much information, what did I get in exchange?

"The change of character is too fast."

"It's ripening too fast."

okok！ For such chapters, everyone has the habit of jumping to read, even if the details are in place, brush and turn a few pages, my mother, when is the protagonist so awesome?

In fact, most people are too busy to take care of themselves during the financial crisis, which is the best time to make a fortune in a typical muffled voice! Because at this time, it is almost impossible to have the capital of the bull pen to do it to you, because they can't finish their own business.

By the time they have their hands freed, the protagonist's business empire has taken shape.

And the protagonist invests in most emerging industries, since the money is fast, what is the Internet like in 08?

After that, the protagonist focuses on the research of biological laboratories, and it is unlikely to involve the interests of large consortia.

Spoiler alert, behind Citi there is an old conglomerate with heavy assets represented by Morgan.

Yae Ji also got on the boat.

I have said many times in the article that Citi will pave the way for the future.

But this is after all, how cool is it naturally, if I am focusing on describing business wars, how many people will watch it?

can be brushed aside, not much bb, all kinds of details are taken care of, the time span is okay, and you don't know what the protagonist has experienced in the past three years.

For this situation, it is the author who says it, how round it is, can be rounded, after all, this is his book.

That's all, I'll say a word about the construction site bar! I don't think it's an exaggeration.

I believe that book friends from old books know what kind of person I am, except for the time when I was very busy in college, and I didn't give it three months of intermittent updates, everything else was normal.

I'm not such a stubborn person, I've been writing for more than a year, there are people who disagree, there are people who leave silently, and there are people who support me to the end.

But all the book friends who can see it and support the genuine version, which post I haven't explained below?

Values and worldviews are different, so naturally you can't be friends, as the so-called better to forget about each other, hahaha, that's right.

Let's talk about this one! During the free period, most of the "author's words" I explained, and even wrote it again and again for a period of time, and I still remember a book friend teasing me and said, can you not explain so much, you can understand it, and it is better to write the text if you have this time.

I laughed, but continued to write "the author's words", which was put on the shelves, and I was busy, so I didn't write much.

Finished!

I have only one word I want to express this: "! ”

In the previous dispute between Sakurabuki and Dan Sakura, I asked the official and answered after confirmation.

From the very beginning, in order to block the mouth of the setting party and leave a way back for myself, I have been saying that I will change the setting, and don't raise the bar in terms of the official settings.

That's really leaving a path for yourself, hehe.

I'm also very interested in everyone's suggestions, right? The answer of "the author's words", the thanks inside, that is not fake, right?

And then let's talk about the world of meows.

I've seen a lot of the same people.,It's either CCG or meow.,Fight! If you watch too much, you will get bored! Boring!

I wanted to write something different, to my liking, as I explained at the beginning. Otherwise, I wouldn't have opened a fandom about Honkai when the popularity of Honkai was declining.

The same period as me has entered the high-quality products, and the results of this book are still sparse, so it is not interesting to say this.

Hawkers,I'll admit that there are some places where the logic is a little problematic.,It's my fault.,I didn't take care of it enough.,But with my IQ.,There's no good way.,So let's go down.。

I can't do the rhythm of the five chapters of the great god's contradictions, ten chapters of small climaxes, and twenty chapters of big climaxes. The vast majority of writers can't do it.

But I can barely have a little climax in more than twenty chapters, right? Write something that will make your book friends smile.

Get down to business.

Meow, also known as ghouls, is said to have originated in the Middle East and feed on people, and from a human point of view, they are out-and-out evil monsters.

They are not people! In the body of my text, the vast majority of them are replaced by "it".

To put it bluntly, if the ghouls depicted in Tokyo are all the ugly and weird characters of the legends, then almost everyone will not say "it's the fault of the world" or anything like that, and humanity will be absolutely righteous! Because they're destroying monsters!

But in Tokyo, all of them are handsome or beautiful, no different from people.

And then as soon as the story is rendered, it naturally becomes "It's all the world's fault." ”

It doesn't feel right, you touch your chest and ask yourself, is that so? If the meow is really ugly, even if there is a story, it is still not the fault of the world?

People, pay attention to the point of appearance, I think I can see it quite thoroughly. Don't talk about the connotation for me, you can't even look at your appearance, who will understand your connotation? Do you really think you're Ma Yunbaba?

Right, after all, I'm ugly, and I have a lot of say in that.

Then, I read that in this chapter, there are disagreements.

There are human beings who are supreme, and there are also people who are forced to do so, and it is the fault of the world.

To be honest, at the beginning, I wanted to completely exterminate the mew with biological weapons. Don't be a bar here! It's really easy!

If you throw an earthling into another world, he may die quickly, because unfamiliar germs can easily disintegrate the immune system in the human body.

If aliens come to our earth, a cold can kill them.

Am I right? I don't know the squeak of the student figure (funny)

Oh, alas, that's it, don't blow RC so godly, it's also a shame that they're in an alternate world. In reality, they can all be turned into experiments in minutes.

Go on!

God Dai Lishi! Elegant and intellectual purple-haired beauty! In fact, it is a big man who has a crazy appetite for humans!

In the Tokyo mew, after it was got by Dr. Jia He, that miserable appearance, my mother, is even more cruel than what I said before, right?

What about here in Yaeji? The treatment is so good that it can't be done?

There are many details described in the text, and some book friends should be able to see that Kamidai Riyo is actually looking forward to the arrival of Yaeji.

Because her consciousness is not as vague as in the original book, but has always been in a normal state.

Keep you locked in a nutrition pod until someone comes in after a few days, and when you can't escape, do you want to talk to him more?

Spoilers are covered below.

For the sake of balance and coolness, coupled with personal selfishness, it is very likely that Shendai Lishi will suffer from Stockholm disease.

......

After the deception of the taste buds and the manufacture of food, I am already trying to balance the points of the two factions, otherwise I am not more comfortable writing an extreme?

Or all the seeds will be wiped out, or there will be a savior.

The outline is OK, saying that Kavin is not carded, and saying that Kavin is also stuck.

It's just that this balance point is not easy to grasp, and it is very fucked.

Back to business.

Did I do a live autopsy? Is the meow a human? Judging from the details of the dialogue, Yaju Ji also injected anesthetics on Da Yu!

My dam, this is heaven, okay! Combined with what a book friend said before, I exploded in an instant!

Treat the half-whitewashed god so restrained, and treat the beautiful big and virgin heartbreak?

I can't say "licking" too much, right?

Others with an * sign,I'm mostly scolding the mother's server.,Friends who read books yesterday should know.,The delay is outrageously high.,I didn't send out a chapter until two hours later.。

This, I admit is my fault! I apologize! I'm sorry!

But after that, commented on in a hot post this morning! I'm not wrong at all!

I don't know, if you're idle and bored, you can go to the group to find me, and I'll just send a screenshot to tell the story! It doesn't matter if you think it's a funny incident. Isn't it just to make everyone laugh in exchange for some subscription money?

For piracy, I didn't even spray it, and I directly deleted the post and banned a set of words and took it away, which should be very clear to the non-chief.

It's because this book friend impressed me so much!

This is no longer a collision with the muzzle of the gun, this is a direct rush into the barrel of the gun!

?? Man, my fault! I sincerely apologize! I'm sorry!

But after that, I'm not wrong at all, don't tell me to be angry. This is completely a thing that the world view is different from the values, and it belongs to the irreconcilable category!

How many lovers have broken up like this, not to mention netizens.

Living people and meow seeds, I can say that he took things out of context, but there is no need for that.

The grumpy writer is so grumpy that he can comment on it for the time being.

Afternoon...... It should be updated normally.,Hot posts will be deleted after three days.,That's where the conversation stops.。

Good bye.