Summary at the end of the volume
Finally finished writing the first volume, and it can be regarded as a personal attempt, with more than 300,000 words to bury the thread, wiring, and finally tighten all the clues within a few chapters, and break out, of course, for such reasons, so many readers in the early stage will say that there is a lack of enough cool points and explosive points, too much daily life, too much foreshadowing, etc., so the current results are not very good, that is, not as good as the previous books, haha.
But overall, I was still confident in my plot when I wrote it, and readers who could see the end should be quite satisfied.
The first volume was actually supposed to be called the Nameless, but then I thought about it, and the protagonist was soon promoted to the Strange Thief, and it was better to be a Strange Thief, after all, the frontispiece was practical and okay for the Strange Thief.
The theme I want to show in this volume is actually very simple, that is, ordinary and forbearant ordinary people on weekdays, at critical moments, can also die generously for the sake of justice, and it is not one or two heroes who save the world, but more unknown people.
Based on this idea, I will add some down-to-earth and ordinary attributes to the members of the Abyss Relic Affairs Division, such as Fan Zhe's daughter control, Tao Xuanran is a little mean and a little stingy, so as to be a teacher, Lao Huo looks like a family uncle, Tian Hong and his family, and he also goes to work to make money from time to time.
Because I've seen a lot before, similar urban abilities, members of the secret organization, it seems that they don't have their own lives except for ability fights and some gags, but I think these transcendents are still ordinary people in addition to being extraordinary, with their own friends and family, and their favorite things, rather than simply extraordinary combat tools, so I will use the pen and ink that many people think is water to describe Tian Hong's family, Tao Xuanran's student, Fan Zhe's daughter, in fact, it is precisely because of writing these existences, That's why they fought for it and died for it.
The preface actually comes from Kennedy's speech "We Choose to Walk the Moon", in which the president, who was later assassinated, impassionedly stated the reasons for the moon landing, and this is the sentence that we choose, not because they were easy, but because of their difficulties, which I think is very appropriate for this volume, in terms of characters, themes, and plots.
I have always believed in the people's heroic view of history, several important events in the current outline of this book, but also more reflect the power of the people, so, this volume does not have the protagonist to kill the Quartet, he is not even the most important savior, what really makes civilization survive in the face of natural disasters is the sacrifice and dedication of ordinary people, these people are the real heroes, I believe that after these things this year, everyone should also have a deep understanding.
From the way of writing,I try to maintain the staggered technique of daily and non-daily,Many people think that daily life is not interesting,I think it's useless to portray supporting roles.,I just want to see the protagonist shine.,I can understand this.,So I put most of my daily life in the free chapter.,I also control the theme of each daily paragraph.,For example, the chapter where the collector came from afar by train.,At first glance, you may think it's just a chapter where the water character appears.,But in fact, everyone knows how to do it later.,My idea is not to write useless daily life., All the daily plots either create characters, or promote the plot, or explain the setting, there are traces to follow, of course, after the end of this plot, it is almost impossible for Bai Ge to return to that leisurely daily life, but I will try to use other methods to make the transition between events more joyful and relaxed.
Of course, because of the intermediate grades, some daily life was deleted, such as wanting to write the plot of love and Bai Ge and Xu Lao Huo meeting their parents for dinner together to deepen the character design of the promise, but it was deleted in order to speed up the pace, and the interaction of the characters in some affairs departments is also slightly flat, and there is not enough space to shape.
The first volume as a whole I wrote in accordance with a suspenseful structure.,Inadvertently put clues,Pull the characters,Foreshadowing the conspiracy,Finally, the reversal detonates.,To be honest, it's more of a test of the outline.,It's also a test of some details of the processing.,I'm a person.,It's easy to ignore the details when you write for a while.,It's rough to write.,So it's better to put this kind of fine homework at the beginning.。
Alas,Actually, it's not that I won't write the kind of little white.,Cool point is more intensive.,For example, this book I conceived before that the entry point is that the protagonist has obtained the ability of the monster thief.,Test it in class.,The eraser that was supposed to steal the desktop turned out to steal the ** of the girl at the front table.,And then confess that the monster thief JOKER has become famous.,Love transferred over.,Actually, it's to catch the monster thief JOKER.,The two people are on the surface of the school routine.,In fact, various cases are fighting wits and courage.,Finally, the big event was solved together., The protagonist sets up a secret organization to contain the relics of the abyss behind the scenes, which is more joyful, cooler, and simpler, and may have a much better result than now, but in the end I still chose the current way of unfolding, because I think it is more suitable for the tone of the whole book.
Therefore, when writing about daily life, I did not use the exaggerated technique of the previous book, and tried to be restrained, because if it is too off-line and spoofed in the early stage, it will be even more unacceptable if the atmosphere changes in the later stage.
In terms of roles, there are actually a few points.
The first is Chen Chuchuan's point, writing about him is to have a police officer who has been played by strange thieves to set off, and the other is to write about the attitudes and feelings of ordinary people in the face of transcendent events, as well as the feeling of "at least someone remembers".
The second is the bamboo frost, I actually like this role very much, it is precisely because I like it, so I will give her suffering to let it grow, at the beginning, she was just a carefree little rich woman, innocent and cheerful, friendly to anyone, honest and careful with her own thoughts, but later, from the beginning of Bai Ge's matter, she became a little "bad", with a girl's mind, and later, the family suffered an accident, collapsed, and was encouraged to redeem by Bai Ge, such a girl, what will happen after entering the Abyss Relic Affairs Division, I'm also looking forward to it, if Bai Ge is the bright line that everyone uses to substitute and watch the story, then the bamboo frost is a dark line, so she is also one of the protagonists.
The last is love.,At the beginning of my conception,She's a bad woman like Markima who plays with the protagonist in the palm of her hand.,But then I think about it, maybe most people can't accept it.,It's become the current setting.,Strong on the surface.,Possessive.,In fact, I trust Bai Ge wholeheartedly.,Routines are also routines.,In fact, if you follow this setting.,Love is actually a blood-derived puppet lady.,And bamboo frost is a fireproof girl.,It's hard to choose.。
The second volume,Drawing on the experience of the first volume,First of all, it will highlight some of the protagonist's actions.,Pretend to be a point or something.,After all, it's an assassin.,It's definitely going to be assassinated or something.,Secondly, there should be some changes in the structure.,Maybe there will be some "historical reproduction" to some extent (laughs.,The current impression is similar to Batman's dark knight's texture of acting in the shadows of the chaotic Sin City.,But the specific difference should be quite big.,It may be closer to the academy stream.,At the same time, some reasoning stalks will be introduced.。
As well as more of the character's particularity, the shaping of the sense of anticipation, showing more events driven by the protagonist's personal will, and may also join a chat group, similar to the design of the protagonist's more interaction with the world.
Anyway, the second volume is Bai Ge embarking on the road of revenge alone, and the strong man is gone, which is also a historical reappearance.
As for love and bamboo frost, they will appear in a special way in the second volume, so let's develop Bai Ge first.
Well, the name of the second volume is [Assassin].
Finally,Thank you readers for your subscription,Reward,Vote for support,Tomorrow at noon at twelve o'clock normal update,Well,I should take the rhythm of three thousand words a chapter after that,Two more guarantees a day,Converted to three chapters of two thousand words,Because the introduction and closing of the chapter is really a waste of words,So weigh it,Three thousand word chapters are more appropriate,Of course,To the climax at the end of the volume for the sake of reading coherence,It may take the form of a large chapter.,Look at it then.。
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