Ask for leave and talk about what is in your heart

This book was my first book, and to be honest I knew I wasn't very good at it, and this book also told me with grades that I didn't write well.

Although there are a lot of collections, but there are almost no subscriptions, and now there are less than 40 book friends who read updates every day, and only these book friends support me in 15,000 collections, and I am very grateful to them, but the more outstanding results are really miserable.

I have also reflected on the reasons for the poor performance of this book, most of them are written too much, and there is no main outline, the protagonist is too big to open and hang, resulting in no sense of crisis, and the world set is too harmonious, resulting in no contradictory development... All of these are mistakes made by newbies!

Originally, I read a lot of books and my taste was too much, so I thought that one was not so routine, and it could be regarded as one for myself.

That's why I set the church to be the righteous side, and the working environment of the Security Bureau is very warm, and the teammates I met are all good and evil, and they all rely on it, and now it seems that it is a failure.

The protagonist's hanging is a bit big.,It's so big that I can't control it myself.,I'm afraid that the upgrade will be too fast.,Cause the book to collapse directly.,So I've been dragging him back in the back.,But the book still collapsed.。

To be honest, if I were the protagonist, I would directly bribe Meng Qi and kill in the nightmare world, and I would become a god without a month.

This is also because the author set up this system at the time, and he didn't use his brain at all, and he went straight to it, so now I'm scrapped.

In fact, at the beginning of this book, I wanted to write about the extreme flow, just like the first world of the great mysterious journey, because I really like the coolness of fists to the flesh, and I think that is the romance of a real man.

But after writing two sheets, I found that I couldn't write at all, and the author's own pen power was too rubbish, and the battle description was too vegetable, so I gave up this idea.

At that time, because I was watching the transcendent dawn and the master of the secret witch, I liked the style of the mysterious stream, so it was like rubbing the heat, so it was written in the current world background.

As it turned out, although my idea was good, it really couldn't be written, because I rarely watched Western movies and rarely understood Western culture, so all kinds of depictions were dry and completely failed to achieve the steampunk idea I wanted.

Not to mention that I set the background to the scientific and technological level of World War II, to be honest, I didn't know much about the development of science and technology during that period, and it was very uncomfortable to write, and even had to look up information while writing, which took a lot of time, and the effect was not good.

This book is actually planned to be written to a million words, because the author group often says that a million must be gods, so this is also a miss!

But I really can't stick to it now, and I have to write my graduation thesis at the beginning of the school year, and I am about to graduate and find a job, which will take up a lot of my energy, so there is no point in continuing to write.

However, this is not a eunuch's testimonial, because this month's full attendance award has not been received, so I will continue to write it down this month (dog head), as for next month, it may not be, but I will definitely apply for it after completing the book.

I'll talk about the rest of my thoughts when I finish this testimonial!

I am very grateful to those book friends who supported me, thank you very much!!