Taking the time to read the opinions of readers, I found that there were many problems, not with my outline, but with the problems that I could not describe.

For example, the main line is not clear, the main line has always been very clear, I want to get rid of my sister to practice in the Vajra Sect, I think of the central continent to cultivate immortals, and the protagonist also has an ideal goal of a successful person who has been pointed out from the beginning, to become stronger and become the head, and marry Bai Fumei or something......

As a result, many people still say that there is no main line, and I have to go back and add details.

There's also the problem that the protagonist has no brains.,It's different from what I set.,The protagonist is very smart.,Some of the previous details should be that I didn't handle it well to have this illusion.,Or I'm not smart enough.。

There is also the problem that Shen Qianshuang is an adopted daughter, and there are still many people who don't know that she is not related to the male protagonist (͒˶ ́⚇'˵)͒, it should be that I didn't write it clearly enough.

There's also the problem that the plot is too bland.,I have this cool point.,It's just that I didn't describe it well, so it was boring.,I have to see if there's a way to strengthen it.。

So I'm revising it today to see if I can strengthen these details, which won't affect the plot, so you don't have to re-watch it.

Finally, thank you again for your comments, although I will not change the outline, but it still gives me a lot of inspiration.

I'm sorry if it causes any inconvenience.,I'll let you see my wife Rem.,Apologize.,You can see the starting point of pulling to the back.,QQ reading doesn't know if it's okay.。

"This man is obviously very strong, but he is asked to marry" ask for leave to change the opening loophole is in the hand, please wait a moment,

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