Xiao Yuan has always been a very efficient person.

Now that Su Yinmeng has given her such an "after-school homework", of course she will complete it as soon as possible.

In recent years, many creators have more or less procrastination, and some creators can't write anything before the "dead line" of the deadline, which makes editors have a headache.

An author like Xiao Yuan, who is obedient and can complete the work in the first time, can definitely be regarded as a conscientious author.

A new concept essay, of course, takes more time than an 800-word ordinary essay in the examination room, and the submission requirement is no more than 5,000 words, so at least three or four thousand words must be written.

Xiao Yuan doesn't think there is anything difficult about such a word count requirement, on the contrary, such a word count is more suitable for her to play.

In the evening self-study of the second day, after completing the homework of other subjects on this day, Xiao Yuan began to write this new concept essay called "Wandering Orphans".

The material for this essay is, of course, from herself, her childhood was spent in wandering, and the feeling of struggling to survive can be described very real and moving.

As for how she became an orphan, of course, it was because of human traffickers, but she was not abducted, but sold directly to human traffickers by her family.

In the world where she used to be, the misery of the people at the bottom is really not something that people in this technological world can imagine.

However, the background of Xiao Yuan's article is naturally modern society, and no one can deny that there are no human traffickers and no street children in modern society, right?

Xiao Yuan's essay depicts her life experience from the perspective of a homeless orphan.

If other students are allowed to write about it, no matter how talented they are, they can only write about the wandering orphans they imagined, and as for how miserable the wandering orphans are, they can only fantasize out of thin air.

Perhaps journalists who focus on the disadvantaged in society can write more deeply through closer observation.

It's a pity that this can't be compared with Xiao Yuan, she can know more details, and even graft the tragic experiences of her friends who once wandered together onto the "me" in this article.

As for how the "I" in the article became a homeless orphan, of course, it was because of long-term domestic violence, which is the material of the original owner Lin Yun - Wang Xuejuan once again took the blame.

Xiao Yuan began by using objective, calm and true brushstrokes to describe how "I" suffered from domestic violence.

After a long period of beatings, verbal abuse, and abuse, "I" finally couldn't bear it one day and escaped from such a cave.

But what "I" didn't expect was that the outside world was not as beautiful as I imagined.

Ironically, "I" left without the original family taking it to heart, as if they had long hoped that "I" would get out.

After "I" felt uncomfortable for a while, I accepted it all with a sense of relief and began my wandering career.

When I'm lucky, I'm able to find leftovers that others have thrown away, and when I'm unlucky, I'm hungry.

In addition to people, I also faced stray cats and dogs, and I had to compete with them for food......

Under Xiao Yuan's depiction, everything these "I" do to fill my stomach seems so real, the picture sense is simply perfect, and the reader can even feel the rancid smell of leftovers and the rotten smell of garbage cans from her words.

However, every time "I" find food and eat it, the happiness is also so touching that anyone who reads this will feel very happy!

Xiao Yuan's wandering career is written in a bit of "Robinson Crusoe", except that Robinson is farming on an isolated island to survive, while she is surviving in a cold steel forest.

In addition to eating, of course, there is also the content of housing, from the beginning of the lack of a fixed residence, to the later settlement under the overpass, and finally because of the impact on the appearance of the city, it was evicted......

Later, "I" was targeted by the traffickers, "I" was controlled by them, and then my legs were broken because I wanted to escape, and then they also ruthlessly poked "me" in one eye, just so that "I" went to beg on the street.

After all, if you are not disabled, you will not get people's sympathy, and naturally you will not get charity from others, and human traffickers will not hesitate to exchange "my" disability for their own selfish interests.

When Xiao Yuan wrote this, she held the pen extremely hard, obviously not in a very calm mood.

However, she just took a deep breath, calmed everything down, and her optimistic and free smile appeared on her face again, and then she continued to write firmly with her concise, precise and true style.

When life is happy, write poems of despair; When life is not satisfactory, write about the joy of birth.

This is probably an article that is desperate and has a unique sense of coolness, and readers can't believe that the "wandering life of urban survival" before encountering human traffickers is actually very happy to read.

Even if "I" was disabled by human traffickers and went to beg, "I" did not have any thoughts of suicide.

"I'm more like an ugly monster, although I really want to live like a human being, but others have always treated me as a monster, but no matter what, I just want to live."

Xiao Yuan wrote here, looked at the number of words, there were almost more than 4,000 words, she originally wanted to write a positive ending in the end of the trafficking group being smashed by the police, but after thinking about it, she didn't do it.

After all, this is not an exam room essay, but a new concept essay, in the previous competition class, Mr. Su said that the judges of the new concept essay always favor those articles with regrets.

She ended up writing "I" and is still struggling to survive under the coercion of human traffickers, isn't this a regrettable youth?

Or simply write that this is not the ending, anyway, isn't the word count enough?

This kind of "abrupt stop" is also the writing skill that Xiao Yuan learned from Su Yinmeng, she only thinks that this skill is too good for the author, that is, it will make the reader not up or down, and it will be difficult to be mad.

Xiao Yuan chose to "stop abruptly", this is to live and learn.

And her article almost does not have any subjective complaints and satirical thoughts about society, but simply writes about the life of a very real wandering orphan.

No matter what others think of her article, she herself wrote it happily and smoothly anyway, making her Dao heart clearer and more transparent, which is an added bonus.

It's a pity that she still doesn't have much interest in writing, and only hopes that this new concept essay can satisfy Teacher Su.

Xiao Yuan quickly handed over the completed "composition homework" to Su Yinmeng.