Chapter 227: Look Up at the Stars!

The college entrance examination is over, and the students in the third year of high school are completely relaxed.

The teachers in the third year of high school also had a big vacation.

In a certain college entrance examination marking room, the work of marking papers is very intense.

All the materials are closed, and the online marking mode is adopted.

When marking the paper online, except for the multiple-choice answer sheet, which can directly calculate the score, all the others will be scanned to the computer by the machine, and then the teachers will revise the papers.

There will be two teachers marking each paper, and if the total score difference is too large, a third teacher will review it.

Wu Tianjing is a senior Chinese teacher, and she is responsible for the composition part of the Chinese language.

To be honest, she looked at the essays of these students, and she was already starting to have a headache.

It's not a headache in the physical sense.

It's psychological torture.

These fonts are really dazzling.

After reading too much, she really wonders if these candidates have systematically learned the correct way to write square words since they were children, and some candidates can't even read the title clearly on their test papers.

And.

These students' brains are just too big.

A definite theme was given early in the morning, but some students had to like to write something outlandish.

Rubbing her temples, she clicked on the next essay.

"I want to look up at the starry sky too"

"I've always liked to look up at the stars since I was a child, and my teacher didn't have time to write essays, so I couldn't give two more branches."

There was only such a small paragraph on the computer screen, and Wu Tianjing smiled bitterly again.

sighed.

Very generous gave two points.

In fact, she still likes this kind of test paper very much, which saves her a lot of time.

This is not because of the friendship points given, but because in the scoring criteria for Chinese composition in the college entrance examination, only the title is written, and it is true that 1 or 2 points are given for the title.

If you only write one or two sentences, it is also 1 or 2 points.

Only those that are completely blank can be rated 0 points.

Next.

Looking up at the stars on the ground

"Starry sky. This planet is all earthy yellow and has no life. With a diameter of 21,000 kilometers, hey, it actually contains the 'Star Tears Gold' vein, God help me, after devouring this planet, my strength should be able to recover to 80% of what it was before I was injured. ”

“.....”

???

The corners of Wu Tianjing's mouth twitched.

This exam was slightly better than the previous one, not only did I write the questions, but I also wrote more than 200 words.

It's just that she always feels that these few sentences seem to have been seen there, and they seem to be the introduction of a certain network.

This kid, I'm afraid I've seen too much, devouring the planet to restore strength, can this kind of thing be written in the college entrance examination?

If his parents knew about this kind of thing, they didn't know how angry they would be.

Seeing that the child could see the words clearly, she silently gave a 6 points.

"Looking up at the starry sky also needs to be down-to-earth"

"On April 24, 1970, the first artificial earth satellite, Dongfanghong-1, was successfully launched at the Jiuquan Satellite Launch Site, making China the fifth country in the world to launch a satellite."

After just reading two weird essays.

Finally, a handwritten essay paper appeared.

Slightly made her eyes light up.

The font of this test paper is very beautiful, but it faintly contains a certain majestic atmosphere, she thinks, this may be a student who has been practicing calligraphy since she was a child.

"It's an argumentative essay?"

Wu Tianjing was slightly stunned.

It's not uncommon to write argumentative essays on this topic, but so far I haven't scored highly.

After all, the subject of this topic is mainly narrative, and if it is written as an argumentative essay, most of the essays will only give examples of how hard work can be very important to success.

However, when she looked down.

But the eyes were even more strange.

The difficulties encountered in the development of the "Shenzhou" spacecraft are unimaginable to ordinary people. As a manned space vehicle, the spacecraft must first ensure the safety of astronauts, so scientists and technicians have adopted a series of new technologies to enhance the reliability of spacecraft in different states, such as environmental control and life support technologies that ensure the normal life and work of astronauts under vacuum conditions; The spacecraft is exposed to the sun and in the shadow area of the earth (which will produce a huge temperature change from more than -200 degrees Celsius to -273 degrees Celsius, ensuring that it works properly. ”

"The aerospace technology revolution has brought about the information revolution, and Professor Xin Qiang of Fudan University pointed out that in the current era when the global economy is increasingly dependent on information and information processing, as the economies of various countries change from industrialization-based to information-led, the rapid acquisition, integration and transmission of information have become the source of wealth generation."

"Looking up at the starry sky also requires a down-to-earth foot..."

What this article is about the space journey and the difficulties experienced in the space process.

If it weren't for the fact that she was in the college entrance examination marking room now, Wu Tianjing would even have a feeling that she was reading a paper.

This kind of thing, so many proper nouns, is it sure that a high school student wrote it??

The ideas are smooth, the arguments and arguments are clearly organized, starting from the launch of the first satellite by Huaxia, the length of more than 1,000 words, I don't even feel a trace of cumbersomeness when I read the whole article.

It writes about the barriers of aerospace technology, the hardships of scientific researchers, and the fact that while looking up at the starry sky, we really must be down-to-earth in order to succeed step by step.

The final conclusion is not the finishing touch, but just a very normal theme of the sublimation of the national sentiment and the development of the aerospace industry.

But!

Wu Tianjing always felt a little strange!

Moreover, she is really not good at giving a score all of a sudden!!

First of all, according to the scoring criteria, the idea of this article must be the idea of the first level, which is in line with the topic, the center is prominent, the thoughts are healthy, and the feelings are sincere.

Secondly, the expression is also a file, which meets the stylistic requirements, the structure is rigorous, the language is fluent, and the handwriting is neat.

In terms of the development level of the article, it is one of the few argumentative essays that take specific aerospace engineering as the idea and give rigorous arguments, which is an excellent argumentative essay.

No typos.

The word count is sufficient.

She was surprised to find that she couldn't find a point to deduct points!!

"This isn't an article written by a cadre from the Central Propaganda Department, right?"

Wu Tianjing observed the whole text again, and she finally found that strange feeling!!

This article, inexplicably, feels like a very orthodox propaganda article, if it doesn't appear in the examination room, it really gives people the feeling that they are reading the People's Daily.

Could it be that it is a model article for promoting aerospace arranged above???

There is one thing to say.

Looking at this kind of style, she subconsciously didn't dare to give a low score.

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