"Say, let's listen. Zhang Zhixing put on a reluctant look.

Fang Yun sighed lightly and spoke slowly, everyone thought that he was going to say something critical, and they all wanted to see how Yan Yukong reacted.

"If I have to say that there is any flaw in this poem, that is, this is the Spring Festival Literary Meeting, but his poem is like welcoming spring, inappropriate, flawed!"

As soon as Fang Yun finished speaking, laughter came and went, and Yan Yukong laughed the happiest.

Zhang Zhixing said angrily: "Where is this fault, it is completely perfunctory! The title of this poem stipulates that it is 'spring', not 'sending spring', and sending spring is a literary meeting, not a poem title." You have to be serious about the shortcomings of this poem, otherwise it is tantamount to contempt for this article!"

"Yes, I despise us old students too much, no, we must criticize!"

"You have to take a heavy mouth, this so-called flaw is simply an itch in the boots!"

Even some new students felt that Fang Yun was defending Yan Yukong.

Fang Yun looked embarrassed and said, "It's not good to do this, I've already picked out flaws, and I can't continue to pick them." Zhang Zhixing, you cover the sky with one hand at the literary meeting, be careful that I complain to the gentlemen of Chongwen Academy!"

"It's up to you to sue, but before you sue, you have to pick out Yan Yukong's fault for me!" Zhang Zhixing was confident.

Everyone felt more and more interesting, the old student forced the Void Sage to this one, and it would not be visible in the future, so everyone coaxed, demanding that Fang Yun could not avoid the important and light, and must give Wenhui an explanation.

Even some new students also followed the coaxing, and the atmosphere of the audience was extremely lively, which was more and more in line with the purpose of this cultural meeting.

Fang Yun shook his head helplessly and said, "No way." It's no wonder I'm not going to blame, I really said it!"

"Say it quickly!" Zhang Zhixing said with a smile.

The laughter faded away, and everyone looked at Fang Yun.

Fang Yun coughed lightly and said, "This poem itself is not flawed, the problem is. If you are not afraid of not knowing the goods, you are afraid of comparing goods. The first two sentences are 'the spring water and spring pond are full, and the spring grass is born in the spring', and the spring grass is born in the spring, which can be regarded as a good sentence, simple and specific, and the imagery is real. But the previous sentence is a little bad, the spring water is not bad, and even the spring pool is not bad, but the two are connected together. It's a bit redundant, and the key is far from the following sentence. If it is replaced with "Spring comes and the spring pool is full", it not only echoes the later "spring", but also as the beginning of the whole poem, "Spring comes" goes straight to the point, goes straight into the poetry, and shows the ability of the words. Although the word 'come' is lacking, it can also be changed to the words 'to' and 'warm'. ”

Many students nodded slightly. In spring, the spring grass is extremely natural, and the spring water and spring pond are too deliberate. And Fang Yun's changes are obviously better.

Yan Yukong smiled and nodded, knowing that he was in a hurry to write, and he didn't think it through, otherwise it wouldn't be like this, Fang Yun only saw the problem within a few breaths, obviously with a deep foundation.

"One is not enough. One more one!" someone shouted.

Fang Yun glanced at the person with a smile, the students of the Holy Academy were at least well-known in various countries, and they quickly recognized this person, his name was Ning Huai, a native of Qingguo. He has no deep relationship with his friends, and he is the nephew of a Qingguo squire, and that Qingguo squire has not accused himself in the Qingguo court.

Fang Yun said with a smile: "I only see this one flaw, this brother must see that there are many flaws in the new poems of Yukong, come, please ask this brother to stand up and criticize two sentences, let me learn it." ”

Ning Yao was stunned for a moment, motionless.

Many people looked at Ning Yao with a smile, it was okay for friends to toss Fang Yun down, obviously they were not familiar with Fang Yun and wanted to continue to force Fang Yun to find fault with their friends, so don't blame Fang Yun for fighting back. What's more, this cultural meeting is just a joke, and Fang Yun's doing so is in line with the theme of this cultural meeting.

Zhang Zhixing smiled and said, "If this literary friend thinks this poem is inappropriate, you can stand up and talk about it." ”

Ning Yao sat there stiffly, secretly saying that this Fang Xusheng is powerful, grinning, and said: "Don't dare, don't dare, let's make a fuss, and the poetry and words can't compare to Fang Xusheng, don't say it." ”

Fang Yun saw that this person was soft, so he didn't say anything anymore, if he continued to fight back, the other party pretended to be aggrieved and admitted his mistake again to retreat as advance, but it was too boring to make the atmosphere of the Wenhui completely empty, and he had to master this measure.

Fang Yun smiled and took a sip of spring wine, everyone understood that Fang Yun didn't want to make a fuss at the literary meeting, so he stopped coaxing, Yan Yukong was a half-saint after all, and when it was over, the joke could not evolve into an attack.

After reading Yan Yukong's, then look at the other nine people at his table. Zhang Zhixing said, took out the poems of the other nine people one after another, and read them aloud one by one.

Soon, everyone realized that Fang Yun's previous sentence "If you are not afraid of not knowing the goods, you are afraid of comparing goods" is also very appropriate here, and it is also a hasty work, Yan Yukong's poem is obviously better than the rest.

The literary meeting continued, Zhang Zhixing and Sun Renbing successively caught five table people, some of these people made one or two wonderful sentences, and some of them had a slightly peculiar format, but the level could only be regarded as acceptable, and it was difficult to have a brilliant work, after all, it was an improvised poem.

After ordering the names of the five tables, Zhang Zhixing said to rest, first eat and drink to nourish his spirit, and after eating and drinking, he will take away all the poems, and finally let the ten old students quickly select which ten are the worst, and then select the ten best, give rewards, and can enter the infinite battle hall of tomorrow as soon as possible like those famous bachelors or Confucians.

Fang Yun, like everyone else, was ready to eat.

Duan Qing, who has a more cheerful personality, stood up and said with a smile: "They are all readers, you can't get the paper dirty when you eat, I'll put the paper away first, and I'll send it to you after eating." ”

"Thank you, Brother Duan!" Everyone felt that this person was thoughtful, and successively handed over the four treasures of the study in front of him to Duan Qing and let Duan Qing put them aside.

Duan Qing collected everyone's papers while reading everyone's poems, and found that a few people had not finished writing, and Fang Yun had only written ten words.

Some hot dishes were served one after another, everyone chatted while eating and drinking, and the adjacent tables would also toast, and the atmosphere of the cultural meeting became more and more lively.

Only then did Fang Yun understand why he wanted to disrupt the order of the crowd, after such a literary meeting, the people at the same table could be regarded as having a friendship, if anyone wanted to continue to get acquainted, it would be a matter of course, and whoever wanted to find another person also had an excuse, so that the students could strengthen communication between them, which was of great benefit.

Just after a quarter of an hour, before the meal was finished, Fang Yun received a letter from the Holy Court.

Fang Yun stretched out his hand and took out the official seal to take a look, it turned out that the War Hall was going to hold an old meeting of the Pavilion, and there were two topics, one was how to let the army of the Confucian Literary Realm cooperate with the Two Realms Mountain to fight, and the second was to discuss how to defend against the attack of the barbarians, and the second topic mainly discussed the participation of the Four Seas Dragon Clan, the Four Seas Dragon Clan was exchanged by Fang Yun for the True Dragon Order, and any planned action needed to inform Fang Yun.

Fang Yun saw that it was such an important meeting, and he couldn't delay it, so he first said a few words to the people at the table, and then walked quickly to Zhang Zhixing, explained the reason for leaving in a low voice, and finally walked out of Changhong Courtyard.

(To be continued.) )