155. Suggestions for the new work of Kasumi Shizi

After having dinner with Dojima, Jiang Yu came to Kyoko Kato's café to prepare for tonight's part-time job. But there was one thing that made him very concerned, and that was that he didn't seem to see Mizuno for a week.

Although this senior who works part-time sometimes teases him, in general, he still takes good care of him. Jiang Yu, who was thinking about whether the other party had encountered any trouble, knocked on the door of Kato's office, ready to ask the other party about Mizuno Ayane.

After getting the permission to enter, Jiang Yu walked straight to the desk and asked straight to the point, "Excuse me, does Kato-san know why Sister Mizuno hasn't come recently?" ”

Kyoko Kato was still thinking about what Jiang Yu was going to do with this serious appearance, but when she heard this, she couldn't help but laugh and said, "I thought you had something important, it turned out to be this~"

"Uh...... I'm actually, well, I just wanted to ask Mizuno-sama if she didn't run into any trouble, right? Choked by the other party like this, Jiang Yu scratched his head and said with some embarrassment.

After laughing, Kyoko Kato said solemnly, "I heard her say that it seems that her father is sick, so she took a week's vacation from me to go back to take care of people." So you don't have to make any bad guesses, right? ”

"I see...... No wonder his face was not good at that time......" Hearing this, Jiang Yu breathed a sigh of relief and muttered to himself.

After saying goodbye and leaving the office, Jiang Yu changed into his work clothes and prepared to start his part-time job tonight.

……

At 9:30 p.m., Jiang Yu was at home.

Jiang Yu, who was holding today's change of clothes in the bedroom, heard the mobile phone on the table suddenly ring, which was a new message prompt from LINE.

It's getting late, who's going to send a message? Thinking like this, Jiang Yu picked up his mobile phone, and then was stunned.

Xia Shizi: "Junior...... Do you have an answer?"

Sighing and standing in place for a moment, Jiang Yu began to type in response.

"Tomorrow during lunch break, will we meet in person?"

"Let's go to the rooftop, I'm looking forward to your answers, huh?"

「…… OK」

Putting down the phone, Jiang Yu walked into the bathroom with his clothes, and after cleaning his body with a spray head, he shrank his whole body into the bathtub, feeling the water waves at the right temperature, and gently washing his whole body.

Suggestions for the new work of Kasumigaoka...... Is it?

On Wednesday this week, he had already finished reading the original manuscript of the new work sent to him by Kasumigaoka Shiyu, what do you think...... Probably worthy of the work of Xia Shizi?

It's still a young campus love story.,The setting of the hero and heroine is still very pleasing.,The first volume mainly tells the process of acquaintance between the two and some later developments.。 It's like everyone's youth love comedy.,There's a little romantic fantasy in the truth.,But it satisfies every reader who will pick up this book.,At the same time, it won't disappoint any loyal fans of Xia Shizi.。

As for the novelty that Kasumigaoka's editors were worried about...... To tell the truth, this kind of royal campus love story, as well as the plot development of boy meets girl with just the right sense of rhythm, actually doesn't need anything new to unfold, and it will be a good work.

However, there is indeed a point in templating, the first heroine of the new work has a certain similarity in personality with the heroine of the previous work "Love Metronome", but in Jiang Yu's opinion, this is not a big deal.

Don't you see that any successful galgame will have homogeneous characters such as blonde, tsundere, considerate and new, etc., can't the script writer still be able to use these already flooded materials to tell a new story?

This is also the reason why Jiang Yu did not give a reply to the other party for a long time. In his opinion, this is actually a work at the current level of Xia Shizi, whether it is written or in character creation or plot conception. If you have to add something new to it, it will destroy the natural charm of the text in the book.

If the senior sister's new work has no clue, then he may be able to quickly give some excellent works with his own unique settings, such as "Friends of the Week" and "Literary Girl" and other campus romance works - in fact, the latter is far more light than ordinary in depth - or "What are you doing at the end of the world?" Are you available? Can you come to the rescue?" The setting or plot of "God's Notepad" has its own characteristics, and some works that are unique to the original author's thinking about the current situation have been added.

It's really not possible, according to the omnipotence shown by the other party in the script of the "Gate of the Destiny Stone", it is not impossible to shake the worldview of the Moon World to the other party, and start building a "Moon World" in advance.

But if you want to put forward new ideas that you think you can add in a world that Kasumi Shizi has already set up...... Jiang Yu said that he was really powerless.

Staring at the water with some distress, letting the mist begin to gradually blur his vision, Jiang Yu carefully thought about the points where the new work of the senior sister could be extended.

Does the protagonist know the piano...... Wait, if you can't innovate in the setting, then the reversal of the plot is also a good starting point, right?

Jiang Yu's eyes suddenly lit up, and he suddenly remembered Keigo Higashino's "Malice", which he had read in one breath before, which was a book of reversal and reversal, and played with all the readers' reasoning.

Thinking of this, Jiang Yu hurriedly stood up, stepped out of the bathtub, wiped his body clean and changed his clothes. He couldn't wait to put the ideas in his head into practice.

……

On the day of the moon, during the lunch break, the rooftop of the private Fengzhiqi College.

The black-haired girl wearing a white headband was sitting on the chair on the rooftop, quietly looking at a book in her hand, but she paid attention to the eyes of the rooftop gate from time to time, revealing that the girl's heart was not as comfortable and leisurely as it looked.

"Whew...... Ha...... Oh no, no...... Why is the commissary so crowded today? ”

Jiang Yu ignored the "no running in the corridor" in the school rules, and quickly climbed to a higher floor with the help of the handrail of the stairs.

"Huhu...... Uh-huh...... Has it finally arrived? ”

Feeling his slightly weak body, the feeling of weakness that surged up from all over his body because of the continuous fast running, Jiang Yu gritted his teeth, and at the same time was tormented by the soreness from his gums and the thirst in his throat, standing in front of the gate of the rooftop, trying to calm his breathing for a while before pushing the door open.

As soon as there was a movement here, Shiyu Kasumigaoka, who had not been concentrating on reading, naturally moved her gaze over, looking at Jiang Yu, who was sweating profusely, she frowned, and then a slightly cold voice sounded on the rooftop.

"You're late, Junior?"