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Lun also took the lead in raising his hand and replied: "I don't have any opinion, Ah Yu, if you think it will be helpful to the club, just agree." ”

Ying Li Li picked up the comic again and said noncommittally, "As long as it doesn't get in the way, you can do anything." ”

Megumi Kato agreed: "I really welcome the Shiraishi schoolgirl~ Because she can use ps, Ying Lili and Jiang Jun's workload on drawings will be much less, right?" ”

"Hui ......"

Ying Lili looked at the girl who had become more and more present in the club recently, and her blue eyes were shining.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu replied a little nonchalantly, "Yes." After all, there is one more target that can be drawn from that way. ”

“…… Senior sister, you can tell the truth. ”

Jiang Yu couldn't help but complain.

After reaching an agreement, the few people chatted for a while before disbanding. On the way, Jiang Yu originally wanted to send a message to Shiraishi Huanna, but after thinking about it, he gave up.

After all, it's kind of something, right?

I just asked someone to go back and wait for a reply, and the answer was given after a few minutes, wouldn't it seem a little hasty?

So, it wasn't until Thursday that Jiang Yu gave Kanna Shiraishi a reply on the line that represented OK. The girl who received the permission was excited, but she didn't mention it.

Then, two more days passed, and it was Saturday.

Jiang Yu's life these days is quite regular, and he is basically only doing two things-watching black cats and writing the seventh volume of "Spring Things".

Of course, the two are crossed. Otherwise, Jiang Yu really doubted whether he had that motivation, and spent more than a week reading the film with a detailed setting that exploded and the words were so bad that people wanted to die.

Well, yes, but in fact, the ratio of the content of the setting to the text is about 9:1. In other words, it is almost only a beginning that makes the reader confused.

However, Rao is like this, and Jiang Yu has almost grasped the style of his own editor. Although he himself is not too acceptable, but maybe in this country full of secondary two atmosphere, he may be popular.

…… But the premise is to polish this aspect of the story well.

"Speaking of which, it looks like it's an entrance exam today?"

Recently, many high schools have been holding entrance exams, last week it was Otonogi Han Gakuin and Sakuragaoka High School, and this week it was the private Toyonoki and Arayada High School.

"In this way, I will be promoted to the third grade at the beginning of the next semester......" Jiang Yu muttered to himself while pondering the advantages and disadvantages of his own editor, "But this time I don't have the urgency to go to the third year of high school at all?" ”

As a former high school student of the Celestial Empire, the third year of high school is a very special period. Because life at that time was very simple, with clear goals, and then worked hard in a down-to-earth manner. In hindsight, this kind of day could not be more fulfilling.

In addition, there is another point, at that time, it was probably the time when most students who were just starting to fall in love were closest to the person they liked.

Maybe it's the same table, or maybe it's someone in the class next door, no matter how bad it is, you can always meet it occasionally in school.

Yes, life was like a small circle. The people you care about, the people you care about, are all around and never go far.

No one wants to go through the purgatory-like days of their senior year of high school again, but everyone who comes out of that period will miss it with emotion. When I think about it in the future, the piles of test papers are gone, the problems that can't be done are gone, and only a group of friends who work hard for the same goal, the memory of helping and supporting each other is still shining in the corner.

Ah, of course. There is also the panic in my heart when I inadvertently collide with my sweetheart's gaze, the hot temperature of my cheeks when my fingertips accidentally intersect when I fight, and I can't help but quietly cast my eyes when I am teased by others......

Why is the description so true? What kind of psychological trauma do you have, hey!

In this way, he worked hard until the evening—on the way, lunch and dinner were hastily solved with the other two girls who had locked themselves in the house—and Jiang Yu finally finished writing the manuscript of "Spring Things" and the opinions and suggestions of the black cat.

After sending the two documents to the black cat by email at the same time, Jiang Yu sent a reminder message on line. About an hour later, I received a call from my editor.

Black Cat: "I've read the manuscript a little bit. Although I don't have any opinions to mention for the time being, Jiang Jun, are you really not afraid of your fans rioting when you write like this?"

Tu Su: "Well...... After all, it's an important plot turning point, and the situation will be reversed next! Probably."

Black Cat: "Probably......"

Tu Su: "After all, this is not a 'light' that can be easily read in the general sense!"

Black Cat: "Hah...... I understand. On the editor-in-chief's side, I'll communicate."

Tu Su: "Oh~ That's really grateful, I'll write you two more lines in the afterword?"

Black Cat: "It's okay to do anything like that. Then, I'd like to talk to you about another one."

Tu Su: "Hmm...... It's okay to talk about it, but honestly, all the advice I can come up with is in the booklet that comes with it?"

Black Cat: "What do you call that page the booklet that comes with the book?"

Tu Su: "The above are all my heartfelt words after reading the whole article, probably."

Black Cat: "Or probably?!"

Looking at the chat history on his phone, Jiang Yu felt a little weak. In the documents sent with Volume Seven, he had done his best to find the bright spots. As for the shortcomings, I also used as much euphemism as possible. But even so, the ratio between the last two before is about 2:8, and I really can't hold back more.

As a commodity, that one was undoubtedly a failing one. But as an editor, the black cat is probably also very clear about this. Therefore, Jiang Yu guessed that his editor may want to see what kind of standard this work is in the eyes of a writer. Therefore, he did try very hard to look at the work from the perspective of a writer, but even so, there are still very few places that can make people shine.

In the few texts, there are also large passages of unclear chanting, those katakana and hiragana are mixed, and English phonetic words are also used, Jiang Yu really has a headache at a glance. However, there are still things that Jiang Yu admires, such as those spells, and there are no repetitions at all. And although the taste of secondary two is outstanding, for people of that age, it may not be possible to say what they are doing.

Wait - Form 2?!

Inexplicably, Jiang Yu suddenly unsealed a piece of black history that his predecessor had buried deep in his mind......

Black Cat: "I just took a look at your thoughts, honestly...... It's too abstract and empty."

Tu Su: "...... Let's not mention this, I suddenly had a good idea just now, and if you change it according to this idea, you might be able to publish it."

Black Cat: "Are you serious?"

Tu Su: "Hmm...... Let me roughly describe it, that is, the ordinary daily life, interspersed with the stories of secondary two fantasies. The appeal of the story lies in the contrasts! For example, a series of settings added to myself in the second year of secondary school, lines that feel very handsome when you read them, etc., won't you be so ashamed that you want to die later? The story is all about creating such a contrast! I want to think about it...... Yes! That's right! It's a story that happens between a group of graduating Secondary 2 and active Secondary 2! When the former sees the latter, he remembers his past self and therefore dies of shame; And the latter may have been connected with the former by chance, so there will be communication after the beginning of the story. Think about it, in this case, wouldn't it be possible to use the perspective of middle school to describe some very simple quarrels and fights between friends, just like the adventures of the fantasy world?"

Black Cat: "Seems to be fun, and you can use those settings as well. But specifically? If I didn't have examples, maybe it would be hard for me to understand."

Seeing this, the excited smile on Jiang Yu's face stiffened. He hesitated for a long time, and finally gritted his teeth and typed a sentence.

If you want to give an example, it's just "that", isn't it? At this time, Jiang Yu could only comfort himself that the person in that period of black history was not him, but the predecessor.

Tu Su: "For example, there is a character who calls himself a 'Darkflamemaster', usually wearing a black robe with a bandage around his right arm - because it contains a Black Flame Dragon, a great sword, and a mantra that says, 'Be consumed by the Dark Flame!'" So even if he was actually fighting wits and courage with the air, rolling back and forth on the empty flat ground, in his eyes, he might be in a sea of burning fire, manipulating the raging black flames like an arm and finger, fighting the most vicious demons and monsters."

Tu Su: "Of course, there must be more than one way to express it. Just as the exaggeration that is often used in writing, in the eyes of the second second, it may actually happen, and the specific description can be directly transferred from impressionism to realism. I think if you can write a story like this, if it's interesting enough, it should be published."

Of course, this is not a framework that ordinary people can control, not to mention that it is still in a state similar to a concept or proposal, and in addition to the backbone, the creator himself needs to fill in the branches and leaves.

But even so, Jiang Yu also thinks that only the kind of guy whose imagination is so rich that it is too much can write such a work.

At least he felt that he and Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't do it.

However, for Jiang Yu's thoughts, the black cat did not respond for a long time. When she finally responded, Jiang Yu almost threw her phone out.

Black Cat: "That...... I'll apologize if I made a mistake! That over-the-top example just now shouldn't be your own experience?"

Jiang Yu finally couldn't hold back the repetition in his heart, although his fingers were still a little trembling, he still replied to the message quickly.

Tu Su: "Of course not!"

Black Cat: "That...... The second answer also makes people feel that the credibility is greatly increased, huh?"

Tu Su: "I didn't even say it'!!."

Black Cat: "I know, I know! I'll keep it a secret! Absolute! No matter who it is, there will be a black history in the past, so Jiang Jun, you don't have to worry too much?"

Tu Su: "Please don't say it!" I want to talk about "Programmer in the Second Yuan" with more like-minded people, pay attention to "excellent reading literature" on WeChat, talk about life, and find confidants~