In the last class of the morning, Jiang Yu's desk was spread out with the script that An Yilun had also used to go to the mimeograph room during the break of the first class, and he was carefully looking at the second draft submitted by Kasumigaoka Shiyu after two days.

Should I say that it is beyond imagination, or should I say that he may have underestimated Xia Shizi from beginning to end?

No matter how critical he looks at this script, Jiang Yu has to admit that according to his ability, he can no longer find more flaws in this script.

At first, there are traces of deliberately increasing dialogue and reducing the description of mental activity, but the further back on, the more faint the traces become, and from the second half of the common plot line, there is already a sense of naturalness.

And when he saw the ending of Shiina Mayi Riri's line written by Kasumigaoka Shiyu, and when he saw the fierce truth make that familiar declaration of crazy victory, Jiang Yu felt an electric current climb all the way up from his spine, and finally exploded in his mind.

With a long exhale, Jiang Yu closed the script, still immersed in the fantasy world woven by Xia Shizi. He had a hunch that with the help of the people in this community, they would be able to make a game that would shock the entire industry. Even if it's just fandom that is only expected to be released on Winter CM.

The bell rang on time, and after the teacher walked out of the classroom with the lesson plan, the students who were not very familiar with the class also walked out of the classroom in groups of threes and twos.

Jiang Yu, who estimated that he would still go to the audio-visual classroom at noon, also went downstairs with the flow of people, bought sandwiches and coffee and milk in the commissary, and slowly walked to the audio-visual classroom.

Pushing open the classroom door, sure enough, the members of the club were almost there.

"Huh? It turned out to be Ah Yu, hasn't Senior Sister Shiyu come yet? An Yilun also heard the sound, raised his head suddenly, and after seeing Jiang Yu's figure, he was obviously disappointed, and then said.

Well, the reason why it is said that it is almost all here means that among the tentative club members, except for Jiang Yu, who just arrived, today's main son, Kasumigaoka Shiyu, has not yet arrived in the classroom.

Jiang Yu closed the door, shook his head and said, "I don't know, Lun also asks." Anyway, until now, the members of this club have not exchanged contact information with each other? ……”

An Yilun also nodded with a smile, and was about to say something, when the classroom door was opened again, and the figure he had been looking forward to for a long time walked in and said in a slightly lazy voice: "That's the producer and the director's mistake, right?" Obviously, we need to be responsible for adjusting and communicating with the entire community, but none of us creators have the contact information of the two of you at the same time~"

"Don't slander, Kasumigaoka-san? Obviously, Kato has the contact information of me and Lunya at the same time......" Jiang Yu pouted and retorted.

Hearing this, Shiyu of Kasumigaoka frowned slightly, and the expression on his face also changed gloomily for a moment, and he muttered to himself: "Was it actually preempted by this main heroine again?" ”

"Hmm......" Ying Li Li also looked at Megumi Kato who was sitting in the corner with a subtle expression, but the other party was just playing with his mobile phone as if no one was around, as if he didn't pay attention to the atmosphere that had suddenly become strange now.

"Alright, alright...... So before the official start of the short club exchange activity at noon today, let's exchange contact information first, right? ”

An Yilun also stepped forward at the right time, and took over the topic and said, just like the producers who reconcile the delicate relationships between the members of countless societies have done.

"Hmm...... Don't be so troublesome, right? Anyway, wouldn't it be nice for you to just use LINE to pull a chat group? Jiang Yu touched his chin and thought about it, and said half-complaining and half-suggesting.

In other words, there is no need to have this kind of thing similar to a penguin colony, and Jiang Yu is a little confused about what it is to exchange contact information with each other to achieve the purpose of convenient communication.

“…… That's right! An Yilun was also stunned for a moment, then clenched his right hand into a fist and hammered it into the palm of his left hand, with a sudden realization.

"......" Jiang Yu, who didn't know what to say, had to look at An Yilun's rich emotional performance with a little pain.

After setting up the communication group, Jiang Yu, who was about to talk to Kasumigaoka Shiyu about the script, suddenly felt his mobile phone start to vibrate, and at the same time, there was a prompt sound from all over the place that there was new news on LINE.

Anyway, don't you need to turn your mobile phones to silent when you're at school? Well...... Forget it, the person who complains just loses.

Hey, wait, it looks like I've already lost?

So, please stop complaining for a while and take a look at your phone?

…… Jiang Yu picked up the mobile phone in his pocket, and the character nicknamed "Xia Shizi" on it took the lead in issuing words.

"So, let's talk about your thoughts on the second draft of the script."

"That...... Senior Sister Shiyu, wouldn't it be better to speak directly?"

"Sa, let me hear your opinions and suggestions!"

"Hey, are you completely ignoring me?!"

「…… The second draft of Kasumigaoka-senpai is of very high quality, beyond my imagination, I thought I would hand in the fourth and fifth drafts or something, but now it seems that it will be enough to change a little bit later."

Jiang Yu looked at Kasumigaoka Shiyu who suddenly had a lot of headaches, and answered the other party's questions on LINE seriously.

"Did the new writer, who is the planner and director and the screenwriter and the debut, find anything wrong? Tell me about it."

Hey, don't add a long list of titles to each other to imply your dissatisfaction!

"It's a little small.,The first half of the common plot line is a bit of a deliberate increase in dialogue and a trace of reducing psychological description.,Kasumigaoka-senpai can modify it if she can modify it.,It's really okay if you don't modify it.。 And then at the end of Shiina Mayuri's route, I hope that after the fierce man said his second middle school speech, Mayuri can respond, such as "I don't have to continue to insist on this tone anymore, Mayuki is fine, and Kookonoshi can cry for himself."

"Great idea, Ah Yu! I think it's amazing!"

「…… I accept this suggestion, and besides, I'll make some changes to the previous plot, and if I take it out later, it should be the final version, right?"

"Shiina Mayuri's route is like this.,Some of the previous plots can be divided into the common plot line.,And then when the plot lines of several other heroines are written.,There must be some interaction between each other.。 After all, this game, the finished product in my mind, the previous plot is almost the same, only the subtle differences are revealed, implying that the player has entered a different plot ending."

"Like the rate of change in the world line you mentioned?"

"You can say that, but if you look at it according to the plan, the world line that the protagonist will experience...... There are probably only four in total. Anyway, it's almost time to put an end to the face-to-face behavior of using chat apps, right?"

"I thought you were enjoying it, huh?"

"......" ×3, even Ying Lili, who has been unable to interject, is speechless for such a bad behavior of Kasumigaoka Shiyu. Well, probably.

So in general, it was quite a good conversation, and they talked on LINE one after another, until the preparatory bell rang in the afternoon.