At half past ten in the evening, Shiina Maya's room was in.

Jiang Yu frowned tightly, looking at the dozen or so pages of drawings in his hand, his brain nerves began to run at full speed, trying in vain to find the subtle sense of disobedience brought to him by this original comic manuscript through a flash of inspiration.

The content of the comic is very simple, it is a ...... of him and Xiao Bury Ahem, who goes to the supermarket to buy comics, snacks, and fat house happy water - well, it seems that a strange thing has been mixed in? - The noisy process after the disagreement.

Ah, by the way, at the end of the story, the male protagonist, who doesn't want to read manga at all and doesn't want to drink Coke and eat snacks, buys these things back with a helpless expression on his face.

The painting is still impeccable, and the painting style is also the popular style of this kind of daily comics, which can only be said to be more refined. In addition, the plot is so simple that people can't complain, as far as Jiang Yu is concerned, it seems to have played the role of a switch, recalling a fragment in his memory.

In other words, after reading it, his thoughts were-"Ah~ It seems that there is such a thing for a while? Something that doesn't make sense at all.

This means that the new work that Shiina Mashiro has worked hard to paint in the past few days has no way to attract him at all. Although this kind of daily comic doesn't win with the ups and downs of the plot, this kind of situation that can't attract people to watch it at all is really rare.

Looking at Jiang Yu's subtle expression, Shiina Mashiro said quite knowingly: "It's boring, right?" Ayano said the same. ”

"Editor Iida...... Jiang Yu pinched the pile of manuscripts with his left hand, rubbed his chin with his right hand, and decided to find the problems in the girl's manuscript in a different way, "Speaking of which, what did Editor Iida say?" Please tell me as you say, Shiina. ”

“…… It's like, 'I still can't attract people to look at it, Xiao Zhenbai'. ”

Shiina's face remained unchanged, and after thinking for a moment, he gave the answer.

Jiang Yu nodded and began to think about it again.

Until then, though...... When I hear the name "Mashiro-chan" come out in person, how can I feel inexplicably cute? According to Lunye's words, it made him instantly "cute", and the character creation was a great success, Shiina!

Such a thought flashed through his mind, and in a flash of light, Jiang Yu seemed to have grasped something, his eyes widened slightly, and his right hand slapped on his thigh at once, and exclaimed, "I understand!" ”

Wait a minute...... Could it be that you are some kind of 10,000-year-old elementary school student with the attribute of the god of death? In the next sentence, if it's "the puzzle solved" or "I've figured out the modus operandi", I'll turn the other cheek on you, right?

If it was any otaku who knew him well, he would probably say something like this in an instant to complain. It's a pity that sitting in front of him now is just a world-renowned painter who has just set foot in the field of comics.

Well, speaking of which, this title seems quite correct while having a strange sense of disobedience? Am I a little expert in naming something?

"Jiang Yu?"

The girl's soft call pulled Jiang Yu, who was thinking wildly, back. After coming back to his senses, he coughed dryly twice to hide his embarrassment, and then Masashi said: "The problem with Shiina's manga is that the characters are not created!" ”

Role...... Mold? The girl's expressionless face vividly revealed a puzzled expression, repeating the term that she did not understand.

Seeing this, Jiang Yu cleared his throat and explained: "To be precise, the two main characters in Shiina's pen are not distinctive enough!" In the case that the storyline itself is relatively disadvantaged, if the character design is not pleased, it is natural that the Iida editors will not be optimistic. ”

Looking at the girl's thoughtful expression, Jiang Yu thought for a while, and added: "According to the otaku, the character doesn't make people 'cute'. ”

"'Moe'? Is this word a general verb in Japanese? ”

Hey, Shiina, your focus seems to have gone astray, right?!

Jiang Yu shrugged his shoulders, spread his hands and smiled: "No, I think it's just a usage that has gradually been derived with the popularity of two-dimensional culture." Back to the point, to put it simply, what Shiina needs to do is to make the characters of these two characters distinct and attract the attention of others in an instant! ”

"Oh." Shiina Mashiro nodded, and humbly asked, "So, how can you make the character cute?" ”

You accept that the change from noun to verb is too fast, right?

Jiang Yu shook his head, flicked his fingers on the girl's forehead, and said angrily: "You have to think about it yourself, the future cartoonist?" ”

"Woo......"

Hearing this, Shiina's two willow eyebrows moved closer to the center of his eyebrows, and his cheeks seemed to bulge slightly, looking as if they were ...... Somewhat angry? No! Bridge bean sacks! This looks...... It's coquettish, right? Na~ Right!

Jiang Yu looked at the girl who suddenly exploded with emotion with some surprise, her mouth opened wide, she wanted to speak and stopped, and finally sighed, stood up, walked to the girl's side, picked up a piece of A4 paper and pencil, and began to concentrate on drawing.

Shiina Mahaku looked at Jiang Yu's sudden movements with some curiosity, poked his head over, and looked seriously at a painting that was gradually taking shape under the other party's pen.

In the center of the picture is an ordinary door, with the house number written on it, and on the right is a slim girl, with a college uniform, long hair, and even Jiang Yu has drawn some irregular diamond shapes around the other party, which seems to represent flashes.

pikapika？

Shiina Mashiro showed a puzzled expression, but he didn't bother, but chose to continue watching.

On the screen, the girl who was shining at the beginning, after flying through the door, directly turned into a two-headed Q version of the figure, the college uniform became a cloak-style costume, and the flash on her body disappeared.

After stopping the pen, Jiang Yu pinched the corner of the paper with both hands, picked it up and shook off some pencil ash on it, handed it to the girl next to him, smiled, and said, "That's probably how it feels!" If Shiina your character is based on Koburi, it should be like this. Do you understand the contrast of Moe Shiina? It's a character that shows characteristics that don't match the original image.,Put it on the little buried body...... I want to think about ......"

“…… Well, it's the perfect high school girl who is helpful, has excellent grades, and is a sports all-rounder, but when you get home, you become the kind of person you see in Shiina: idle, lazy, and only knows how to watch anime and play games all day long, and occasionally say something touching, only to realize that it is just your own delusion after a while......"

"Jiang Yu."

"Huh? What's wrong? ”

"Little burial, behind you."

“——！！！”