Chapter Ninety-Four: Shut Up

Wei Jia'an rubbed his sister's cute little head fiercely, and then drove her, along with Delin, out of the kitchen. As we enter June, it gets darker and later, and even so, it is already late at six o'clock in the evening, close to seven o'clock, and if you don't prepare dinner, you will have to wait until late to eat.

It's really an unexpected joy, I have learned a lot of new tricks, and now Delin is stressless and fearless, resting and resting, what to do so tired.

It's a pity that my brother doesn't write novels anymore, and I want to help him with ideas. Unexpectedly, Delin is actually preparing to become an online writer, and once she enters the pit, she will never recover. Strangers are indifferent, how can familiar people not join in the fun. At this time, back in the room, Wei Jiajia shouted to see Delin's masterpiece.

"Look." DELIN WAS NOT SHY, HANDED THE LAPTOP TO WEI JIAJIA, AND PICKED UP THE IPAD CASUALLY. She naturally has a fingerprint unlock now, and she didn't pass by touching it, and this time she touched it successfully, and at this time she remembered that there was something that she had to emphasize, "You can see it, don't say it's bad." ”

"How can something the teacher write be bad?" One sister, another teacher, Wei Jiajia just called casually, "If I feel that the writing is poor, it must be that my appreciation level is not enough to see such good things." It's like...... Just like those works of art, ordinary people look like a mess of graffiti, a mess of paint, something that a child draws with his hands, and only a master can see the mystery. ”

Delin looked at the girl and nodded, deeply gratified, if everyone is like you, first find their own problems, instead of finding fault with others, then how beautiful should the world be?

Wei Jia'an sat on the edge of the bed with his notebook, slid the mouse to click on the folder, found WORD, and began to appreciate Delin's work. From the first chapter, the male protagonist meets the female protagonist who travels from another world in order to hunt down the enemy. Although it's only one chapter, it's a big problem, there are a little more typos, but the manuscript hasn't been corrected to understand, the subject-verb-object is confused, and often a large paragraph of words is a headache.

She has the heart to say something - you write so ugly, you want to stop talking, so you better shut up.

There were fifteen chapters in total, and the sixteenth chapter was only half written, and each chapter was strictly 2,000 words, exceeding the maximum of 100 words, and she didn't take much time to read them all.

The story has just begun.,At present, only the male protagonist is known.,The male protagonist has a gentle and demure.、Intellectual and generous sister hasn't appeared yet.,The heroine is a genius beauty mage.,Not only is the level of spells amazing.,Flower arrangement、Reading、Sewing、Learning、Cooking skills are almost proficient in everything.。

The decent story seems to be a little less twists and turns, there are no golden three chapters, so many chapters actually don't have a villain, and there is no exciting face-slapping link, so from this point of view, it is not qualified enough to catch people.

I don't know how the plot will develop later, maybe there will be something exciting, but nine times out of ten it is still so mediocre, she asked curiously how about the outline?

"Outline, ......"

Delin said the outline she had prepared, and Wei Jiajia thought thoughtfully: "How do you feel very familiar......

Delin laughed.

"Ah, I know what's going on." Wei Jiajia said, "The actor is the elder brother? Are you the heroine? How did I become a sister? Beautiful, gentle and generous, and good cooking, anyway, decathlon, there is nothing wrong with that. ”

"The hero is not your brother, and the heroine is not me, this novel is just a reference to the story of your brother and Vera...... Why is the heroine a mage? Because I'm familiar with it, if the setting is a knight, it's easy to be full of loopholes. Delin said.

Wei Jiajia said quietly: "Even if you write casually, how about the knight, what are you afraid of, what loopholes are you afraid of, the author is the biggest." ”

"It seems to be." Delin thought about it for a while, and complained, "And do you have anything to do with beauty, gentleness and generosity?" ”

"There must be beauty, what about the rest......" Wei Jiajia pursed her lips, first to convince herself, "It's just that I'm a younger sister, and my sister can be a little willful." If my brother is my younger brother and I am my sister, it is my responsibility to take care of my younger brother as an older sister, so I can't be so willful, and I can also be gentle and generous. ”

While talking, she imagined that she was the big sister, and the younger brother was so big...... Anyway, in front of his sister, his younger brother will always be an ignorant child, so he prepares a loving breakfast for his younger brother every day, toast, milk, and soft-boiled eggs, gently arranges his collar, pats the white ash on his clothes, and involuntarily reveals a trace of longing.

"I don't think so." Halfway through the preparation of dinner, Wei Jia'an came to the room from the kitchen, the refrigerator was in the room, and he heard his sister's words, "If you are a sister...... I thought about it for a while, what kind of picture it was - I didn't know how to take care of my hair, I wore and threw my clothes around, and I knew how to direct my younger brother to do this and that all day long, and I took pleasure in bullying my younger brother and needed my younger brother to take care of it. ”

Wei Jiajia snickered: "A beautiful and sexy sister, although she knows how to bully her younger brother all day long, but also gives him a lot of benefits, she sleeps with him every day, she is white, and she rubs his back in the bath, aren't you looking forward to it?" ”

"How could you expect that." His face didn't change, and his heart didn't skip a beat, and he went back to the kitchen.

"Shh Wei Jiajia booed, and suddenly thought to herself, if she is a sister, she must be a gentle sister, because being a sister in the countryside is absolutely not willful, and she must take on the responsibility of taking care of her younger brothers and sisters, unlike what she can do as a younger brother and sister.

"I'm done."

"Hmm."

Turning off the WORD document, Wei Jiajia returned the notebook to Delin, and said purely casually: "How does Sister Delin write a male frequency essay, shouldn't she write a female frequency essay as a girl?" ”

"What female frequency?" I've been finding what books to read, and I really don't know much about this aspect, Delin asked, "Is there a male frequency and female frequency in novels and online novels?" ”

"Don't you understand?"

"I don't understand."

"The male frequency article is specially written for boys.,The protagonist is generally a man.,There are also a lot of sexual transfers.,It's generally a dick silk counterattack.、Waste wood to save the world、Fight monsters and upgrade explosive equipment、Harem、Big open golden finger and so on。 The words of the female frequency text are specially written for girls.,The protagonist must be a girl.,The story is generally ...... Think about it. ”

encountered a problem, Wei Jiajia held her chin and thought about it, she leaned forward and backwards with a smile, the reason was naturally because of the relationship between her brother, although she was a girl, she shook her head at the female frequency: "If it is a modern text, either the heroine's family is seriously ill and forced to sell herself, and then a handsome and domineering president will buy and take down the heroine for several million, and finally forcibly take care of it." Either the boyfriend splits his legs, the other party must be a girlfriend, the heroine is drunk in a nightclub, and she has a relationship with the domineering president in a daze. Next, when the heroine woke up, the domineering president threw down the money, the heroine was very angry and felt that it was an insult to herself, and the president thought that the heroine was trying to get away with it. ”

"Yes, yes, yes." She slapped the bed excitedly, "Generally in such a story, there must be a snarky and mean wealthy lady and male protagonist's mother, a beautiful and profound background who has a deep love for the male protagonist, and a male partner of the female protagonist who is vomiting and considerate from her family, if the female protagonist has a son, it must be a genius baby, the kind that makes torpedoes at the age of six." ”

She is interested, starting from the domineering president Wen, to traveling through ancient times to become a concubine to compete for the favor of the emperor Gong Douwen, and finally the emperor must die, the heroine's son becomes the emperor, the heroine becomes the queen mother, and finally travels to the ancient family to become a concubine, from the modern concept and means make her extraordinary, a large group of princes and sons around, all the way to complain about the past.

She finished laughing, and finally concluded: "The routines of male and female frequency texts are almost the same, the focus is to satisfy the reader's fantasy, but the male protagonist has been replaced by the female protagonist, from a lot of beautiful girls to a lot of handsome guys...... There is a slight difference...... It's said that men and women are equal.,In fact, girls know each other.,Put it in the novel.,The heroine can be ambiguous with many men.,But it's generally rare to have a relationship with many men, right? Unlike the harem text of the male frequency, the male protagonist can establish a harem in a dignified manner...... I don't think much about it, I don't understand it too much, my classmates see it a lot. ”

"That's right, that's right, there is a difference between male frequency and female frequency - male frequency, the male protagonist must be very strong, the ending must be the strongest person, and he must rebel and become an emperor through ancient times." She said and laughed again, "But the novels written by my brother are soft rice streams, with the male protagonist inside and the female protagonist outside." ”

"I know what a female frequency essay is." Wei Jiajia said a lot excitedly, Delin understood, and she had read that kind of novel.

"How?" Wei Jiajia said, "I think girls still have to write women's articles. ”

"If you don't write, I can't stand it, what a domineering president is romantic overnight, and what is the emperor's harem palace fight, I think about how to please men all day long." Delin said, "Girls have to be the weaker side? I like the harem, all the girls are my property. "And the outline has been written, and so many manuscripts have been written, isn't it all a waste to change the subject matter again?

didn't expect such an answer, Wei Jiajia said: "Although Sister Delin is a girl, she actually has a boy's heart? ”

"Even girls can take the harem." Delin beckoned, "Bria, come over here." ”

Bria was helping in the kitchen, of course, she could only do it, and the seasoning was absolutely not touched for her, when she heard a greeting voice and came to the room: "Is there anything Dede looking for me?" ”

"Bria, do you like me?"

"How?"

"Do you just say you like me?"

"Yes, I like Dede the most." Bria tilted her head slightly and smiled sweetly.

"Then you can go." Bria left, confused, Delin turned to Wei Jiajia, "Briya is my harem, and I have a lot of harems." Bria is a childhood sweetheart, and I also have a decathlon maid, a knight with a serious face every day, and she has been calling me sister when she was a child, and a queen, and ......"

"Sister Delin is a lily?"

"It's not a lily, at most it only accepts kissing the face and sleeping with a hug." Delin was silent for a moment, "Toys? Collection? It's all mine, it's all mine, anyway. ”

Wei Jiajia glanced at the blonde woman who was pinching her chin and thinking, feeling a little scary, and moved her ass to the side silently.

"Speaking of which, the female frequency is not only what I just said, but also ......" She also remembered, "Sister Delin, do you know Tan Meiwen?" ”