604.Juvenile Tour (2)
The producers of both sides spread out the manuscript page by page, which lasted for more than three hours, and negotiated with each other about "what to do on my side" and "what you can do for me".
The initial result of this negotiation was the document in front of which it was plastered with instructions for amendment.
"Don't worry, I have a good bottom line of sticking to Senior Sister Shiyu as a creator. At the same time, of course, at the price, some voices from the Marz side had to be accepted. Senior sister, you can take a look first, if there is anything that cannot be modified. ”
Jiang Yu said in a relaxed tone, and then made a "please" gesture to Shi Yu.
Shi Yu picked up the manuscript and glanced at it with ten lines, and at the same time said in his mouth: "Wait! It's so much that I can't finish reading it for a while, and I can't judge! ”
All of the above amendments are basically the result of a compromise between the two sides.
For example, because the development progress is really not optimistic, the less important parts of the characters and tasks are unified, and the total number of sub-characters is reduced. For example, in order to reduce the number of arenas, the reason for always fighting in the same place is explained by character dialogue - it doesn't hurt to say that it is okay to complain; Another example is to check the lines that have not yet been included, delete the unimportant parts little by little, and leave a certain amount of room in advance for the script writer to play with corrections.
Shi Yu bit her lip and twisted her eyebrows, her legs trembled, and she kept flipping through the manuscript in her hand. When she saw about half of it, she suddenly stopped this move, looked directly at Jiang Yu who was hurrying to tap on the keyboard opposite, and said puzzledly: "Sure enough, I still can't understand it...... Such an amendment is unacceptable. ”
Jiang Yu looked away from the screen and looked over, although he was a little surprised in his heart, he still calmly asked, "Where are they?" Although there is not much leeway, Marz's side can still be discussed. ”
Shi Yu looked at Jiang Yu, who didn't seem to be fake, but really didn't understand her subtext, raised the manuscript in his hand, and said with a sigh...... Is it really you who asked for a day to change? ”
Jiang Yu was surprised, and then thought of the label that his senior sister had labeled him as unsuitable to be a producer, and couldn't help laughing: "In other words, except for the quantity, there is nothing unacceptable, right?" ”
Shi Yu's lips twitched twice, as if she was a little happy and a little unwilling: "...... For the nonce. ”
"Good! Then next is Sawamura's work! Jiang Yu looked at Ying Lili next to him, "Regarding the work of the original painting, there are no special correction instructions, just finish the rest of the work seriously." ”
"Whew...... That's, that's great......"
It seems that he is a little worried that he will usher in a huge amount of modifications similar to Shiyu's, and when he heard this, Ying Lili breathed a sigh of relief.
But Jiang Yu didn't make the blonde girl happy for long, and immediately said: "However, the deadline should be advanced by a week." ”
"Huh——? Huh? ”
Facing Ying Lili with a dumbfounded expression, Jiang Yu said with relief: "It's okay, you can still catch up with the speed of two sheets a day." ”
"What are you talking about? Is it okay if it's a big problem? What the hell are you trying to do a week in advance?! ”
Ying Lili's face suddenly turned from ruddy to pale.
"Because the final adjustment of the CG of the event was going to be carried out in the last week, although the art team of Marz worked hard, in the end, you Sawamura were responsible for the quality." Jiang Yu ignored Ying Lili's pale face and said calmly, "So far, you've been complaining a lot about the CG handed over there, right?" Okay, then change it yourself. Permission has been obtained. ”
Ying Lili frowned, and asked a little unpleasantly: "...... Just give me a week? ”
Jiang Yu also frowned, and said solemnly: "Sawamura, you have to understand, although I can understand your feelings of wanting to be responsible for the quality of your works, but you have been ignoring the rules of the industry and making trouble, it is you and Miss Akasaka." ”
"As I said before, I can't fight like that guy. Therefore, being able to get this permission is already the result of the other party's compromise. ”
"It's better to say that when Marz's art team talked about it, the weak, overly bitter expression really made me wonder which side was the big demon in the traditional sense."
Moreover, there is also the fact that it is too heavy, and the art team of the other party is crying and saying, "Under the current system, we are not obliged to take on more workload and stricter quality requirements", so let's not let Ying Li Li know about it for the time being.
Jiang Yu made such a decision after thinking about it, while waiting for Ying Lili's answer.
"Hmm...... Hmmmm——! Ying Lili puffed out her cheeks, as if she was angry, and as if she was thinking, "I see!" Two weeks is two weeks! No problem! Well...... Definitely no problem......"
Is it really okay?
Shi Yu groaned, as if to protect Ying Lili, and spoke up: "Won't this be too risky?" If this continues, isn't Sawamura going to become a game, haven't finished high school and haven't graduated, and can only be a veritable homeless person who has a little money at home and can only help his family? ”
Ah, of course, this maintenance turned into a provocation halfway through, and it was so much of the other party's style that it made people unable to even complain.
Ying Lili shook her double ponytail, glared at Shi Yu angrily, and then closed her eyes and said to herself: "I will still graduate from high school!" It's really not okay to spend money on private people! ”
What about universities?
Jiang Yu sensibly did not say this too cruel sentence. Then, he turned his gaze to Shi Yu again, and said with three points of apology, three points of sincerity, and four points of seriousness: "Well, next, there is actually a job that is going to be given to Senior Sister Shi Yu." That's what I said, what makes me different from Miss Akasaka. ”
As he spoke, in Shi Yu's gradually pale, he took out three more stacks of documents from the paper bag just now and piled them on the table. It's already to the point where you can't see the face of the other side when you sit in a chair.
"It's promotional materials, user manuals, and transcripts." Jiang Yu explained, "Tomorrow, after the senior sister finishes the correction of the script, she will start to do these work. I will finish the recording script first, and then take it to the recording site to guide the recording site, and then send it to you after the date and location. ”
"Of course, I'll help too. But I'll have to spend a few days dealing with the things on the club's side first. Speaking of the club, a complicated look flashed on Jiang Yu's face, "So in the first few days, I only asked you to fight alone for a while, Senior Sister." ”
“…… What the hell are you trying to do?! ”
In the face of this extra work, as well as Jiang Yu's overly calm and justified explanation, Shi Yu was also naturally angry.
Because, according to the contract signed by Akasaka Zhuyin with them at the beginning, these are all extra jobs. Or rather, it should be Marz's side who is responsible for the work that doesn't require the script writer to appear at all.
"Well...... Because according to Miss Akasaka's idea, a lot of excessive demands were made, so these jobs were pushed over by them. ”
Jiang Yu spoke in a flat tone, as if he was discussing with someone that today's dinner was a little greasy, and tomorrow would be lighter.
"Actually, it's best not to accept it, but because I can't go my own way like Miss Akasaka, I can't force an extension, and then blame the other party for the delay and ask the other party to turn around at full speed to catch up with the fallen deadline."
"It's my fault for not being able to protect the creators on our side, and I'm sorry for forcing my sister, so I'll come to help too."
"You ——!" Shi Yu stood up suddenly, pointing her fingers straight at the opposite side, "It's not like this, is it?" What is this? I don't have you like that......"
In the end, there was a hint of a girl's resentment and unreasonableness in that tone.
But if only she was really unreasonable......
Looking at Shi Yu's performance, Jiang Yu felt even more guilty in his heart. If you follow Akasaka Zhuyin's approach, after the forced extension, and let all the members of Marz see the hell of the construction period, maybe it can really become a masterpiece.
But he's not Akasaka Zhuyin, and he can't force others for granted. It is better to say that in this entire industry, in addition to Hongsaka Zhuyin, there will not be a second person who acts so unscrupulously and self-respectingly.
So, he had to force himself and his own people.
In order for Marz to retain his creative enthusiasm in the tight schedule, he could not lead by example with a high-pressure attitude and the high-intensity work that seemed to others to be like Akasaka Zhuyin.
Under all these circumstances, all Jiang Yu can think of is to lead by example on his own side, together with these two creators and himself, so that the other party can really feel the enthusiasm and drive of the other party to make a good game.
Undoubtedly, this is also quite a nonsense approach. If he had more resources and more time, he would have been able to get a better solution.
But he was only ordered to do so...... Perhaps it would be more appropriate to say that it is to catch ducks on the shelves.
Being able to get this answer in just half a day of thinking about it is already the result of painstaking efforts.
After all, not everyone can achieve a delicate balance that can be recognized by all three parties in terms of the creator's wishes, the developer's construction period, and the general planner's ideas.
Shi Yu's emotional catharsis lasted for a while, and after he calmed down, Jiang Yu took a deep breath, clasped his palms together, got up and bowed: "Anyway, in the next month, please leave it to the two of you!" ”
“…… I wanted to ask before. Shi Yu raised his head slightly, looked at the young man who was bending over opposite, and said in a complicated tone, "The club is over there...... Is it okay? Kato-san's ...... Is it okay? ”
Hearing the name "Kato", a look of surprise flashed in the eyes of Machida Enko on the side - probably, this is Shi-chan's...... Rival? No, no, no, it's more appropriate to say that you are a competitor, right?
But within the scope of high school students, is there still a girl who can let the black-bellied writer under her be defeated one after another? That's really ...... It's so much fun!
As soon as she thought of this, Machida Yuanzi's expression suddenly became strange, and it seemed that there were many more sentences that could make fun of Shiyu in the future.
Feeling the other party's gaze firmly locked on him, Jiang Yu straightened up, shrugged his shoulders a little helplessly, and said with a smile: "As you can see, although I told them about the decision, I haven't fully obtained permission yet. However, since I didn't have the task of controlling the overall situation this time, I just need to finish the script in the remaining days of the month. ”
Then, he was keenly aware of Ying Lili's expression of wanting to stop talking, smiled in his heart, and said: "That part is responsible for three people, Yulunya, Iori, and Kato, and I don't need to worry about it at all, it's really different from last year's situation." However, Lun also became very idle after the script was completed, and I guess he would help take on some of the program's work, right? ”
Jiang Yu believes that it is impossible for this awkward childhood sweetheart to have no contact in private, so the explanation of the other party's recent situation will stop there.
"I—I don't care about this kind of thing!"
Ying Lili flicked her ponytail and turned her head.
Jiang Yu forcibly held back and didn't let himself laugh out loud, but the smile on his face couldn't be hidden no matter what. And Shi Yu said simply: "Didn't anyone tell you that this is a typical tsundere reaction?" You blonde! ”
"Who do you say is a defeated dog?! Wrong! Who's Tsundere?! ”
"You care more about 'tsundere' than 'lost dog', are you serious?"
"Kasumigaoka Shiha!"
Jiang Yu looked at the scene in front of him, and suddenly felt a sense of embarrassment. When was the last time I saw these two people raising bars and arguing in front of them?
This quarrel, which seemed to be conventional, finally ended with a predetermined ending. As the victor, Shi Yu also seemed to have sorted out his inner emotions, walked up to Jiang Yu, stared at him with a pair of burgundy eyes, and said in a cold tone: "I won't say that I can easily accept your approach, but if it is your request, then I agree." ”
Then, Shi Yu suddenly showed a sly smile: "Also, the overseer of your club is a girl who is much more difficult to handle than her appearance and daily behavior seem. If you can't get forgiveness, I'm not going to help you. ”
As a loser, Ying Lili also quickly adjusted her emotions, and said in a somewhat indifferent tone: "Anyway, it's not the first time I've experienced this kind of hell of rushing the manuscript, I'm nothing." What are you...... It's also more acceptable to me than Akasaka Zhuyin, so be it! It's late, so you don't need to send me, I'll take a taxi back first! ”
After saying that, the girl immediately turned and left, and the two slender ponytails swayed with it. The figure seemed to be the same as when he left the audio-visual classroom.
But...... At that time, Ying Lili probably wouldn't have muttered "two sheets a day, there are 28 left" with a flat expression, which was actually too cruel and harsh for the artist.
Subsequently, Shi Yu also declined Jiang Yu's unspoken request to give away, took a bunch of manuscripts, and left alone.
Looking at the backs of the two leaving, as well as the sound of conversation not far away, Jiang Yu seemed to have lost all his strength at once, and the whole person collapsed on the conference table.
He also had a lot of fatigue backlogged, and he was just holding on to his spirits before.