I thought I'd have to boil up a few million words.

To be honest, as an inexperienced new author, although this book has such and such shortcomings, such as "the character design is too simple", "the setting is too complicated", "why are all female team members", "the introduction is too toxic", "the title of the book is not understandable", "there is no system and I am not used to it", "the author is not smart enough" and so on.

But in the absence of any official recommendations, relying on the book lists of several bigwigs and the spontaneous dissemination of some netizens in Longkong, I am very surprised to be able to achieve the current result.

Let's answer all of the above questions.

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[The character design is too simple]

In the words of the British writer Edward Morgan Foster, there are two ways to describe characters: "flat" and "round".

The flat characters have simple and distinct personalities, and the round characters have complex and changeable personalities.

I wrote with "round characters" because I had unrealistic expectations before writing the book, and I wanted to write all the characters as if they were real people.

Real people will have more complex personalities and be closer to reality.

Of course, the price is the lack of labels, and with a small number of words, these characters are not easy to impress.

A larger word count is needed to fully capture the full character of these characters.

However, the newcomer is simply dying when he writes like this, and he is full of tears when he talks about it, so he doesn't say much.

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[The setting is too complicated, and some places are not reasonable enough]

Reasonableness can never be 100% rigorous, I just need to avoid hard work.

For example, some readers have reported such as "why do shops openly sell pistols with silencers", "why is the king's intelligence ability so poor", and so on.

That's because "I, Dongluo, have my own national conditions here".

The world of this book is a world of "general chaos and partial order".

There are many countries, wars are frequent, the technology tree is seriously deformed, and the extraordinary power is fragmented......

To put it bluntly, it's chaos, and anything can happen in a chaotic world.

Even in reality, not to mention selling silencers in Mexico, RPGs are openly sold, don't their top brass know that this is dangerous?

Clinton, as the president of the United States, was assassinated, why is the intelligence ability of the FBI so poor?

can only say "My old rice/old ink has its own national conditions here", and it is recommended that you do not substitute domestic impressions into novels.

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[Why are they all female players]

The question of material selection, my fault, I won't talk about it. This can't be changed, and if you change it, this book will collapse.

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【IntroductionToo Poisonous】

The original intention of imitating the introduction of "Hidden Killing" is to attract some readers with more evil tastes, my fault.

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[The title of the book is too ordinary]

Admit your mistake again.

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[No system, not accustomed]

Material selection problem, admit mistakes*4.

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[The author's brain is not smart enough, and those who are smart know to add more]

It's not that it's not smart enough, it's that the author can't devote more time to adding more.

The author is not a full-time writer, and his current work is basically 775, and he writes less than a few thousand words every day, and he has to make up for it on weekends.

I'd like to have a golden finger, like 48 hours a day...... Forget it, I'm thinking peach.

Considering changing to two shifts a day, 2,000 words each?

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Final Words:

Thanks to @lazy Yinglong, @鹤羽翔天, @王于修戈的加书单.

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