Call!

Unconsciously, in a blink of an eye, another volume was finished...

If I had to give the second volume of "Heavy Rain" a score myself, I would give it a five, out of 10.

The advantages are...

Almost everything I wanted to write in my head was written, and some of the foreshadowing was slightly recycled.

Of course, the disadvantages are obvious...

The lack of control and the slow pace are a problem of the author's own ability, and he has no way to run.

The original intention of the second volume is to introduce the characters of the Blood Clan Castle in general, as well as the supporting characters for the development of the plot later, to shape the image, and to give the protagonist a time to develop.

To be honest, I really didn't expect that when I wrote it, it would be another 100,000 words out, and I originally planned to die with 50,000 words...

So it's doubled again?

In the two days in the plot of the novel, you can write 100,000 words, I really admire myself.

Did you write such an online article?

Syllable!

Slap yourself in the face as a respect.

The plot drags on, which leads to the backward movement of the cool points and explosive points, resulting in a slightly dull early stage of the whole book, and you can only rely on occasional driving to save you big pigs' trotters.

These are all questions that the author should reflect on.

So in the next, in the third volume "Born to be a Human", the author will try to increase his horsepower, promote the plot, and streamline! Streamline! Streamlined!

Of course, the car still has to be driven when it should be driven.

In fact, the third volume is the place where the author conceives and can open a little "cool", everyone will know by looking at the title of the volume, there must be something to do, and there are big moves.

As a result, because of the "extraordinary performance" of the first two volumes, the third volume was not opened until 150,000 words.

Hey, it's all tears.

Well, maybe that's growth, and that's why I insist on writing a summary at the end of each volume.

The author will continue to work hard!

Ok, the self-review is over, and now the author's "output" link begins.

My turn!

Draw cards!

Cough...

First of all, let's explain the "Easter Egg" series for everyone.

The role of the easter egg series is to supplement the plot of this volume, as well as the preview of the plot of the next volume, in short, it is to connect the previous and the next.

It is not unrelated to the main plot, but it is closely related, and it is an important part of understanding the subsequent plot development.

So I still put them in the main volume, not the work.

(Pronounced as "easter egg" and written as "text")

I saw that many readers said that they were confused, or suggested that I should not do this in the future.

emmm...

The author doesn't back down on this kind of principle, I like to write, it's as simple as that, and I think it means a lot to this book.

And I also think (emphasis added)

If you look at it a little more carefully, you won't be confused... (whispering bb)

Of course, this is for readers who read it in one breath, friends who are chasing it, because of the time span, a lot of things have been forgotten, which is normal, and I sincerely apologize to this part of the readers.

(However, this part of the daily reading is the treasure of the real authors...) ）

(Well, I admit it, I deserve it)

In short, I like to add details in this way, to lay the groundwork, to tell the stories of various characters.

I have always felt that the style of writing at the starting point has become more and more fragmented and light-hearted and funny.

It's not that such novels are bad.

On the contrary, the author thief likes to read high-quality cool texts, watching the protagonist be humorous, or pretending to be deflated but actually stable and skinny, which brings a lot of happiness to the author in life.

But...

As I said, they are "fragmented", and what the author wants, is a real "story".

Novels shouldn't be the same, there can be novels that everyone can read every day with a smile and a relaxed and enjoyable experience...

There should also be novels that can allow everyone to calm down and take a whole period of time to read a little bit of brain.

Although I know the latter, it is basically the responsibility of the "great gods".

I also know how far I am from the level of the "great gods".

But I can't help it...

I really can't write cool essays, I can only write this kind of thing, so I have to work hard in this area.

PS: Don't underestimate Xiaobai Shuangwen, being able to write Xiaobai Shuangwen is also a powerful strength!

Having said all this, I just want to tell you.

The author can change his pace, such as speeding up the progress of the plot.

But the author will not change his style, such as foreshadowing, likes to engage in some bells and whistles, likes light suspense under conspiracy theories, likes girls, likes girls...

This also means that the cool point of this book will not be as dense and compact as normal, but more of a narrative feeling.

I know that this is contrary to the online article itself.

Didn't you write an NM web article?

The above is true, the author's favorite thing to read is the cool article, and I don't want to be happy within 50,000 words, so I quit directly.

Therefore, when the author looks back and reads his own novel, it is directly spraying.

(No one wants to snatch the throne of the black fan head from me!) ）

If you are interested, you can turn the page again and say.

At last...

Although I am an author, I am just a narrator of a story, and the behavior, development, and plot of the characters in it have nothing to do with me, no!

If you want to spray, don't spray me!

Just spray the characters in the text themselves!

The author will also follow up in real time, be a qualified black powder head, spray!

Tsk, after writing, look at the number of words, 1714 words.

Cattle!

The text is short and weak, and when it's your turn to testimonial, you'll hit hard?

Couldn't go any further.

Hm... That's it for now.

The third volume will officially open tomorrow.

Finally, finally, thank you really for those friends who are chasing down, to be honest, I don't know how everyone chased down, said with tears in my eyes.

I don't know how many readers will see this...

Let's just those two words.

Thank you.

Above.