Take a day off and testimonials
Many book friends have also seen that I have not been in good shape recently.
I can't help it, it's still the same old problem: I can only conceive the general framework first when writing the stand-in battle, and then fill in the details when I write it. (I can't think of all the details of the battle in advance, I don't have enough brains, and I don't have enough hair)
As a result, a lot of content was conceived and thought to be good, but when it came time to write, it suddenly found that there were bugs...
Just like the two recent original stand-ins, it was very reluctant to fix bugs at the time of creation, and the final effect of the program will inevitably decline.
(For example, for fear of being taken seriously...) I even calculated the speed at which Li Qing ran over to support after hearing the explosion according to the speed of a cheetah that surpassed that of humans, and then set the service area to a length of 800 meters. This distance can't be too short, because at least Giorno and Jamie have to be left with a solo time of one or twenty seconds; It can't be too long, or someone will say that there is not such a large service area in the world. )
(However, there are still bugs...) Because Li Qing's ears are so good, I have to assume that he didn't take the initiative to pay attention to the sound 800 meters away, so that he can be reluctantly and reasonably excluded. )
(Anything else to consider on an ad hoc basis...) The snake must be actively aggressive, so it is set up as a pit viper with fire-fighting characteristics; Chlorine has a distinctly pungent smell, so I had to get the pollen to force Jamie's nose in the block; The concentration of hydrochloric acid in gastric acid is actually not enough to react with sodium hypochlorite to produce chlorine gas, so I have to emphasize that the golden experience can ignore physiological limitations and promote excessive gastric acid... )
I have to think about so many messy things when I write a stand-in battle, otherwise someone will catch the bug and say that the last time, my glass heart will be directly closed.
Grades are not good, and I write books to make myself happy.
If the mood goes bad, then it doesn't make sense.
(I don't care about the main character's blood bar, stop the dialogue when spraying, etc., that's because he can't accept the basic setting of the book, not my problem.) But if there is a bug in the plot, it will be my pot, and I have to carry it. )
In addition, the difficulty of creation aside...
All the way to the present, because of aesthetic fatigue, the reader's appreciation threshold is constantly improving, but the author's creative level is slipping in place... It's really hard to maintain the eye-catching effect of the show at the beginning.
Or take a day off slowly...
Hopefully it will improve.
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Sogou