Erzhuzi said speechlessly: "I don't have any impression, but the Chinese teacher's high evaluation of Brother Feng is not all tacit, that time Brother Feng's composition was not read by her as a model text, in the words of the class leader, Brother Feng's composition has been commented on by the teacher the most." ”

"At the beginning of the school year, I didn't hand in my composition homework with anyone, and then Brother Feng made an essay that she thought was particularly exciting, so that we were also punished for copying Brother Feng's composition."

Lin Xiaowei was surprised: "Brother, why didn't I know that your composition was so good?" ”

Lin Chaofeng shook his head and said: "It's not that I write well, it's just that our Chinese teacher simply appreciates me. ”

"If you want to compare my composition with the essays above the composition book, it is really unconfident, our Chinese teacher just appreciates the angle of my writing, because this angle depends on my composition never towards some kind of template composition."

"To put it bluntly, your brother's essay is a bit different from most students' essays, and what kind of score will be obtained naturally depends on the grading teacher, just when I was in the first year of junior high school, because the first semester of junior high school and the next semester are different Chinese teachers, and the scores I get are completely different."

"When I first entered junior high school, the Chinese teacher thought that I just had basic writing skills, and he didn't think there was anything about the content, and he was always hovering on the passing line."

Lin Chaofeng smiled: "Do you know how simple the passing mark requirements for this essay are? ”

Lin Xiaowei shook her head and said, "I don't know, I know that the composition we wrote is very simple. ”

Lin Chaofeng said: "Actually, it's not simple, and I don't know if it's the relationship between the general environment, I think our pace is very fast." ”

"This elementary school is still a diary, and I was only in junior high school at that time, and I took the paper directly, and I remember that there were no papers in the textbooks at that time, and they were all textbooks copied by the teachers temporarily."

"In short, this passing line is basically a corresponding structural plan for your own article, no mess, no typos, neat writing, and a little bit of content can pass."

Lin Xiaowei asked, "It's so simple? ”

Erzhuzi and Lao Ji were also a little puzzled, Lao Ji said: "Brother Feng, what you said is the same as singing, although my grades are not good, but I still have a certain interest in Chinese, I also know the structure of the essays we usually write, and I have always completed my homework according to my understanding, but in fact, it is difficult for me to get a passing grade." ”

Lin Chaofeng said with a smile: "It's not that what I said is the same as singing, in fact, it's that simple, and I can tell you very directly, these are not my own opinions, this is what our Chinese teachers say when they communicate with me occasionally." ”

"So don't be presumptuous, in fact, you are really good, my high score is still because of the change of teacher later, and my so-called enigmatic essay was not read out as an excellent essay because of the content problem, and the reason why I can't give a high score is also because of the content problem."

Lin Xiaowei was curious: "It's so amazing, so brother, is your essay still there?" ”

Lao Ji smiled: "Brother Feng said that it was a mystery, so naturally there is a reason, at that time, because the teacher said it in front of the class, Brother Feng's composition has attracted more attention than his previous essays that were regarded as a representative of excellent compositions, and everyone in the class said that they wanted to observe it." ”

"Brother Feng was stunned and capricious, and he didn't come out of the limelight, so he directly tore up the essay, and then said that he had forgotten the details, since the teacher said that he couldn't get a score for that essay, it means that it was a failure, and it is not worthy of everyone's attention."

Lin Xiaowei asked Lin Chaofeng and said, "Are you really torn?" ”

Lin Chaofeng nodded and said, "It's really torn, and I really don't remember." ”

Lao Ji sighed: "Actually, I also wanted to observe it at that time, so I have always been curious about what your essay was, Brother Feng?" I remember correctly, the question at that time seemed to be the past, present, future or something. ”

Lin Chaofeng said: "You are not mistaken, that is, to write about yourself, the past, the present, and the future theme, which should be based on the idea of forming, which is basically to intercept one or more time nodes, focus on the article of the Planning Department, and then express it." ”

"This direct point is directly choose one of the three, write what you think is easy to write, a little later on the skill of multiple nodes to play a connection or something, and there is no limit to the theme, to say simple and simple, to say difficult, I dare to say that this is put in any academic stage, and no one dares to say that it is not difficult."

Erzhuzi was surprised: "So evil? ”

Lin Chaofeng said with a smile: "Otherwise, in fact, the most difficult thing about writing essays, especially essays with indicators for completing tasks, will involve a time span, because you can't know whether it's good or bad, let alone the grading teacher." ”

"In the past, most of them were some stories of the past, stories and stories, things that have happened and have passed, and I have nothing to look back on this time; Now is the present, what kind of state do you think we are in at the moment? In short, I am not in the mood to write now. ”

"So the only thing I can write about is the so-called future, which is another question that I am more disgusted with, so I came completely with my temperament at that time, and then I tossed out that legendary composition."

Lao Ji said: "I'm still curious about what you wrote at that time, Brother Feng. ”

Lin Chaofeng smiled: "You want to know? ”

Lao Ji nodded, and at the same time, Lin Xiaowei and Erzhuzi also showed great interest.

Lin Chaofeng said: "I really forgot the details, but I remember the title, it is called 'The Beginning of the Dream', and it is the subject matter, so this has to talk about the problem of our academic progress." ”

"Theoretically, according to the learning progress of the textbooks, our group of students will only be exposed to writing essays on party themes after graduating from junior high school in the third year of junior high school, but in fact, we have already been exposed to it in the second year of junior high school, but we are not required to write, but almost every time the teacher does not restrict us from the subject matter, that is, we can write all genres."

Lao Ji sighed: "Brother Feng is Brother Feng, everyone is still writing prose, you will go up, I know how many words did you write at that time, Brother Feng?" ”

Lin Chaofeng said: "I have counted, more than 3,000 words, which is equivalent to more than six of the average words of your essay. ”

(End of chapter)