Suddenly, I don't know if it's because our voice is too loud, or if the wind outside the window is too noisy, my lips under the snow moved slightly~

“…… Scared me, I woke up immediately when I saw your face. "Under the snow, he said things that didn't match his cute appearance at all~

Wow...... Hachiman also reacted instantly. Fortunately, I almost made a fool of myself in front of the snow. I really want to let me sleep under the snow for a while~

Under the snow, he opened his mouth like a kitten and yawned, then stretched widely.

Although there is a plain in front of him under the snow, Hachiman's gaze is still unconsciously attracted to it~

"If you look at it again, I'll call a lawyer~" An emotionless voice under the snow sounded in Hachiman's ears~

"Mo ~ Hachiman, you still see. Obviously, I can ...... too," Akiba's voice became quieter and quieter as she spoke.

"I'm sorry, I didn't ...... unconsciously" Thinking that it was still my own fault, Hachiman apologized honestly~

"I'll let you go this time~" Seeing that Hachiman seems to have a good attitude, it is rare and easy to forgive Hachiman once under the snow~

"Good afternoon, everyone. Ha ...... "At this time, Sakura's voice also came from the front of the door~

"Looks like you're tired from reading, too," Hachiman said with a slight sigh when he saw the tired look of Kazuya under the snow.

"yes, I haven't stayed up late in a long time, and I haven't read anything like this...... It seems that I can't like it. Sakura said in a still weak voice.

"I definitely can't like it~"

"You and Akiba didn't even look at it, did you? Don't hurry up and see it yet. ”

Yubihama let out an unhappy "oh" and took out the original manuscript of the novel from his school bag. Her manuscript didn't even have a single crease. It's like the white paper handed in during the scumbag exam, it's very clean~

Yuhihama quickly flips through the entire novel, as if he is turning over a useless roll of blank paper~

"Hey, you're so serious~" I couldn't help but remind.

"No way, I'm really not interested in this kind of thing~"

It's also true, even Yaman himself didn't stick to an article like this, so why should others read it seriously~

"Kikiza's work doesn't represent everything in light novels, and there are many interesting works on the market." For some good-looking works, Hachiman still gives affirmation~

I know that this sentence is not going to help the timber seat, but I still want them to know the fun of light novels. But under the snow listened, tilted his head slightly and asked:

"For example, what have you been reading lately?"

"yes, that's interesting."

"For example?"

"For example, me and Bishoujo...... Ahem, for example, I became a beautiful girl's summoned beast~"

It's so dangerous, the title of the book just now will definitely make them misunderstand under the snow~

"Oh, I'll go see it when I have time~"

Hachiman clearly felt the perfunctory meaning in the tone under the snow~

In the next second, someone violently knocked on the door of the social office.

"There's something to ask for below."

The timber seat greeted him in a funny manner and walked into the department.

"So, let me hear what you have to say."

He sat down on the chair and crossed his hands over his chest majestically, with a confident face and a sense of superiority that he didn't know where to fight.

"Poor child, I hope you can maintain this self-confidence later~" Hachiman thought silently in his heart.

On the other hand, sitting under the snow across from the timber seat had a rare expression that didn't know how to speak. For this point, Hachiman still admires the timber seat, after all, this is a "big guy" who can make people who don't know how to speak under the snow~

"I'm sorry, I really don't know much about this kind of work~" Xue Xia pondered for a while before finally speaking.

And the timber seat said generously:

"It's okay, it's also important to listen to secular opinions once in a while, you can rest assured~"

"That~"

Under the snow, he took a deep breath and said with determination:

"It's really boring, and it's very painful to read, and now I admire that I can read it myself~This work is simply unbelievably boring~"

"Hmmm!"

Under the snow, a word will put the timber seat to death.

The timber seat was hit, and the whole body leaned back greatly, and the chair made a "click" sound, and then barely recovered its posture.

"What is your opinion?"

Kigiza asked Sakura as if he didn't give up.

"Eh~ I think your grammar is a bit messy, why do you always use inverted sentences? The use of particles and auxiliary verbs seems to be wrong? Haven't you studied before? ”

Compared to the evaluation under the snow, Sakura can be said to be gentle~

"Hmm...... But it's easier to write that way, and it's easier for readers to feel intimate......"

"Alas, this kind of thing has to wait until you write the correct sentence first~ First of all, there are many problems with your transcription. No one pronounces "ability" as "chikara", and how can the word "red blade flash" be labeled as "Bloody NightmareSlasher"? Where did "Nightmare" come from? ”

"Haha, Hachiman, you don't know, this is a unique pronunciation of taboo words~" Kikiza seemed to have finally found a little confidence, and said with a loud laugh.

"It's called self-absorption, and no one but you can understand it. Do you really want people to read this work? Moreover, when it comes to works, your plot development is too easy to guess, and there is no fun at all. You've read a lot of light novels yourself.,How do you think what you write compares to what others have written.。 ”

"Well, I've heard that if you don't arrange it that way, it won't sell well...... As for the plot development, that's ......"

"Alas, I think you should study the light novels written by others first~"

Hachiman sighed helplessly, the profession of a writer is not so easy, and it is also a good thing to let Kizuza know the hardships of this road in advance~

"Besides, why are your narrative sentences so long? There are so many difficult words? Affect the reading experience. And then again, don't you give people a good look at the story that hasn't finished yet? Before you put on a show, please add more common sense. ”

"It's really merciless under the snow" Hachiman thought so, and after Hachiman's "criticism", he didn't give the timber seat any time to recover, and pointed out other problems one after another~

"Ahhh

The timber seat screamed loudly with his feet facing the sky, his shoulders twitching, and his eyes rolled up at the ceiling. His exaggerated reaction made Hachiman feel pitiful, shouldn't it be better to stop~

"Enough should be enough, right? It's too ruthless to say it all at once," I persuaded under the snow.

"I'm not done yet...... Okay, will you change Yuhihama and Akiba-san next? ”

"Huh? Do we want it too? ”

Kigiza looked at Yubihama, who was surprised, and looked at her for help, with tears in the corners of his eyes. Yubihama saw that the wood seat was so pitiful, so he stared at the air, trying to find the part that could be praised, and he just squeezed out this sentence:

"You know a lot of rare words~"

As soon as he heard this, the expression of the timber seat froze~

"Yes, and you can write such a long article, it's amazing!"

"Ahh In the end, Akiba gave the final blow to the timber seat, and Hachiman vaguely saw the white soul of the wood block leaving his body.

For a man who aspires to be a writer, those two sentences are taboo, because they mean that he has nothing else to offer. People who are not used to light novels often answer like this when asked what they think. It's just that if a novel is evaluated like this, it's no different from "not good-looking".

"Thank you, would you like to see my work in the future?" After a while, the soul of the timber seat finally returned to its body, and looked directly at us with a serious face.

"Alas~"×4

Several people except Hachiman exclaimed, after all, it's like after you humiliate a person, the other party still wants to be friends with you seriously, it's unbelievable~

Only Hachiman, who has read the original book, knows that Kizuza is a strong man......