Rough?

"Wouldn't it? If the comic is rough, can it win the 'Golden Brush' award? Yan Fei blinked, feeling incredible.

"When I say rough, I'm comparing it to the previous part of this comic, not to other comics." Shen Xin spread his hands, "Students who usually score 100 points suddenly scored 90 points, but the second place is 89 points, you say, what is the difference between 100 points and 90 points?" ”

"The scores are not the same." Xi Muhan said.

"That's right. The score is not the same, but it does not affect the ranking. However, I haven't seen any of the other award-winning manga and can't tell how much of an impact the quality of Doom Rescue will have on the awards. Shen Xin yawned and put the pad on the dining table.

Xi Muhan picked up the pad, read it carefully, and looked at Shen Xin suspiciously, "Is the quality of the comics okay?" Where did it fall? ”

Shen Xin rubbed his forehead and said with a wry smile: "Xiaohan, you may not be able to see it, give the pad to Sister Yan." If you look carefully at the first 27 chapters, and then compare them with the comics in the back, you should be able to notice the difference. By the way, I'm mainly referring to storyboards. ”

It's not that Shen Xin underestimates Xi Muhan, but for cartoonists, storyboards are not easy to master.

Part of the reason why many illustrators with outstanding drawing skills fail to become best-selling cartoonists is because of their storyboards.

The storyboard of the illustration pays attention to better showing the sense of the picture, and the comic is tangled and serialized, and how to attract readers with every word is particularly crucial, and this is the main role of the storyboard.

Xi Muhan is not a cartoonist, she usually only reads comics, and after handing over the name to Lu Ning, Lu Ning has to be revised again.

In terms of storyboarding, she is still lacking.

As a professional editor, Yan Fei has her own understanding of storyboards, but there is still a certain gap between her and the level of top comics.

Xi Muhan was a little unconvinced, but she also knew that Shen Xin's words were right, she was not a professional cartoonist, and she had not been in charge of the original work for a long time, and she did not have a deep understanding of the storyboard, so she could only hand over the pad to Yan Fei again.

Yan Fei took the pad with a puzzled face, and after reading the storyboard of the first episode, she felt that it was not bad, and turned to the next episode, only to find that it was the 33rd episode, so she could only flip forward again and find the 27th episode.

After reading this, Yan Fei compared the storyboards of the two words, and then nodded: "I see......

"What's wrong?" Xi Muhan hurriedly asked.

"Wait a minute...... I'll take a look at the first few words and the next few words......"

Yan Fei was also unsure, and flipped forward to chapter 5, from episode 22 to episode 32.

Shen Xin took advantage of this time to drink a bowl of rice porridge and eat a fried dough stick, Wang Wenhong also knocked on the door and came to the studio with other assistants.

"What are you doing?"

Wang Wenhong also scooped a bowl of porridge, and saw that Yan Fei was quickly sliding the pad, while Xi Muhan was like a kitten, staring at Yan Fei, and suddenly felt curious.

"Nothing."

Shen Xin noticed that the eyes of the others also moved over and changed the topic.

This kind of thing, even if you talk about it in private, if it spreads, it's not good for him, for Duoman.com and masker, after all, he also feels it, and there is no evidence.

Wang Wenhong doesn't care, but with the addition of 5 assistants, there are a lot of people who know.

"I'm looking at the Golden Brush award-winning work? The sudden appearance of such a young author must have made the magazine nervous. Yan Fei handed the pad to Shen Xin, "I think...... There is a slight difference. ”

If Shen Xin didn't remind her, she would only watch it once, and she wouldn't think about it in the storyboard, but the comics behind "Doomsday Rescue" are indeed not as good as the previous 27 chapters.

Shen Xin took the pad, took out a napkin, and said to the others, "You eat first, I'll go up." ”

Xi Muhan's eyes widened, as if he was holding a breath in his heart, seeing that Shen Xin didn't mean to continue, Yan Fei also picked up the bowl and began to eat, then also stood up and followed Shen Xin out.

came to the second floor, and when Shen Xin sat in front of the workbench, Xi Muhan also pulled a chair and sat opposite Shen Xin.

"Brother, what do you mean? It's a different storyboard, and it's a rough picture of the comics, which I don't understand. ”

Shen Xin scratched his head and said puzzledly: "These are just my guesses, if they get out, it will make people think that I am jealous of the masker, have pink eye, and spread rumors about him......"

Shen Xin also doesn't like to judge people behind his back.

"No, it won't. No one will say. Besides, you don't need to be jealous of him...... I just want to know why. Xi Muhan was a little depressed.

It's like giving a puzzle but not an answer, if Shen Xin doesn't say it, she estimates that she will be absent-minded for a day.

"The reason is simple. Compared with "Ding Shi", the storyboard of the first 27 episodes of "Doomsday Rescue" is better, and after the 27th chapter, the storyboard of "Ding Shi" should be better. Generally speaking, in the later stage of a comic, the plot or structure of the story will collapse, but the drawing skills and storyboards will not decline, and the latter two things require experience.

"Just like writing, in order to attract readers, the early stage will be very delicate and exciting, and in the future, in order to extend the length of the work, the structure may be loose or even 'water injection', but the author's writing is improved.

"The strange thing about this part of the comic is that the storyboard is different, which makes the story seem verbose."

"Why is this happening?"

Xi Muhan picked up the pad and carefully compared the 27th and 28th chapters, and also saw the fame.

The storyboard of the previous episode is indeed very ingenious, but the storyboard of the latter episode is wooden and stiff, and the content that can often be expressed in one storyboard will be divided into two or three, and the rendering power shown by the storyboard has also decreased a little.

The painting style is stable, and the story is more attractive, but it looks a little verbose. Moreover, the place where the fight is not as smooth as the front, and the shots of the key fight are often omitted.

"I guess someone has fixed the name on the front of Doom Rescue." Shen Xin said his guess.

"Huh?" Xi Muhan was taken aback, "Is there such a person?" Who will fix his name? ”

"Of course there is, for example, Sister Yan has repaired the name for you, right? It's just that there is a feature of Duoman.com, its editor-in-charge is not responsible for specific cartoonists, and the structure of some comics will have shortcomings. ”

"Then why didn't he go ahead and find someone to fix his name?" Xi Muhan was puzzled.

"I guess there are two possibilities. First, no. As long as the quality of the front of a comic is high enough, even if the story collapses in the later stage, it can have a good result. The length of 27 chapters is already very long, and the story is gradually entering a high level. tide, unless there are big fluctuations in the plot, otherwise, readers who like this comic may keep reading it.

"Second, the masker can't afford it. This person's understanding of name will not be worse than that of Teacher Ye, and may even be more powerful than Teacher Ye. Ask someone of this level to check the work, and masker estimates that it will cost money. Besides, he may also draw comics himself, so he doesn't have time to read the name of Doom Rescue anymore.

"And, in terms of cost, it's the most cost-effective to draw the front content. In fact, "Doomsday Rescue" did win the Golden Brush Award. Shen Xin stretched his waist and speculated.