Xi Muhan and Wang Wenhong couldn't bear to laugh, Shen Xin didn't get angry, pushed the pastry in front of Wu Xiaoli and Chi Yue, and opened "Comic Future" himself.

"Xianyuan", as the name suggests, is a Xianxia comic.

Xianxia, Shen Xin has read some, Xianxia comics, I really don't read much.

The beginning of this comic uses the common time-traveling, and it is the whole person who travels to the world of Xianxia, in order to speed up the pace, it does not tell how this person crosses at the first time, but at the beginning of the story, the protagonist is in this world, living for two months, using the method of interludes, to tell the past.

In fact, the type of crossing, in the comics and, is not uncommon, how to describe the crossing, there are also their own methods, some begin to tell what happened, how to cross, and some omit this step.

The late reading of the painter is not too good, and it is not the kind of unorganized at all, on the contrary, the use of storyboards is quite reasonable.

After the crossing, the protagonist uses the knowledge before the crossing in order to live, relying on "calculation. Hexagram "for a living." But the protagonist's approach doesn't work every time, and once he was caught by a Taoist priest, saying that he slandered Taoism and dragged him to a Taoist temple. The protagonist, in the spirit of not starving to death, begs the Taoist priest to let him enter the Tao......

In addition to the slightly routine of the bridge section crossed, in other aspects, whether it was the protagonist who failed to pretend to be X, was caught by a Taoist priest, or the protagonist took the initiative to become a Taoist priest for his livelihood, Shen Xin was surprised.

However, after the protagonist becomes a Taoist priest, the plot seems too stable, introducing the Taoist hall, preaching with other Taoist priests and other plots. After about three or four episodes, it wasn't until the nearby mountains and forests that a monster appeared, and the story became tense again......

Subsequently, the protagonist is captured by the youkai and witnesses the little Taoist priest who was captured with him being eaten by the youkai.

Of course, the main character is caught...... Well......

In fact, there are not many in the comics, because the protagonist is usually beaten to death if he can beat it, or he can't beat it, and there are more famous protagonists who have been caught, such as Xiaojie in "Full-Time Hunter", who was caught by the Phantom Brigade.

This also shows that most of the authors can't handle this routine - many readers don't like to see the protagonist arrested.

Even in "Full-Time Hunter", before Xiaojie and Killua were arrested, Yoshihiro Fujian used a lot of pen and ink in order to portray the Phantom Brigade, and even, during the Kurabica exam, someone pretended to be the Phantom Brigade. After these foreshadowing, Xiaojie was arrested, and readers can accept it.

But the plot in "Immortal Yuan" is a bit direct, and under the premise of being reminded by the Taoist, he was still caught, which is somewhat inappropriate.

The last two words, which are also the best grades, and are also the places where there are more scoldings, are because the protagonist meets the soul of a little girl and helps him escape from the predicament, but he is possessed by the little girl and loses consciousness.

"Nest!"

Shen Xin doesn't need to read it, he can guess the reader's evaluation.

There are highlights of this comic, but the shortcomings are more obvious, and it can even be said that the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages, otherwise, "Xianyuan" would not be the current achievement.

"Old ...... Teacher...... What do you think? "I was a little nervous about reading late.

"Uh......" Shen Xin was silent for a moment, "Xianxia comics...... It's rare to see on Comic Future. Of course, I'm not saying that such a manga is bad, in fact, its appearance gave Comic Future a fresh blood. I like the first episode a lot.,Especially,The protagonist was poked by a Taoist priest because of his lack of knowledge.,It looks like it's very feeling.。 But the back is not so amazing, the plot is too slow, and it wastes a few words. If I were a reader, I would have absolutely no idea what the purpose of reading this manga is. ”

Chi Yue's face turned pale instantly.

"Don't be nervous, you know what I'm trying to say?" Shen Xin said with a smile.

Chi Yue shook his head.

"When normal people encounter this situation, it is this kind of reflection, most of the Xianxia world also have daily life, this is what you want to express, right?"

Chi Yue nodded, "That's right." ”

"But you have to be clear about what the reader wants to see, they don't want to see how real the protagonist is—no matter how real what you write, it's also a person on paper, can it be real to the reader himself? Impossible, right? So, what the reader wants to see is that the main character is different. Even if they are fellow immortal cultivators, the protagonist must have his own unique place. Therefore, the adventure in the back is very important, that is, the protagonist is caught...... In fact, this plot is also lacking, but fortunately, there are changes, but in the end, he lost consciousness, making the reader feel that the protagonist is too wasteful. ”

"I did it for a reason. The little girl will later live in the main character's body......"

"Is this body the protagonist's, or is it the little girl's? The little girl stays in the male body, will the little girl have to see the male protagonist's eating, drinking, and Lazar in the future? ”

"It's not...... I don't have that plan? Chi Yue hurriedly waved his hand.

"And what are you going to do with it?"

"......" read late, "teacher...... In these two words, the reader scolded a lot. ”

"Leave that alone. What really determines the success or failure of a comic is the grades, and besides, there are more readers who don't scold you. Right? ”

"That'...... Teacher, how can I change it? "There is no master of the six gods in late reading.

Change...... Of course, there is a way, but Shen Xin is not going to say it.

"You have the responsibility to edit, how to discuss the plot with you is her business, and if I say more, I will do it on my behalf. Moreover, Xiaoli has been an editor for more than ten years, and this problem still can't help her. By the way, I heard that you are a cartoonist from the outside industry? ”

"Doesn't count, does it? I studied history in college, and when I was in school, I studied art for more than a year, and after graduation, I studied on my own for more than a year, and then worked as an assistant to Mr. Wang Yunze, until my work was hired, and then I quit my job as an assistant. "It's a little embarrassing to read late," so it's true that the painting is not very solid. ”

"Teacher Wang......" Shen Xin bowed, "Your painter is not in a hurry, the level will rise after a long time of painting." ”

Shen Xin didn't lie about this.

The original work of "One Punch Man", although the painting has been criticized by many people, but the painting has also improved, and in the second half of "100% Psionic Energy", the painting work has obviously improved.

Also, Isayama, the author of "Giant", started serializing "Giant", and his painting work was not good, but in the back, his painting work has also improved a lot.

Of course, compared with those cartoonists with solid basic skills, their drawing skills are still not brilliant enough, but after all, they are much better.

Therefore, it is not that cartoonists do not pay attention to the work of drawing, but compared with the plot and storyboard, they are slightly behind.

may be because he has served as Wang Yunze's assistant, or it may be for other reasons, the storyboard of the late reading painting is also okay, although the plot is a little slow, but it is stable, but the pressure of the grades does not allow him to follow the step by step, fortunately, Wu Xiaoli also saw it, obviously speeding up, as long as the plot does not collapse, the grades should be improved.

This kind of comic, as the protagonist grows, the results will definitely get better slowly, there is no doubt about it.