Chapter 261
In recent times, there have been a little few updates, which completely broke the promise at the beginning, sorry, but let's summarize it from beginning to end here, saying that this is the first single chapter......
When this book was first created, it was actually because of the shortage of books, I had nothing to do, I remembered a lot of stories that I usually fantasize, and after thinking about it, I felt that Douluo's martial soul system was relatively simple, and it should be easier to write, so I opened this one.
Douluo Yi, there are many slots, but after all, it is the white moonlight in his heart, and he doesn't want to touch it.
In fact, a long time ago, I thought about writing Douluo Yi's fandom, a mutated wisdom angel martial soul protagonist who was born in the Wuhun Palace, a thousand family sidelines, instead of Qian Renxue disguised as the Prince of Heaven Dou, resisting the responsibility of Qian Renxue, and then came to a wave of operations to set things right. At that time, there weren't a few people in Douluo, but I gave up when I wrote the outline myself, because the primary selection of the heroine Qianrenxue, and then the princess sister in my own plot was cute...... (āēĄčļāēĄ) poof, the memory is still fresh.
Now I'm going to write a book, and I'm going to come to the peerless Tang Gate that I've always wanted to complain about.
However, when I actually started writing the outline, I didn't want to write the originally expected open and hanging plot, I felt so bored, I went through it in my mind, and I forgot it after I was happy, so why did I write it? So I put aside the setting when I wanted to open the book at the beginning, rewrite the outline, take it a little easier, and explore the scenery of the fantasy world, which was also the tone at the beginning.
By the way, at the beginning, the name of the protagonist was Lu Renyi (passerby B, because there were (âŊ_â°) too many passers-by A), just a passerby B, not participating in the main line of waves everywhere, the setting is a sand sculpture type, it looks confident, in fact, it will be broken as soon as it is poked, and the first version of the outline is a person's travelogue.
And then it was written.,I feel that the hero is too lonely alone.,The heroine is a little difficult.,After all, we're a single dog.,And then there's an elder who leads the team.,A buddy who is a little impulsive.,Plus a rich boy brother (Fang Rui,The initial setting I gave him is actually very high.,Later it will be scrapped),The plot is actually a team to wander around the world.,This is the second version of the setting.ã
In this way, it is not appropriate for the protagonist to call passer-by B, so he changed it, the protagonist's name was adjusted to Lin Yueyun, and the second male changed to passer-by B, and there were a lot of words at that time, and it was all changed from beginning to end, and it was changed overnight, and the update of the next day was not delayed, and it felt like a person entertaining himself at the beginning, although no one watched it, but it was very motivated.
But there was still a missing name that was not changed.,It was pointed out by a book friend.,That's one of the earliest comments.,That probably felt that there was such an obvious mistake at the beginning.,Abandoned the book.,Before leaving, I sent a comment to point out.,But I still gave a four-star evaluation.,I'm very happy.,And immediately opened a special building for correcting mistakes.,Although I didn't use it much.,But there are still some book friends behind to help correct the error.,Thank you.ã
Later, there are more book friends, and it is very interesting to exchange ideas with you, but there are more corresponding considerations, for example, a book friend who was very supportive at the beginning was disappointed and abandoned the book, and the blow was quite big.
At that stage, I looked at the manuscript, and then looked at the outline, and I felt that what I wrote was some running accounts, and I couldn't express the ideas in my mind at all (which is basically the case now), and I almost gave up the pit, but it was about to be put on the shelves, and I didn't want to break the update, so I finally stayed up late and forcibly revised the manuscript, but the result was not satisfied. This resulted in the third edition of the outline.
Stayed up late twice to revise the draft, the first time I felt that I was full of motivation, not tired at all, if it wasn't for the pain in my eyes, I felt that I could continue to code, it was really on top. The second time is coffee......
There are many reasons for this, and I feel like I have lost a lot of motivation. Hand handicap party,Before the average of two hours a chapter,At that stage, three chapters a day,Fixed about five hours at night,Eight o'clock to one o'clock in the morning,Yard a little during the day.,But I didn't write what I wanted to express.ã It's better now.,Under normal circumstances, it's an hour and a half a chapter.,Sometimes it can be speeded up.,But sometimes it's tangled in the plot direction and the like.,It's forced to drag.ã
And I don't follow the plot.,Create another one by yourself in combination with the original plot.,I always feel like I'm digging a hole for myself.,Often when I go back and re-study a setting.,Suddenly find that there's something wrong with a setting in front.,You can only change it.,Finally, I found that the difference between the description of some settings in the original book is too big.,In the end, I simply ignored some settings.,But after all, the stable update rhythm was messed up.,Even the saved manuscript is gone.ã
Yes, at that stage, I had been struggling with the various settings of the original book, flipping through it from beginning to end, relying entirely on saving manuscripts and cramming to ensure updates.
In short,Homo doesn't follow the original.,It's just a stupid fork.,If you don't follow the original.,You'll definitely be stuck by the logic bug of the original work itself!
Moreover, after it was put on the shelves, I was afraid that the update would be broken, so I entered the first competition in advance.
Then in the last two days of last month,Before New Year's Day,The original expected goal was completely disappointed.,Simply let go of myself to participate in the New Year's Eve.,Even the creative guarantee that is about to arrive has been lost.,Combined with the previous update,Just continue to insist on those two days.,You can get a thousand and a half creative guarantee.,But I really don't want to write.,I'm too tired.ã
But when I came back at ten o'clock, I didn't wash it, and I still habitually coded a chapter, and suddenly found that I had developed a habit in the past few months, and it was a bit boring not to write something.
Seriously, I quit all the games I've unloaded and played, thanks to this book. Although there was no profit from writing this book, it successfully prevented me from continuing to make money, and in a sense, it was also earned.
Now, I don't watch much movies and anime, and I'm still chasing serials...... The update is so slow, but I'm also very slow, but I can understand it, after all, those big guys think about the plot more rigorously and complexly, and understand it.
The protagonist's recent negative evaluation of Shrek Academy is actually influenced by my subjective factors, because other settings were easy to solve before, but everything involving Shrek Academy is messy, which makes me annoyed when I think of Shrek now. The simplest example, the dragon god Moon let Zhang Lexuan be a child daughter-in-law, and then slaughtered Zhang Lexuan's enemy, a powerful aristocratic family in the Douling Empire, the character design is completely broken, and even a series of behavioral logic and plot are gone.
Study it carefully, combined with the chaotic operation of Shrek Academy, alas, hate iron and not steel!
Of course,It's also about logic ã― (ãž_ãž)ã,Reality is not logical.ã
Up to now, I've departed from the original outline.,No manuscript.,I want to change the free play type as soon as it comes out.,But the plot designed before can still be used.ã
So now I actually have time to write, and there is a ready-made plot outline, but other ideas always pop up in my mind, such as the way the heroine appears, I don't know how many ways to change the plot at this stage, and the original plan was to let Mr. Lu Da send it away, so as to stimulate the protagonist and Lu Renyi.
Teacher Lu Da noticed An Jie's martial soul and persuaded him, provoking the real evil soul master in the back, and was killed by the evil soul master in order to protect the students, and then Lin Yueyun and the heroine killed the evil soul master together, and cooperated for the first time. It's better than the current version in terms of plot logic.,It can also slightly improve the sense of existence of Lao Lu.,After all, it's a detailed plot designed last month.,Old-fashioned.,But it's easy to use.ã
However, if you want to catch up with this plot, in the previous plot that was skipped in order to avoid breaking the change, Lao Lu and the students of Class 10 missed the copy, which was a hard injury, and it felt too abrupt.
As for now, after completing the novice escort, Lao Lu has lost his meaning, and it is a little redundant, but after thinking about it, redundant is redundant, this kind of responsible teacher, it is better to live.
There is also Lu Renyi's experience plot, I thought about it again and again, and looked at the previous details, emmm, so entangled.
In short, I'm still in a relatively stable state of mind now, and I'll continue to write this book, although I don't have any results, but I don't rely on this to eat anyway, and I will work during the day in the future, and come back at night to play at will, that's all. The pace will slowly slow down later, and although it is as stable as possible, it will definitely collapse some settings. Although there is no income, and the subscription may be dropped, but at least I will relax when I code words, and if the conditions allow, I want to write it again later.