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I'll scold you first, "Fat house, you're embarrassed to call it finished?" So what's going on? Why wasn't that hole filled? Almost finished, are you still digging a new hole here? ”
But let me excuse me, yes, this book is completed normally, and all the holes that are not filled in are deliberately not filled in by me. The story of Chen Liao and "The Game Nobody Plays" has officially ended, the game is on fire, Chen Liao not only won the championship, but also defeated himself and resisted the temptation of the system, ok, that's it. As for the hole left in this book, I don't think it should be explained in an "e-sports theme", nor should it be filled by Chen Liao, an e-sports player. I'll explain the details in more detail later in the next creative plan.
Thank you to all genuine readers, thank you to all the masters who rewarded and voted for monthly tickets, and thank you to all the masters who commented, liked and voted for recommendations. Here, special thanks to the lord of "Summer Night", although I want to come to see you, instead of rewarding an author like me who is lazy and does not change, it is better to draw an extra "648", but whose money is not blown by the wind, and the recognition behind the reward is far from being worth money to me.
Next, I will summarize and evaluate this book, from a business point of view, the income brought to me by this book is not even as much as the money I spent on red envelope promotion, which can be regarded as a complete failure. I don't want to be miserable here, because the truth is that I'm not miserable, at least materially. So if the book is subscribed to a lot of rewards, I will be very happy, and if it hits the street, it will just affect my own mentality, and it will not be to the point where I can't live. Besides, from my personal point of view, I am not in a position to ask all readers to support the genuine version until the water is completely removed from my own work.
Evaluating from a business perspective is a boring thing and doesn't fit my own habits. So I'd better give myself a self-evaluation. Since self-evaluation and evaluation of other people's works will definitely take different scales, it is a more objective method to use your own works for reference and scoring.
If we assume that "Book Title" is a 100 point on the "Book Title" benchmark, "The Game Nobody Plays" is about 65 points. I give a passing mark above a passing mark because the general structure of the book has not collapsed, there are no eunuchs, and there is no unfinished finish. No matter how bad my creative state has been for most of the past six months, the overall direction of the story is under my grasp. And as a work that was only conceived for an hour and "thought and wrote", I changed the tone of the story to a certain extent after adding content outside the outline, but the things I wanted to express were still there.
The extra 5 points, I think the description of some fragments in the book is passable, the characters in the early stage are quite distinct, some suspense and suspense are set up okay, and they also put forward their own views and thoughts on the development of e-sports and the game industry, which should be rare in similar works.
As for the 35 points deducted, I have to talk about it. Personally, I think the biggest drawback of "The Game Nobody Plays Yet" is the depiction in the middle and late stages. Later readers may be able to read the book in two or three days, but in fact, for most of the half year, I can't guarantee a stable performance with 4,000 words a day. Frankly speaking, many times my mental activity when writing books is "hurry up and finish the 4,000 words of TM tomorrow, go to sleep/play games/watch dramas,, I have to go to work tomorrow, it's so annoying." ”
In this state of mind, I don't think I can write well. Moreover, I need to be in a state of "full of emotion" in order to write a satisfactory description, and the mode of online writing determines that I cannot always be in this state. When I wrote "Book Title" back then, I wrote more when I was in a good state today, and I didn't write when I was in a bad state, and "The Game Nobody Plays" didn't give me a chance to slack off. No matter what setbacks I have encountered in my work life, tomorrow's update cannot be interrupted.
Another major problem with this book is that the completion of the characters is not high, which is not only directly related to the above problems, but also because I was not fully prepared for a large number of "e-sports group portraits", which are the most difficult to describe in all scenes, and the e-sports theme inevitably has a large number of group portraits, and in the later stage, the characters converge obviously. At this point, I don't have any excuses, it's just that I don't have enough ability. Maybe I can write the characters a little better if I have twice as much time to polish them, but if you ask yourself, not being able to write well in a short period of time is actually a matter of level. If you want to win the rules of slow chess, playing fast chess is essentially the embodiment of a stinky chess basket.
Another point that the completion of the characters is not high is that there are relatively few personalized plots of the characters, especially in the later stage, just thinking about pushing the main line and finishing the book as soon as possible. Moreover, a good work should synchronize the growth of the characters with the development of the plot, and "The Game Nobody Plays" is also a disaster in this regard. In the later stage, even Xie Liuying, as the heroine, was gradually marginalized and instrumentalized, which was completely my problem.
Another major problem is the so-called story rhythm, although the story line of "Nobody Plays Game" is complete, and there are foreshadowings in many places, but many lines are slowed down and collected in a hurry, as a reader, the reading experience is definitely not good.
All in all, I thought Nobody Played Game was a good story, but unfortunately I didn't tell it well. However, as a work produced "on a whim", it is still good to be able to get this far.
Of course, the above are all excuses, which can basically be equated with gravity that can't pull out. The reader will not care why you have these problems, only whether you can correct them.
So, here I would like to say that I will try to correct the problems that have arisen above in the next book, and I have already thought of practical measures. Although "The Game Nobody Plays Nobody" did not satisfy me, through the writing of more than one million words, I have a deeper understanding of online texts, and the book's questions about "ups and downs" and "cool points" can hopefully be improved. In the next book, I will be more comfortable with the creative rhythm of "daily change", and try to avoid the frequent disconfinements in this book.
Finally, if "Nobody Plays Game" is the first book, I am currently roughly thinking about the fourth book, and I am sure to write the third book to form a more complete and larger story, regardless of the results, I have to be responsible for the reader, this is my bottom line. If the results are still not satisfactory after three books, I may leave the starting point. In the past six months, no matter how bad my state is or how bad my mentality is, I have never doubted my ability, but I have doubted whether the mode of online articles is suitable for me. So when the time comes, I'll think about finishing the title first.
If you want to talk about the future works, you naturally have to start with "The Game No One Plays". Friends who have read the prologue of "The Title of the Book" should know that I am a very ambitious person. And I didn't have any ambitions when I first conceived "Nobody Plays Game", it was supposed to be a simple esports "cool article".
However, wolves always want to eat meat, and in the early days of creation, my understanding of "cool" is very insufficient, simply put, I can't write cool essays, and I can't poke everyone's cool points, so this book began to slide into the abyss of realism from chapter 14, and chapter 16 began to carry my ambitions. I can't reveal too much here in order to avoid affecting everyone's viewing experience of the next two books, but one of the few advantages of me is that I can figure out how to fill in the pit when I dig it, so please rest assured.
You can also guess from the "Postscript",The next book is a martial arts theme.,If there is no accident, it will be officially uploaded on March 20, ten days later.,This time I'm going to polish the outline and save a little more draft.。
Thank you again for always seeing you now, life is not long, and I feel very honored that "The Game Nobody Plays Nobody" can occupy your precious time.