About the book
It's been almost a month since the book was opened, and it's been more than 20 days, and I still want to talk to you about some places, and it's about some readers' opinions.
First, it's about the Dursleys.
First of all, I knew about the Dursleys' protection of Harry, but to be honest, for an eleven-year-old, the Dursleys' approach was indeed too much.
Some people say that the Dursleys raised Harry anyway and bought him glasses to teach him to speak, but do you think the process will be as peaceful as you imagined, whether you read the original book or the movie?
In ancient China, you just bought a house slave, and when the house slave was young, she had to be taught by the master to talk and eat, right?
What's more, Harry grew up in an era of sound laws, and it was also a human rights England, and I don't mean that the Dursleys were extremely evil people, but they were definitely not good people.
Can anyone tell me how Harry's life in the Dursleys differs from that of a minion? The slave has a new dress to wear during the New Year's holidays, right?
Someone said they had love for Harry, and I laughed, and who had love for Harry throughout the book, except for Penny saying that he had a little complicated feelings for Harry because of his blood relationship?
What do you love? The rags that Dudley worn? Insults to him? Or a small cupboard that has lived for eleven years? The lock outside the room? Aunt Peggy's echo of the Dursleys when Harry's parents were abusive? Or was it Vernon's greed for Harry's parents' inheritance?
I never deny the views of readers, but you have to give examples, let's not express our opinions based on speculation, I don't want to clear their name, but I've been looking through it for so long, and I really haven't been able to find anything to clear their name...
And the spoilers for the last few photos I wrote about them did change, which was already a difficult decision for me, after all, I said I wanted to see more possibilities in the story.
The background of the protagonist is from a welfare home, but to be honest, I searched for the background of the early 90s in the United Kingdom, and the children in the welfare home at least have a decent set of clothes to wear, does Harry have any?
How cheap does this have to be if you love this? Cheap or not?
The main character is there to improve Harry's living situation, but I feel that if Sirius were to pick up Harry, it is hard to say whether the Dursleys would still be alive.
Some people say that my writing style is too extreme, too powerful for the Dursleys, that the main character is a bit similar to the nature of Grindelwald, and that I have magic and I am awesome.
But it's soft enough, I've got magic, I'm really awesome.
Equal dialogue also needs a foundation, when your power of life and death is in the hands of others, and you still expect to have equal dialogue with others, that's not, that's stupid*...
I wouldn't have killed them if it were me, but they shouldn't be better...
Isn't that the truth? I'm so strong, you're a Muggle bouncing around in front of me, and the protagonist isn't a respected old wizard like Dumbledore.
What's more, Dumbledore was by Aunt Penny at times...
If you're interested, you can take a look at Dumbledore's youth, he wasn't as fond of Muggles as you might think, and he just didn't hate them at best.
So I don't want everyone to compare this in this regard, read the book, just have a good time, I can write like this or after careful consideration.
On the other hand, it's about the heroine.,I said that I set up an original heroine and an original heroine.。
Actually, this aspect is quite embarrassing.
Because I was afraid that readers wouldn't like it when I wrote the original heroine, I thought about it and added Hermione.
I'm afraid that readers who hate to dismantle the original CP won't like it, so I'm wondering if to delete a heroine.
Then I made the same mistake as all my compatriots in distress: children make choices...
And then I emmm... Thinking about it, it's actually good to have two.,Although some people don't like the harem very much.,But I think the words of the two should be barely acceptable...
The most difficult point is actually that Hermione's character has largely limited the development of the harem, because Hermione has always been a very strong and independent girl, and this kind of girl is very incompatible with writing harem essays, which is why I plan to cultivate it since I was a child hahahaha...
Then there are bugs about the early stages of the book, one is Halo 2001.
2001 was released when Harry was in his second year, which was a bug that I didn't pay attention to at the beginning, because 2000 was there before Harry entered the school, and 2001 was an upgraded version, and I always thought it was out together...
The other is that Quirrell taught Harry to be a Muggle professor before, and I've changed that.
The main thing is the above.,The emphasis is that the protagonist is not the Virgin.,If you're good to me, I'll be good to you.,I'll kill you if you talk to me.,So don't think that Long Aotian or something.,Whoever it is, most people will be like this.,What's more, the protagonist was originally a little orphan begging for a living on the streets of London!
The strength of the two is not equal, there is no equality, this point is for all readers, but also some of the lessons I learned in the previous years of work, don't ask for equality with the person who holds your lifeline...
That's all I want to say, and I hope you can support this book more in the future, there are some arrangements behind the Dursley family, mainly the changes I want to describe, and the story will begin to become gradually exciting from the second grade, so everyone vote for more recommendations~
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