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Everyone talked a lot about the single chapter before, and I read it too.
This book started from the Yu Ji chapter, and at the same time, after the end of the touch Yu, the grades began to fall.
I summarized it, there are three main failures: one is the heroine of the snow hide, the second is the lack of interaction, and the third is not enough sand sculpture.
In fact, the reason why I hid Yu Ji Xue,It's also because I'm afraid that I'll not write well.,Thinking about taking it out and showing it at a critical moment.,I can grasp it.,But maybe I'm too hard.,The snow has been hidden for too long.,This reminds me of some books I used to read.,My favorite plot is the interaction between the male protagonist and the female owner.,Whenever the damn author hides the female owner, it's annoying.,As a result, it's my turn to write it myself.,I also became the damn author.,It's really a success and a defeat of Yu Ji.。
Secondly, I am getting worse and worse in terms of interaction, because I am also struggling with myself, whether it is a single heroine or a harem, I want to be a single Yuji on the one hand, and on the other hand, I want to think about the harem, because of the indecision, I dare not write more.
Finally, there is the sand sculpture part, the book is full of sand sculpture flavor at the beginning, but after the result is written, the sand sculpture plot is less and less, and it is naturally not interesting enough.
If you think about it, why should I hide Yu Ji?
Soon after the book opened, FGO2.3 came out, the Great Qin chapter came out, and the moon Yu Ji came out, and then because of the standing painting, because of the voice, because of the handsome treasure, because of all kinds of things, I fell in love with Yu Ji out of control, so I changed the plot of the original plan and wrote the Great Qin volume.
That's right, the Great Qin Scroll was not originally in the plan, this volume said a thousand ways and ten thousand, and there was only one purpose, that is, Yu Ji.
As a result, I wrote it, and the response was good, and everyone liked Yu Ji, but I was worried that the aftermath would not be written well, so I hid her......
What the hell am I doing?
I didn't even react to the drop in my grades so much.
In retrospect, it was simply the stupidest thing to do.
Change! All overhauled! The plot has been changed!
Although I don't know if it's too late to change now, no matter what, I have to pick up my original intention, write about my Yu Ji, write about my interactions, and write about my sand sculptures!
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