August, for Xi Muhan, is not perfect.

"The Lightest Whisper" signed a new contract with her, increased the manuscript fee again, and "Girls' Century" was also in charge of the comic production of "The Country of Clouds", but she still felt that this summer vacation was lacking.

With regrets, taking the high-speed train, Xi Muhan went to Yanjing to study in the last year of college.

Shen Xin also packed up his mood and prepared to draw the next manuscript.

The appearance of the synthetic beast really made Shen Xin very uncomfortable, but Aunt Niu's comics and the treatment of Nina in "Steel FA" ended in the point, using the scar man Scar, to kill Tucker and Nina.

The treatment of "Steel Forge 03" is very depressing. Tucker and the Synth did not die, and when Edward visited the Fifth Research Institute, he met Tucker in the form of a Synth. Eventually, Tucker used the Philosopher's Stone to refine Nina, who had only a body and no soul, and disappeared with her body.

Knowing this, why did Tucker refine his daughter and Alexander in the first place?

Perhaps it is the confirmation of the saying that some things will be cherished after they are lost, right?

However, it has to be said that after the "Synthbeast" incident, "Steelcore" became good-looking.

This kind of good-looking, not only because of the addition of fist-to-flesh fights, but more importantly, the story and plot gradually unfold after this, and the androids appear one by one, and the plot related to the Philosopher's Stone will also appear.

Readers of this world are not yet aware of Nina's tragedy.

Shen Xin's previous comics basically had no slots, except that Zuo Wei's departure was more unacceptable, but now that I look back at "Chess Soul", Zuo Wei's departure has indeed improved the connotation of the whole comic.

After the publication of episode 7, readers thought it was still a normal episode.

In order to recover as soon as possible, Edward and Al entrusted Colonel Roy Mastan, the "Alchemist of Fire", to help him find an alchemist who understood the refining of life, and Roy recommended Tucker.

Whether it was Xiu Tucker or the little girl Nina, their appearance did not cause much turmoil, but Ye Hexu saw this page, but he had another mentality.

"This is a bit unexpected." Ye Hexu scratched his head, let out a surprised sound, turned his head excitedly, and looked at his assistant, "Have you watched the latest episode of "Steel Forge"?" ”

"I watched it, but the ranking should be overpowered by "Hunting Abyss", and I feel that the last few words of "Steel" are too bland. But the fight in the first few words is really powerful, I didn't expect Mr. Shen to draw the fight so well. ”

"Bland? That's what you don't understand. Ye Hexu sneered, "At the beginning of this sentence, there was already foreshadowing, but you didn't see it." ”

"Is there one?"

The three assistants all looked at Ye Hexu in surprise.

"You see, on the fifth page of this story, it says that Tucker has been refining a synthetic beast. At that time, the synth only said one sentence, 'I want to die,' and ended up starving to death on a hunger strike. Why does a synth beast speak, haven't you ever thought about it? Ye Hexu asked rhetorically.

The assistant shook his head and looked at Ye Hexu with curiosity.

"I don't know, but I think it's very informative...... Anyway, take your time, right? I sometimes feel that the world of "Steel" is very similar to our real world. Not in the 18th and 19th centuries, but now. Ye Hexu stretched his waist, "The alchemist has mastered some of the current science and technology by using the refining array. ”

Today's technology is also touching the field of "artificial creatures".

The assistants didn't seem to understand, and their eyes subconsciously looked at "Steel".

Teacher Shen ...... Really think of so much?

The minds of the three assistants were full of question marks.

Haruka Tamagawa's studio.

"Okay, the second word is to enter a strange world, and the third word is to defeat the opponent and come out of another world. In the fourth episode, you didn't let anyone else into another world, which was handled very well. ”

Yan Fei read the name of the fourth episode of "Game" and nodded again and again.

"I still have experience in this level of plot arrangement." Haruka Tamagawa scratched his head, "After the tense plot is over, it must be slowed down." First of all, in the first episode, someone is killed by the 'mastermind', and the atmosphere of the manga becomes serious. Subsequently, the protagonist and the others enter another world and it takes two words to escape, and the reader should breathe a sigh of relief, which should make the reader feel more relaxed. ”

"You're right, but that's not enough. If you draw it the way you do, it's a wasted statement. ”

"Huh? Why? Tamagawa Haruka looked confused.

Because, this statement has no effect on the later chapters. Have you watched the latest episode of "Steel"? ”

"Hmm. The Japanese version to see. ”

Because he didn't understand Huaxia, Ishizawa of "Young Leap" deliberately took a photo of "Steel Chain" and sent it to him.

"This seems ordinary, but it actually has foreshadowing."

"Huh? Have it? ”

"Absolutely. Don't you wonder how that synth came to be? ”

"I don't know, I didn't say it in the comics." Tamagawa Haruka shook his head.

"You're wrong, it's in the comics. Flip back two pages and Tucker's runaway wife ......"

Yan Fei has read the original manuscript behind, so she knows the follow-up plot.

Looking at the previous content in turn, she realized those unknown details.

After being reminded by Yan Fei, Yuchuan Haruka immediately understood, his eyes widened, his face was pale, and his face showed horror.

"Wait...... Sister Yan, do you mean his wife...... Tucker took his wife and some kind of biosynthetic? ”

Yan Fei nodded.

"It's unbelievable. Is this still a royal comic? This kind of path is more like an evil comic ......," Haruka Tamagawa said in surprise.

It is not by blood and sweat to attract readers, but by the well-crafted plot.

"That's why I said that if Game wants to compare with Steelcore, you have to work on every detail."

Haruka Tamagawa looked nervous and bit his fingers, "That'...... You say, after the protagonist returns, what can these people do except chat and relax? ”

"Foreshadowing." Yan Fei said patiently, "You can leave some clues in the front of the plot that may be used later." ”

Tamagawa Haruka scratched his head, and after carefully reading the setting and outline, he snapped his fingers and said excitedly: "There is." ”

"Huh?"

"Food...... When people are in a confined space, water and food are the top priority. By completing the mission, the player can get a certain amount of food. In the end, these people will definitely clash because of the shortage of food...... I can lay the groundwork for food in the fourth episode. ”

In the end, Haruka Tamagawa's eyes were bright, and joy climbed up his eyebrows.

"Makes sense. Still, you're ignoring a problem. ”

"Yes...... Is it? Tamagawa Haruka was a little confused.

The corners of Yan Fei's mouth curled slightly, "The people trapped here will die, and the food of the dead characters will be obtained by the survivors, so there will be a possibility - the food of the survivors will increase." In other words, the situation of 'food shortage' may not be established. ”