Wang Wenhong blinked, holding a pen in his hand, and couldn't write a word for a long time.

Shen Xin divided the score into four parts, namely "Plot", "Storyboard", "Painting Skills" and "Network & Effect Line", with a total score of 50/20/20/10 respectively.

Although there are no comments, where the points are deducted, at least in Wang Wenhong's opinion, it is clear at a glance.

And so it is.

He carefully read a few cartoons, then looked back at the ratings, analyzed them carefully, and felt that the deduction made sense.

Even if there were a few points that disagreed with his opinion, after thinking about it carefully, he felt that Shen Xin's judgment was more accurate.

It can't be helped.

He can judge the quality of the "plot", but in terms of "storyboarding" and "painting skills", he is not as good as Shen Xin, and even if it is the plot, he and Shen Xin also have some different opinions, so he can only wait for Shen Xin to finish the manuscript and then ask for the scoring rules.

"I can use storyboards to fully express the content of the story, and at the same time, the use of dot paper and cable is also good, and the content of the story is boring and boring......"

Suddenly hearing Shen Xin speak, Wang Wenhong was startled, and quickly picked up the pen and recorded Shen Xin's words.

However, hearing the comments, he can already feel that the score of this comic is definitely not more than 60 points.

"55 points."

Really......

Hearing this score, Wang Wenhong had a black line, which was another low score...... No, this score should be in the top 10......

Mr. Shen, you're pressing the score too low, aren't you?

Wang Wenhong sighed in his heart, but he didn't say anything.

Just like Shen Xin said, anyway, 10 people are accepted, and they are admitted from high to low.

Actually, Shen Xin's heart was even more depressed, and he read the comics all night, but these comics ...... Don't talk about it.

Comics are the same in many ways, and at the end of the day, they're all about telling a story – an interesting story.

Some, the front seems to be smooth, but the ending is often unexpected, and even makes people applaud, and its typical representative is O. Henry.

However, in order to achieve this effect, people have done a lot of foreshadowing in the front, so that readers feel "unexpected and reasonable".

And the plot of these authors does not stand up to scrutiny at all, the content in the front is superficial, and the last page is heavy. After reading it, I was confused.

There are also some comics, big play settings, and the pages are full of dense words, which makes people look big.

Please, even if it's not Xiaobai's kind, but at least it has to be understood, right?

Shen Xin does not recommend using too complex systems for short comics, because cumbersome content is difficult to express through limited space.

In a sub-grid of comics, there is an invisible limit on how many dialogs there are, and if there are too many dialogs, it will look bloated.

In the same dialog box, there is also a certain number of words, so the author may have to go over and over again and consider a sentence many times in order to express more meaning in as few sentences as possible.

Although there are no drafting rules, these are accepted by the authors.

Just like the Internet, a lot of it is a paragraph.

Can web writers not know what a paragraph says — well, a few people probably don't know — but they do it to fit into the screen of their phone.

Of course, the author can also write long paragraphs, but those words are piled up on the screen, and many readers don't have the heart to read them, but one sentence makes readers feel very relaxed when they read it.

That's why there are some unwritten rules.

If the author says that he only writes long paragraphs, of course this is fine, and this is not a dead rule. However, the final decision is made by the reader, and the reader must be satisfied.

Back in the comics, the dialog box covers the character's face and doesn't change it...... Do you really think you're a rich thief? There are no characters on a page, it's all text, and someone still buys it?

Seeing these settings, Shen Xin really had nothing to say.

"Brother Wang, don't let me read the solicitation for "Young Future" in the future." Shen Xin sighed.

When Wang Wenhong heard Shen Xin speak, he immediately picked up the pen.

"Brother Wang, in the future, "Young Future" will ...... No, I almost fell on the road. ”

Wang Wenhong thought it was a comment, and wrote a few words, but suddenly realized that something was wrong, and hurriedly strung half a sentence.

"I said, Mr. Shen, can you not suddenly pop out of a sentence, it's very embarrassing."

"Huh?" Shen Xin looked up at the frustrated Wang Wenhong, suddenly realized something, smiled, and then hurriedly waved his hand and said, "I'm just sighing." ”

"I also know that the quality of the author has declined, first, this is the essay of "Juvenile Future", and the grade is definitely not as good as "Comic Future", in addition, the "Golden Brush" award has indeed attracted a large number of powerful newcomers to be serialized on the multi-comic network."

Shen Xin's eyebrows raised slightly, this is also a fact.

"You can't do nothing, can you?" Asked rhetorically.

Now "Comic Future" is in a situation where there must be more high-income authors than Duoman.com, but the magazine is faced with a problem, limited by the "capacity" of a single magazine, they can't eat all the serialization.

"Look, I'm waiting for the magazine's app to come out. At that time, the magazine should also cooperate with the app and take action. The magazine will not let this piece of pie be divided. ”

Shen Xin nodded, his gaze swept over the manuscript in his hand.

The author and the platform are only a cooperative relationship, not an employer, and only when there is competition, the author can maximize the benefits.

"Huh?" Shen Xin subconsciously glanced at the manuscript in his hand twice, and couldn't help but snort lightly.

"What's wrong?" Wang Wenhong hurriedly asked.

"Cats Back to School? I remember that Mr. Zuo's cartoon is a cat, right? Shen Xin said.

"yes."

"That's fun." Shen Xin turned over the original manuscript seriously.

He has seen Zuo Yuan's basic skills, which are relatively good, but the only problem is the inconsistency of rhythm and style.

As long as he is aligned with the road, Zuo Yuan may not be able to reach Han Ye's level, but it should not be too much of a problem to stabilize in the tenth place.

The tenth place in "Comic Future" can already make professional cartoonists a lot of money.

The story takes place in one afternoon, after lunch, the protagonist returns to the classroom, and after being knocked unconscious by a cat that fell from a tree, he is sent to the medical room, but the protagonist's soul escapes into the cat's body, and observes the life of the entire campus from the perspective of the cat.

There are no major ups and downs or fluctuations in the whole story, but the plot is fed back to the reader through the observation of the students.

There aren't many dialog boxes throughout the comic, but there are some light dialogues. Overall, there is no plot that is too burning, but it is very comfortable to read.

"How's this one?"

Shen Xin knocked on the table twice, took the signature pen, tapped twice, and scored the score.

Plot, 43; 16;Painting:16; Outlets & Effect Lines, 7;Total Score: 82. Edit: (crossed out). ”

Wang Wenhong saw Shen Xin write the editor for the first time, although he skipped it later.

"Manga is good manga...... However, the creation of serialization is very difficult. You relayed this sentence to Sister Yan privately, this is my opinion. Shen Xin said seriously.

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