After reading everyone's comments, I had a lot of impressions.

For spraying simple, simple also feels like they didn't spray wrong, and even the simplicity itself feels like it's a bit written by that.

For example, I can't understand what I write, and what I read is very boring.

For these book friends, I can only say sorry for it, try my best to correct it, and I hope you can continue to read it.

There are also some who say that the protagonist dies, and there is no trace of the character that the protagonist should have.

The words here are simple and can only be said that the protagonist Luo Luo is not a god, he is just a lucky person like those lucky people who won the lottery and became rich overnight.

How about you go back after getting rich overnight, of course, you can do as much as you can, but under the premise of being angry, someone must provoke him, otherwise the protagonist will not be idle to find something to offend people.

But if someone else has to do something, anyway, the protagonist has a plug-in, of course, he just rolled up his sleeves and did it, who are you afraid of, no matter what the consequences are, let's beat him up first.

As for the character of the protagonist.

Let's take an example, such as respecting teachers!

The protagonists Luo Luo and Moon, although Luo Luo's title for Moon as a teacher is a bit problematic, but respecting teachers is not a small title that can be changed.

From a simple point of view, it is better to use the words "teacher" and "master" to call the teacher all the time, and it is better to use a familiar and affectionate title.

Is it really not okay to call one's master an "old man"?

Did the "old man" offend anyone this time?

That's not a bad name, isn't it?

Respect is in the heart, the Buddha is not in the heart.

The protagonist also needs to grow, and although there are perfect protagonists, even if they are perfect, they still need to grow.

Finally, let's explain the relevant settings of this book.

1. The timeline of the plug-in is Douluo Dalu 2, but it may not completely follow the direction of the plot.

2. This novel is a bit ambitious, and the world view is not only the Douluo Continent series, but also some others.

3. There will be eggs, there will be bread, and there will be cute little heroines, so please calm down.

4. Please put it away, you can't sing X_X song

5.emmmm hasn't thought about it yet~

6. There may also be ~

7. You can guess~

8. Guarantee that it will not come to the real fragrance~

9. It's really fun ^_^ to skin it~

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Meng Xinbai writes a book for the first time!