Chapter 197: The Script Problem
"Tsk, you haven't seen the mouth of that Senior Brother Li later!"
When talking to his girlfriend about Li Han he saw today, Sun Peng still said in a slur voice: "It's just that you can say the dead are alive, and then the living ones are crippled...... If it weren't for me guarding a trace of Lingtai Qingming, maybe I would have agreed to him on the spot! ”
Listening to Sun Peng's exaggerated statement, Zheng Jia suddenly sneered.
But after laughing, Zheng Jia blinked his eyes and asked, "Can you almost agree to what you said, it looks ...... This Senior Brother Li's words should be quite reasonable, right? ”
"This ...... Sort of. ”
Even though he was still hesitating in his heart, Sun Peng had to admit that Li Han's words were indeed reasonable.
If no one can do it, they won't do it, so what year and month will it take?
Sun Peng is not really rigid and stubborn, he must admit that his ideas may be a little inappropriate, if the directors of this world are allowed to ponder, will they really walk the road on the earth again? Anyway, Sun Peng watched the action movies and animation styles of this world on the Internet, and felt that if he and Zheng Jia could go on forever, his grandson might be able to see that day before he was born......
After Sun Peng thought about it for a while, Zheng Jia said leisurely: "By the way, I didn't listen to you in the end, what did that director brother want to do?" Do you want to make your own animation with the copyright you bought? ”
"No, he wants to work with me to do it...... Belch. ”
When he said this, Sun Peng had a headache and said: "That's what gives me a headache, if he wanted to do it himself, I would have refused a long time ago, but people encouraged me to do it together...... Let me design the style and movement of the animation myself, and to be honest, I'm really excited! ”
"If you like it, just do it, you originally studied animation major, what's there to worry about?"
Zheng Jia couldn't understand Sun Peng's thoughts.
"Well, you don't understand."
Shaking his head, Sun Peng smiled bitterly: "It would be nice if it was as simple as you thought...... The point is, no one knows what to do! I'm also studying animation myself, but I don't have any idea, how do I do it? ”
Either you don't do it, or you want to do it well!
But this generation of Sun Peng was a scumbag in college, and the experience of doing animation is the three trailers that fool readers, and dare to do martial arts animation at this level?
After thinking about it, he felt that it was even more reliable to make a movie by himself!
If you make a movie, there are still many classics on the earth that you can learn from, such as "New Dragon Gate Inn", "Smiling Proud Jianghu" or something, whether you have the ability to restore it or not, you will always be directly compared to the gourd painting scoop, right? But who does he borrow from martial arts animation? Those domestic animations such as "Xia Lan" and "Qin Shi Mingyue", which are not small, may be really good, but he has never seen them in his previous life!
And in Sun Peng's opinion, if Jin Dada wants to make an animation, in a sense, the difficulty is definitely the top.
Take a biography of the Condor Heroes as an example, how to express the eighteen palms of the dragon descending and the left and right fights that readers talk about? Could it be that a dragon flew out of the protagonist's arms when he slapped the dragon's eighteen palms? Or simply shout before making a move...... Oh, no, can't you shout "Kanglong has regrets" and "Flying Dragon is in the sky"?
Although this is a common problem in animation and martial arts TV series, it is also a helpless move, after all, if you don't shout, how do the audience know what you are using? But when he thought of those shots, Sun Peng always felt so embarrassed.
In contrast, Sun Peng felt that it was more reliable to change Gu Dada.
The most of the ancient ones is pretending to be forced.,And animation is also the most suitable carrier for pretending to be forced.,As long as the music and picture are in place, the effect is absolutely first-class.。 And more importantly, when pretending to be forced, you can also pose and create an atmosphere, Ximen Fuxue and Ye Gucheng went to the top of the Forbidden City, a few words per person, and a few minutes passed than whose sword was longer and heavier......
“……”
After blinking his eyes, Zheng Jia stopped talking.
Don't intervene if she doesn't understand, although she really wants to see the animated version of Condor Shooting and Smiling Proud as soon as possible, and use her eyes to see what the martial arts world is like in Sun Peng's heart, but after all, this is her boyfriend's own business, and Zheng Jia doesn't want to have any impact because of herself.
"Forget it, don't talk about this, I'll think about it later."
Sun Peng shook his head and said helplessly: "Fortunately, this director is my senior brother, this matter can be delayed, but the matter of the other director can't be delayed......"
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“……”
When he saw Director Li Lizhi in Zhao Jinxiang's mouth, Sun Peng was speechless again.
On the way here, Sun Peng's mind has been turning either two thick nose hairs, or the image of a lewd man with his hair tightly attached to his scalp, but he didn't expect that Director Li Lizhi of this world is a handsome guy with a height of 1.85 meters, a strong body, and a beautiful face comparable to the little fresh meat in the film industry!
Compared with the two, Sun Peng was a little disappointed.
As usual, he still greeted and then greeted, and after introducing the two of them, Lao Zhao withdrew, as if he deliberately wanted them to chat alone.
Although he is a director who came back from studying in the United States, Li Lizhi, who is thirty-five or sixteen years old, is obviously very suitable for the domestic people, first complimented Sun Peng's script with a smile, and then talked about his experience as an assistant director after returning from studying in the United States.
After chatting for more than ten minutes, Sun Peng finally couldn't help but speak first: "Director Li......"
"Hehe, Xiaopeng, you're too polite."
Hurriedly waved his hand, Li Lizhi smiled and said: "The director is too polite, if you don't dislike it, just call me Brother Li." ”
"Uh...... Good. ”
Grinning, Sun Peng felt that this person was quite interesting, don't look at it, just changed the name, but it can shorten the distance between each other at once.
Therefore, Sun Peng was also as good as a stream, and immediately nodded and said: "Brother Li, I heard that you think there is a problem with the character setting of the script, can you talk about it specifically?" ”
"Well, it's just a little bit of a superficial idea."
Smiling slightly, Li Lizhi's expression changed slightly, and he said: "Actually, since Mr. Zhao and Golden Eagle Video decided to ask me to be the director of these three episodes, I have been pondering the script, pondering the plot and character settings in it, because I always feel that something seems to be wrong." Then before the Spring Festival, I finally realized that something was wrong - that is, the proportion of several characters was out of balance! ”
"Oh? Can you elaborate on that? ”
Sun Peng's eyes narrowed slightly, and he asked in a deep voice.
No one knows the problem of the script better than Sun Peng, he almost copied the content of the three episodes of the American drama, but the most important characters in it were just given a makeover. And in order to make Lin Lin's role aggravated, Sun Peng even put the content of several other people's performances on his cousin!
Sun Peng knew that this might be inappropriate, and he also felt awkward, but he couldn't think of an inappropriate and awkward way.
This is the difference between a layman, a half-expert and a real insider, Sun Peng is like this, Lao Zhao and Lin Lin who read the script first are like this, and perhaps the same is true for film and television companies and video website personnel who read the script later, after all, they only see the excitement and novelty of the case, and they have no professional ability of the directors.
"To put it simply, it's too prominent for the heroine."
After organizing the language, Li Lizhi said seriously: "To take the simplest example, the first episode is followed by the appearance of the team members one by one, and the script uses short plots and shots to show the team position, style and personality of each of them, it can be said that the writing is quite wonderful, but the next ...... It seems that all the scenes are focused on the heroine's head. Isn't it strange that you spend time describing each person in detail, but you don't have the opportunity to express them later? ”
"Sizzle......"
The toothache seemed to be a cold breath, and Sun Peng finally understood.
I see!
No wonder Sun Peng always felt awkward, because he forced other people's characteristics on Lin Lin's head, can he not be awkward and blunt?
After thinking about it for a while, Sun Peng frowned and said, "Brother Li, what if it is still filmed according to the original script?" Is it a big impact? ”
"This ...... It's hard to say. ”
Shaking his head, Li Lizhi smiled bitterly: "Anyway, from my point of view, the story itself is very good, but the process of telling the story is very awkward, and it is ......."
The director didn't continue, and Sun Peng suddenly became anxious: "And what? Brother Li, it's okay to say it directly! ”
"Okay!"
seems to be ruthless, Li Li said with a straight face: "And I have met the heroine a few times, and I have also watched her performance, to be honest...... Personally, I don't think she can play this role well! The girl named Lin Lin is indeed very beautiful, but her acting skills are too tender, and she can't control so many scenes, if she has to catch ducks on the shelves, it is likely to ruin this drama! ”
…… Well, Sun Peng finally saw the shadow of studying in the United States from Li Lizhi.
Of course, his face turned ugly at this time.
Headache!
Sun Peng knew that what people said was right, because he was worried about this when he wrote the script, so he subconsciously chose such a group play. It's just that I want to choose a good drama again, and I want to add a drama to Lin Lin, and slowly Lin Lin has more and more roles...... Sun Peng is also quite helpless, after all, being able to write a good script does not mean that he can make his cousin's acting skills improve by leaps and bounds, even if she is indeed much better than before.
"Let me think, let me think."
The index finger and thumb of his right hand squeezed the area between his eyes, and Sun Peng sighed and said, "Brother Li, I understand what you mean, but ...... Let me think about it for two days, and I'll get back to you as soon as possible! ”
"Okay, I'll wait for you."
After saying that, Li Lizhi was down-to-earth, and nodded vigorously.
Sun Peng, who was not in a good mood, didn't want to say anything more at this time, and said casually: "Brother Li, are there any questions?" If not, I'll have something to do later......"
"Oh, yes, there's another one!"
As if he suddenly remembered something, Li Lizhi hurriedly smiled: "The last one, I have always been curious about something, I hope Xiaopeng can answer my doubts!" ”
"Okay, you say."
After a slight pause, Li Lizhi asked with a smile: "After reading these three episodes of scripts, I think what makes me most strange is that they are not at all like our domestic slow crime dramas, no matter the style of the characters' dialogues or the super fast pace, they all feel like an American TV series...... So I'm curious, how the hell do you do that? ”