After Yan Fei left the editorial office, she took a taxi to Shen Xin's studio.

On the first floor, five assistants are cooperating with the drawing of "Y's", while on the second floor, Wang Wenhong and Xi Muhan are sitting on the sofa, carefully flipping through the name.

"What's wrong? Name out? Yan Fei gasped and went up to the second floor, and the whole person looked very nervous.

"yes." Xi Muhan got up and handed over the three words in his hand to Yan Fei, "Sister Yan, here you go." ”

Yan Fei nodded, took Name, and sat on the sofa.

Name has three words in total, at least 80 pages, and is very thick to the touch.

"Mr. Shen, the time you have been serializing Name has taken a little longer than you imagined." Yan Fei said with a smile.

Shen Xin laughed dryly, "I'm in a little trouble." ”

The origin of the story of "DN" is Area 11, and Shen Xin encountered some problems when he changed the background.

For example, when the month was being investigated, the FBI of the United States was involved. This kind of thing doesn't happen in Huaxia.

Therefore, Shen Xin can only invent an international organization to replace the FBI.

Other backgrounds, such as the police system, have also been simplified, and some of the details have also been adjusted.

Before drawing the name of the serialized comics, Shen Xin didn't care about these problems. It was only after he started writing that Shen Xin realized that he had ignored these factors.

Other types of comics don't matter, but "DN" is a battle of wits, and Shen Xin tries to make the whole comic logical.

"Is it difficult?" Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin nervously.

Shen Xin shook his head, "It's not going to happen, I've already thought of countermeasures, and the next thing is to find information." ”

Yan Fei saw that Shen Xin's expression was normal, she relaxed slightly, and her eyes fell on the name in her hand.

The short story of "DN" has a relatively simple story structure, but it is definitely not possible to use such a simple structure for a long serialization.

The first episode is called "Boring", but the story is not boring at all.

Yan Fei finished reading the first sentence in one go, without any effort.

In the first episode, the main character, Atsuki (Yajin Yue), accidentally picks up a notebook and uses the note to begin punishing the guilty.

The first episode of the story involves two locations, one is the Death Realm and the other is the Human Realm.

This sentence mainly uses the technique of interpolation. First, Ah Yue picked up the notes, and then five days later, the god of death found Ah Yue, and Ah Yue began to recall the past five days, he used the notes to punish evil and promote good.

Within a week, 52 people were known to have died, all of them from heart palsy, which caused concern for CPOs.

In the last compartment of this episode, a man dressed in light clothes sits on the floor, looking at the screen on the floor, showing that he is extremely interested in this matter: "No matter how great I am, this kind of thing has to be done with the help of the police. ”

"Did the opponent come out in the first word?" Yan Fei was surprised, "It's too fast, isn't it?" ”

Obviously, this is a brain-hole comic with "note" as the golden finger.

In the short story, Wang Jing's performance is still relatively restrained, but Ah Yue has gone to the other extreme.

Generally speaking, the author uses the golden finger to create a sense of "coolness", so that readers can feel resonance, and in the subsequent creation, use this "cool" point to attract readers as much as possible. Even if there is a need for an opponent, it is when the reader is bored with Goldfinger and the grades start to slip.

However, "DN" is different, and Ah Yue's use of the golden finger of note shows that it is only reflected in Ah Yue's memories with Sulfur. After that, the international organization was immediately introduced, and Ah Yue also had an opponent.

From the first episode, it can basically be judged that the "cool" point of this comic is not how Ah Yue uses note, but how to fight wits and courage with this light-colored person.

Next, there is the second episode "L", and the name portrays the world's number one detective from the side. At the same time, L and Moon finally had their first fight.

L uses a condemned prisoner to provoke Ah Yue, and deduces that Ah Yue is in Hongchuan, China.

The first time the two met, L took the initiative.

The third episode "Family" points out the identity of the moon, the person in charge of this case, Ye Yilang (Soichiro) turned out to be the father of the moon, and the moon also got the information of the investigation from his father, and L speculated that he could know the information of the police through the law of Ah Yue's change of action......

Yan Fei finished reading the content of the three words in one go, her mind was messed up, and she couldn't speak.

"How is it, Sister Yan?" Shen Xin looked at Yan Fei.

"Huh?" Yan Fei came to her senses and looked at Shen Xin in surprise, "The pace is fast, it's too fast-wait, I want to ask, this person called 'L' is just an insignificant chess piece, or a very important role." ”

Yan Fei stared at Shen Xin, she hoped it was the first answer.

"L is a very important person...... You can see him as another protagonist. Shen Xin said seriously.

Yan Fei sighed, frowned, looked at the name in his hand, and shook his head slightly.

"It's too fast...... By doing so, you're limiting the length of this comic. Such a good brain hole, but it quickly led to an opponent who was on par with Ah Yue, which instantly accelerated the pace of the story. If it's an ordinary comic, Ssulfur meets Ah Yue, and Ah Yue uses note, just these two parts, you can draw more than a dozen words. The current name wastes these settings. ”

"Why stretch the plot?" Shen Xin asked rhetorically.

"Huh?" Yan Fei looked at Shen Xin in surprise, "Of course, it's for better results......

"I understand what you mean, Sister Yan." Shen Xin nodded, "The longer the comic, the easier it is to attract readers." The sales of the works are also better. ”

On the one hand, the magazine is reluctant to end the cash cow, and on the other hand, no author dares to guarantee that his next work will achieve better results than the previous one.

"So, you should take advantage of your current popularity to lengthen the ......length of "DN", Yan Fei glanced at Wang Wenhong again, and complained, "You have served as the editor-in-charge, you know the importance of space to the work, and you don't persuade Mr. Shen?" ”

"Skim the length...... What do you think of the plot, storyboard, and rhythm of "DN" in the first three episodes? Wang Wenhong asked rhetorically.

Yan Fei bit her lip and stared at the name in her hand, "Great." Even though it's just a draft, I'm already excited. ”

"Is it the ceiling of evil comics?" Wang Wenhong then asked.

"Count!" Yan Fei nodded, without thinking.

"In all fairness, do you think you can reach the ceiling if you do what you say?" Wang Wenhong asked again.

Yan Fei shook her head, then looked at Shen Xin, "I understand." You also want to make DN a classic. ”

Shen Xin nodded, "I want to draw an evil comic that is as wonderful as "Steel". ”

In order to make "DN" finish at the most perfect time, he even deleted the space of Nia and Milo.