Kong Xian opened the Gate of the Stone of Destiny, and the first thing she saw was a young man in a white coat, making a phone call, and behind him was a building.

A large instrument smashed into the top floor of the building.

The color of the color is so heavy that the background is a little blurry, which makes Kong Xian's heart feel a kind of depression. But whether it is the composition of the color pages, or the drawing of characters and scenes, they are all in place, and the colors also highlight the tone of the whole book - deep.

Sure enough, as soon as the first chapter begins, there are a lot of unique features.

After Ganglun witnessed Hong Liqi's death, he saw Hong Liqi again, which should prove that he had crossed over, but he didn't know it, because he had crossed into a "parallel world".

There are quite a lot of time-traveling texts in Qingzhong, but most of them are the protagonists who have an accident and travel to another world, while Ganglun returns to a parallel world because he sent a text message.

However, it is better to say that it is a parallel world, because of Ganglun's crossing, things around him have changed.

The angle of the story is good, and this kind of writing has never appeared, but the essence of this one is still crossing.

This was the first thought that popped up in Kong Xian's mind after seeing the text message Gang Lun sent to Ah Zhi, and the changes that happened around her.

Subsequently, the author's pen turned, and Ganglun returned to the laboratory and talked with Zhen Youli and Ah Zhi.

I have to say that another's drawing skills are really good, and the illustrations in the text clearly draw the appearance and personality of the three characters.

It's just that the story suddenly jumps from the death of Hong Liqi to daily life, which is really a little incomprehensible.

"The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" has only been updated with four chapters on the app, telling the story of Hong Liqi in an open class, responding to Ganglun's questioning, and after that, Ganglun met the "shining shiatsu master" Tong Mengyu......

Kong Xian read the four chapters in one breath without feeling the slightest effort.

After confirming that it was the last page of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny", Kong Xian's face showed regret.

"How?"

"Not bad. While I'm not sure if anyone else understands it, the story flows well and makes you feel the urge to read on...... Others don't know, but I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. ”

Kong Xian turned the last page and saw the comment area of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny", and noticed a post saying that there was a follow-up plot, so she clicked on it curiously.

"I also think it's okay, but the words are not concise enough. There are some Internet light literary styles that are better, and the descriptions of the scenery and characters are better than it. ”

"Do you know why this article doesn't have a big introduction to the characters?" Kong Xian asked.

"Why?"

"There's no need. No matter how good the author's depiction of the characters is, can there be color pages to be intuitive? No. If you don't believe it, you can find a random one without illustrations, read two or three chapters, and then compare it with this one, and what comes to mind is still Hong Liqi and Zhen Youli. Why do you need words when you can do things with pictures? ”

"Huh?"

Zeng Yue wondered if he had heard it wrong, a light editor-in-chief actually recommended illustrations here.

"But you should pay more attention to the writing, right?"

"I know, this person named another, if he wrote it, his writing is okay. It's just that there is some water, and if it is to be published, it must be 'squeezed'. Kong Xian explained while looking at the post just now, "Many people pay too much attention to literary style, but in fact, they care more about the author's pen power." Of course, many newcomers lack pen skills, so it looks a little naïve. ”

"The power of this pen ...... Not enough, right? Zeng Yue hesitated.

Manga also pays attention to pen power, which is reflected in the dialogue.

Due to the limited length of dialogue, the cartoonist should try to express the character's words in as few words as possible.

A cartoonist is not a writer and can only be as good as possible, but not to the extreme.

"It's not enough, it's okay. It's much better than those light homes selected from the Internet. The pen power is complex and very vague, such as white drawing, such as practicing words, these all belong to the category of pen power, but the light is not so complicated, the key point is whether the author can show the picture in his mind and imagination.

"Some authors have all kinds of gripping images in their minds, but when they fall on paper, they are as plain as water...... Of course, "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny" is also bland, but except for the first chapter, it is about daily life, and it is the encounter between Ganglun and Ah Zhi who are going to listen to an open class, so it looks bland, but when Hong Liqi falls in a pool of blood, the reader will feel nervous again.

At the same time, another will also arouse the reader's emotions. Therefore, it seems to be bland, but it can attract readers, and many authors who have just entered the industry, or even those who have been in the industry for a few years, may not be able to grasp it well. ”

"So powerful?" Zeng Yue heard Kong Xian say this, and he also put away his contempt for this part.

"Another also has a disadvantage, and it's obvious, it's 'water'. His pen power is enough in this book, but it is not concise enough, and if it is to be published, it is estimated that some content will have to be revised...... another_online？ ”

Kong Xian read the Weibo name of another softly, picked up the mobile phone on the coffee table, and found another's Weibo according to the name.

“…… A light family that is motivated by interest...... The number of followers, 13,000...... Chapter 19? ”

Seeing the latest Weibo, Kong Xian immediately had spirits.

"Chapter 19?"

"Huh? Has it been serialized to 19 chapters? Zeng Yue said curiously.

"You don't know?"

"I don't know, I didn't read the comment area." Zeng Yue picked up the pad and typed in another's Weibo name.

The top one of the microblogs is from Chapter 19.

Kong Xian just nodded, but her eyes fell on the phone screen.

There are still 15 chapters in the chapters she didn't read, which is not long, but after careful evaluation, she found that these 15 chapters have more than 200,000 words.

When a reader encounters a favorite, he never feels that it is too long.

More than 200,000 words, a lot to say, when Kong Xian began to read the rest of "The Gate of the Stone of Destiny", she felt that time flew by, and unconsciously, the sky had darkened.

Zeng Yue yawned, saw that the editors in the office were gone, and glanced at Kong Xian who was reading, with a helpless look - she didn't go back to her editorial office, what if something happened in the editorial department?

"Hey, Sister Kong, it's time to go." Zeng Yue reminded.

"Oh, I see." Kong Xian stood up, rubbed her eyes, and glanced at the time, 20:22.

"So late?" Kong Xian was a little surprised.

"Yes, everyone is gone......" Zeng Yue coughed dryly, "How does it read?" ”

"Not bad, better than most of the light ones serialized online...... The quality is still very high. But I don't know why, I always feel that the atmosphere is a little depressing, and it probably has something to do with the illustrations. ”

"Illustrations?"

"Hmm. There was a scary illustration just now, a picture of a puppet stained with blood......"

"Listening to you say that, it feels a bit like a ghost story."

Zeng Yue turned off the lights in the office, Kong Xian stood up and looked down, but the person walked out of the office where he was reading.

Zeng Yue shook his head, and there was a trace of doubt in his heart - is it really that good-looking?

When he turned off the last light, Kong Xian, who was standing outside the door, suddenly screamed softly, and Zeng Yue trembled all over his body.

"What's wrong?"

"I didn't ...... It's nothing. "Kong Xian is red and red, and she is stumbling.

On the elevator, Zeng Yue's eyes kept staring at Kong Xian, her brows were tightly locked, and her expression was nervous, so that Zeng Yue was also curious about what she saw.

It wasn't until the elevator came to the first floor that Kong Xian breathed a sigh of relief, as if she had come out of it.

"What do you see? So obsessed. Zeng Yue was a little curious.

"Zhen Youli is dead." Kong Xian's tone was very flat.

"Huh? How did he die? ”

"It's complicated to say. Ganglun used the time machine to go back in time, but no matter what he did, he couldn't save Zhen Youli......" Kong Xian sighed, "If I'm not mistaken, the first 17 chapters are all foreshadowing, and it wasn't until the 18th chapter that the story really became exciting." I left another private message hoping to publish this ......"

"What did he say?" Zeng Yue rarely saw Kong Xian care so much about one, so he asked curiously.

"Didn't reply. But it should also be a great opportunity for him, right? After all, not every book has a chance to be published. Kong Xian said with a smile.

She is still very confident in this.

If it weren't for publication, there would be no need for the other party to serialize.

At this moment, Kong Xian's mobile phone rang.

She hurriedly picked up her phone, her eyebrows curled, and she smiled: "There is...... He replied. ”

Zeng Yue smashed his mouth, and secretly said that Kong Xian was lucky, and he could turn to a book casually, and it was of high quality.

But soon, he noticed that Kong Xian's expression was not quite right, as if he was a little angry or lost.

Could something have happened?

"What's wrong?" Zeng Yue hurriedly asked.

Kong Xian bit her lip and took two deep breaths, as if she had been bent. Insulted, with anger in his tone," he said, not interested. ”

“……”

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