Mao's ear mother brought milk tea, and Shi Qun immediately picked up the coffee and took a sip beautifully.

Fan Yinmo took out his name and immediately saw the cover of this sentence, and a huge line of words came into view - "Demon King Tutor".

It reads like a comic related to tutoring, and this kind of theme ...... Fan Yinmo hadn't seen it much.

With a trace of doubt in his heart, Fan Yinmo also officially began to read the name.

The protagonist is a person with average academic performance, but who works hard.

The family has always been very worried about his grades, and deliberately went to the tutoring center to hire a tutor, but after three or four attempts, the grades did not improve, and his parents were helpless.

A text message came from the parents' mobile phone, an agency that claimed to be a "Demon King Tutor", and sent an advertising text message. With the mentality of giving it a try, the parents invited a tutor from the "Demon King Tutor" institution.

So,The tutor helped the male owner in his studies.,But the male owner's grades still haven't improved significantly.,Through interrogation,,It turned out that someone in the school bullied him.。 After learning the reason for the incident, the tutor helps the protagonist knock down the person who bullied him, and his grades also improve.

The story is very vulgar, but Fan Yinmo finds the story very interesting.

The story of the protagonist being bullied by his classmates is narrated through the mouth of the protagonist, and the atmosphere of the whole story is not depressing. The reader's heart does not feel uncomfortable while reading.

In addition, when reading, "Demon King Tutor" has some scenes of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and readers can feel the X attribute of "Tutor" coldly.

Fan Yinmo finished reading 40 pages of name in one go, and he had a feeling of unfinished business.

Of course, 40 pages are just pickaxes, and if you want to serialize, you must revise them, and many details must be revised.

As for how to modify the ...... How does he know? It's up to the more powerful cartoonists.

Haruka Tamagawa is now serialized, and there will definitely be no time, so I can only find someone else.

"That's right...... This is your first word? Fan Yinmo said curiously.

"That's all. This is the name of the short comic...... If I submit an article, I can't just start with a long-form serialization, right? Shi Qun said tangledly.

Fan Yinmo nodded: "That's the same." However, in general, if a newcomer wants to submit it to a magazine, he or she needs to submit the original manuscript. ”

"Original...... Manuscript? Shi Qun's face turned pale, a little tangled, and he forgot to drink the coffee in his hand.

Fan Yinmo knocked on the table twice, held his chin, and fell into deep thought. Shi Qun looked at Fan Yinmo expectantly, hoping to get some experience and advice from him.

However, Fan Yinmo was thinking about another thing, which had something to do with name.

The two of them were like this, they were in a stalemate for a long time, and no one said a word.

"Can I bring this name back first? In such a short period of time, it is difficult for me to read this name in detail. Moreover, if you want to revise it, it will not work for a day or two. As you know, I'm still serializing comics. ”

Fan Yinmo had a general direction in his mind, sat up straight, and looked at the stones.

Shi Qun's face changed slightly, staring at the manuscript in Fan Yinmo's hand, a little embarrassed.

"Are you short of money?" Fan Yinmo saw Shi Qun's hesitant expression, and immediately changed the topic.

"Ahem, there are some." Shi Qun nodded.

"So, I still have 20,000 yen here, you can use it first...... Otherwise, the name will be returned to you. Fan Yinmo casually took out two 10,000-yen bills from his wallet.

They go to school in District 11 and have to use District 11 money.

"That'...... Not really. Shi Qun waved his hand, "Although I don't have much money, there is still no big problem with a normal life." ”

"This money is nothing to me, and you don't have to pay it back. I think you worked hard to give you money. The domestic comics market is huge, and you will definitely have the opportunity to show your strength in the future. Fan Yinmo said with a straight face, "I don't want people like you to be trapped by money." ”

Shi Qun's eyes widened, looking at Fan Yinmo with a sincere expression, and his heart was warm.

He was really afraid that Fan Yinmo would take the name and leave.

If Fan Yinmo didn't give it to him sincerely, he would be speechless.

But now 20,000 yen is placed in front of him, and if he says that he is not impressed, it is false. With this money, even if Fan Yinmo really swallowed the name privately, he felt that he would not lose anything.

That's right, if this short story can be serialized, he will definitely get more than 20,000 yen. But the premise is that he can be serialized.

He had drawn a similar name, no less than five copies, and he didn't earn a single yen, let alone 20,000 yen.

At the end of the day, it's gambling.

After winning, Fan Yinmo handed over the revised name to him, and he gave Fan Yinmo a sum of money back.

If he loses, he gets 20,000 yen for nothing, which is much better than not getting anything at all, and it is regarded as the first manuscript fee he gets - although it is a little small.

After successive defeats, people are very realistic, and the stone group is no exception.

"Teacher Fan, I ......"

"Needless to say, no matter how much you say, you just don't treat me as a friend." Fan Yinmo waved his hand, not giving Shi Qun a chance to refuse at all, "I'll take the name back, think about it carefully, if you can, I'll give it to you when it's time for class." If you don't agree, I won't ask for the 20,000 yen if the name is placed here. Lao Shi, it's up to you. ”

Fan Yinmo said this, and Shi Qun was embarrassed to refuse again, so he took advantage of the situation and said, "Then it will trouble Teacher Fan." ”

After getting the name, Fan Yinmo had no need to stay any longer, and said to Shi Qun to "go back and see the name", and stood up.

At the same time, he ordered a sundae, milk tea, and strawberry cake for Shi Qun before leaving the café.

Shi Qun thanked him again and again, and watched Fan Yinmo leave.

"I didn't expect Fan Yinmo's people to be so good? I should have gotten acquainted with him earlier...... "Shi Qun dug up a spoonful of the sundae and put it in his mouth, feeling indescribably comfortable.

Fan Yinmo clipped Name under his armpit, called a taxi, and after telling him where the apartment was, the rental slowly drove forward.

At this time, Fan Yinmo couldn't help laughing.

Today's harvest is far beyond his imagination.

The name was indeed of high quality, and although he couldn't suggest better changes, he knew that the manga was flawed. And he was able to read this name down, and found it interesting, which showed that the flaws were not hidden.

Of course, if this name wants to produce results, it must be polished well, which is one of the reasons why he wants to take the name over, he wants to listen to the opinions of professional cartoonists to see if this name has the potential to become a fire.

As for swallowing this name...... The brain will only do this if the brain is pumped.

If it was a long-form comic, he might have the idea of moving the name, but what Shi Qun asked him to read this time was just a short name with many flaws.

What's the use of him asking for a short name?

Useless.

He didn't care about the name, but the person who was Shi Qun.