Chapter 454: The Outline Passed

"If there's a reply, let me know immediately." Shang Haozhi admonished.

Yan Fei nodded.

"Well, guys, the next week or two is a crucial time for us. The management has given instructions that the sales volume should not be dropped too much, otherwise, it will be a matter of year-end bonuses. ”

"That...... Can't drop too much...... What is the range? Wang Wenhong asked in a low voice.

"Within half a month, it will remain above 4.8 million copies." Shang Haozhi said.

As soon as this number came out, everyone's pressure increased sharply.

It is impossible for the top management to estimate the sales of the magazine at a low level, and the only explanation is that even the magazine is not very optimistic about this sales.

Is this really such a crisis?

The editors looked at each other in silence.

At this moment, an email was pushed to Yan Fei's mailbox.

Yan Fei glanced at the email and subconsciously said, "It's here." ”

Shang Haozhi's eyes immediately moved to Yan Fei, Yan Fei clicked on the email, quickly browsed, and after a while, he was afraid that he would read it wrong, so he read it again.

"How?" Shang Haozhi was a little nervous.

Yan Fei did not answer Shang Haozhi, but patiently read the email carefully, for fear of missing a word.

After making sure the message was correct, she looked up, "It's over." ”

"It's over!?"

Shang Haozhi was pleasantly surprised, this may be the best news he has heard in recent times.

Wang Wenhong also straightened up, eager to come over and take a look, but he also knew that Zhuang Si Yuye must have replied in Japanese, and even if he went over, he would not be able to understand it.

"Hmm. The other party also made a request, and the next text was directly given to them, and it seemed that they were ready to ask a professional to translate it. ”

"Then listen to them." Shang Haozhi nodded.

More is better than less, since the other party wants to translate, then leave it to the other party.

"But even so, you can't take it lightly." Shang Haozhi just wanted to turn around, but suddenly turned his head again, "After Xiao Han sends the manuscript over, you must calibrate it again, don't make too many mistakesβ€”you and Xiao Wang read it twice." ”

Wang Wenhong nodded again and again, as if there were a hundred deer running wildly in his heart, and as soon as he got off work, he couldn't wait to tell Shen Xin the news.

Shen Xin, who was painting, was relieved when he heard the outline of the original script and passed the review of Zhuang Si Yuye.

Xi Muhan, who had just come out of the room and was about to eat, saw Shen Xin with a smile on his face, and looked puzzled, "Brother Xin, why are you so happy?" ”

"It's nothing to do with me, but it's about you."

"Huh?" Xi Muhan blinked, quickly thought of the script, his face tightened, but when he saw Shen Xin, who looked relaxed, with a hint of luck in his heart, he asked tentatively, "Brother, is it...... Is the script over? ”

"Hmmm! However, Brother Wang didn't know what the attitude of Supervisor Zhuang Si was, so he could only wait until Yan Fei translated the letter, and maybe there would be some suggestions. ”

"Then I'll contact Sister Su Han?" Xi Muhan asked.

"Wait a minute, right? If the attitude of the overseer does not know, it is not easy for you to write. ”

The importance of supervision for a manga goes without saying.

The success of "Steelmaking 03" is absolutely inseparable from Seiji Mizushima's control of the plot, and "Shambhala's Conqueror", which he supervises, maintains a high reputation, so that after the appearance of "Steelmaking Fa", a work with zero negative reviews, "Steelcast 03" still has a large number of supporters.

Since Zhuang Si Yuye is very famous in the industry, Shen Xin has full trust in him.

Xi Muhan nodded.

"Also, this time with Teacher Su, you must learn something, don't deal with it." Shen Xin was a little uneasy, and continued to admonish.

"Hmm."

"Especially the rhythm of the story...... Also, Mr. Su is good at setting suspense, and it just so happens that "Steel Chain" also pays more attention to logic and suspense than other fighting comics, so there shouldn't be much of a problem this time. But not all stories are in this state. If you want to cover other types as well, be sure to read more about other types of ......"

"I know." Xi Muhan nodded again.

"I'm not done yet?" Shen Xin looked helpless, "I mean, you must pay more attention to different types of rhythms. It's more useful than memorizing a few more words or beautiful sentences. ”

"Rhythm?"

"Different authors have different rhythms in their works, some are on the fast side, some are on the slow side. But whatever the rhythm, the goal is to make the reader feel comfortable. Just like the same piece, a radical or soothing performance will bring different feelings to listening. ”

When it comes to music, Shen Xin naturally reminds him of the theme song "Get Over" of "Chess Soul", when used as the theme song, its passionate music makes people feel excited, and with the inspirational lyrics, it is enough to inspire.

As an interlude, the tune of "Get Over" is soothing, and with some sad images, it makes people feel sentimental.

Different instruments, with different rhythms, often give people completely different feelings. But which one it is still depends on the choice of the performer.

The same is true, the same plot, let different authors write it, will have different effects.

"You don't need to know too much, just click to the end." In the end, Shen Xin was afraid that Xi Muhan would take a detour, so he inevitably reminded him, "People's energy is limited. ”

"Well, I know. Brother Xin, I suddenly found that you are so chatty. Xi Muhan narrowed his eyes, revealing his teeth.

Shen Xin's right hand shook slightly, and the pen almost fell off.

"Chattering ......"

Shen Xin suddenly felt that he had become an old man.

After dinner, Xi Muhan returned to the computer and glanced at the desktop, where the email from Yan Fei had already appeared on the desktop.

She clicked on it immediately, looked at it twice quickly, and her eyes lit up.

……

In the 11th district, Orochi Company, Tomita lunge, who had just stepped out of the elevator, met Shoji Uno who was walking down the stairs.

"Hey, Superintendent Shoji, what's going on now?" Tomita lunge stopped Shoji Uno.

"Huh?" Shoji Uno turned around, "I'm working on the script of the manga right now...... Soon to do the storyboard, and then I have to contact the original artist...... There's a lot to do anyway. ”

"Shonen Leap and Comic Future are very concerned about the quality of this anime, and the manga was also found by you personally, please put more effort into it, please." Tomita said meaningfully with a lunge.

"President, as long as the funds are sufficient, if I can't shoot the first season at the top level, then I won't make animation again." Shoji Uno pushed the frame of his glasses and sneered.

"It's good to be confident." Tomita laughed.

"However, what kind of quality the whole animation can have is still with Mr. Shen, I hope the story will not collapse." Shoji Uno sighed.

Tomita touched his nose with a dry smile, and when he saw the manuscript in Shoji Uno's hand, he was curious: "What is the script in your hand?" ”

"It's not. It is a detailed outline of the original script. Shoji Uno waved his hand.

"How's the quality?"

"I can't see it...... It's up to them to make what kind of script. Shoji Uno took off his glasses, took out a cotton cloth and wiped them lightly, "However, I have high expectations for this script, and I hope they don't disappoint me." ”