"Don't rewrite the new script? What are you going to do? Ji Yin was surprised.

Xi Muhan also looked at Shen Xin puzzled.

"For Xiaohan's sake, I'll make an exception to say what I think. Isn't there four female characters in the first part? Three of the girls were students and one was a teacher. Then pull two girls from the later chapters to form a club, and the only teacher can be the instructor. ”

"What's the difference between this and what Xiao Han said?" Ji Yinxuan was puzzled.

Xi Muhan nodded again and again, she also wanted to know the difference between the two.

"Of course there are differences, the purpose of creating a community is different. What Xiao Han is talking about is to create a club for the purpose of falling in love.,They and the protagonist didn't know each other before.,The club I'm talking about is for the purpose of competing for the male master.,They and the male owner have known each other since the beginning.,Everyone wants to date the male owner.,But they don't want to give others a chance.。 ”

"Wait...... If so, the text written by Su Han can be applied to this framework. You'll need to remove some of the characters and the content related to them, and then reorganize them to add branching quests for the game. Ji Yinxuan suddenly realized, "In this way, it can indeed shorten the time for sorting out the script." Shen Xin, sure enough, your idea is better. ”

Xi Muhan blinked, looking confused.

"Brother Xin's change, is it just to shorten the time to revise the script?"

"Of course, it's more than that. The most important point of the method mentioned by Shen Xin is to give players a sense of substitution. The game we did this time was galgame, and the target players were boys. If it's the kind of proposal you said, several outstanding girls form a club because they have never been in love, and then choose a boy as a love object, suppose you are the boy, how would you feel? Ji Yinxuan asked.

"Lucky...... This sense of luck should be passed on to players, right? ”

"That's right, it's something that can be passed on to the player - yes, 'I' was lucky enough to be her boyfriend. But at the same time, the 'player' may also have another idea, and 'I' is the test subject. They came to me to try to fall in love, not for other reasons.

Shen Xin's idea didn't have this much to worry about. The reason why so many beautiful girls form a club is because of 'me', and everything they do is also to make 'me' happy, so as to win 'me'. If you were this guy, would it feel different? ”

Ji Yinxuan's cheeks were rosy, and her eyes were shining.

It was her biggest mood swing of the night, and the reason was that the game had a new idea.

Xi Muhan nodded slowly, "It seems to be like that, there is indeed a sense of vanity in my heart." Brother Xin, how did you come up with the idea to write like this? ”

Shen Xin rolled his eyes, I am also an Internet writer, although I am only third-rate, but I still know some basic points.

"In the script written by Su Han, the number of characters should be greatly reduced, and the events related to the characters can be retained and used as a branch of the game to spread on other characters." Shen Xin reminded Ji Yinxuan.

"That's right." Ji Yinxuan nodded again and again, "This is better than what I said, you only need to adjust the structure of the story, and you are making small adjustments, at most a month, you should be able to adjust the story well." When the script is written, you can set up the characters. In this way, I will go to the editor-in-chief and communicate with him about asking you to be the persona. If he doesn't agree, I'll start with the loopholes in the contract. ”

"Don't bother, right? Just draw a few sketches, and when the time comes, you just don't say it. Shen Xin waved his hand.

"No way!" Ji Yinxuan categorically denied Shen Xin's statement, "Character design is very important to the production of games. I wouldn't allow such an important character to be forced into the background because of a flawed contract, and, besides, fame is important to you, right? ”

Shen Xin was silent.

For a cartoonist, reputation is the guarantee of manga sales, and only by letting more people know your name can you have a chance to sell comics.

"So, you don't have to worry about this matter, I will definitely arrange it." Ji Yinxuan didn't give Shen Xin a chance to interject, and directly finalized the matter, "But I may have to delay a little bit when I negotiate with "New World", after all, the text has not come out yet, and I am not very good at negotiating." ”

Shen Xin nodded, after all, he decided to deny cooperating with Ji Yinxuan after reading the script, so Ji Yinxuan's approach was better for both parties.

Seeing that Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan had finalized the cooperation, and only some details were left undiscussed, Xi Muhan was a little anxious.

"Wait...... Brother Xin, isn't it useless for me to say this? ”

Hey?

Shen Xin and Ji Yinxuan looked at Xi Muhan's face full of puzzlement.

"Just delete a few characters, and then add the scenes of the deleted characters to other characters, these things, any person can do these things, right?" Xi Muhan was sullen.

Ji Yinxuan shook her head again and again.

"Of course not. What you just said is very correct, because Xiao Su has never been in love, so the creation of the character is very unsuccessful. The demeanor and tone of speech when facing the male protagonist can't grasp the feeling of love at all - the character is too rational, it should be related to her good at speculative novels.

"I need to embody the content of love in the text. The characterization of the character also determines the image of the character. As a cartoonist, Shen Xin should be able to understand how important the character is, right? ”

Shen Xin nodded, although he knew that this would increase Xi Muhan's workload a lot, but what Ji Yinxuan said was also true.

"Really?" Xi Muhan's eyes brightened again, and he even felt a little happy in his heart.

"But the writing of the script is an iterative process, and sometimes a character may be remembered by the reader because of a sentence, so I hope you are ready to change the script. But don't worry, I'll help too. Don't be in a hurry. Ji Yinxuan comforted.

"I ...... No problem. Xi Muhan clenched his fists, "I should ...... No, you can definitely write a good script. However, Brother Xin, when you said that those girls formed a club for the purpose of 'competing for the male lead', I was thinking about a question, since the heroines all like the male protagonist and should be enemies of each other, then, why do they still form a club? ”

"Huh?"

Shen Xin was stunned, he just said it casually, he hadn't thought about it.

"yes, I want to know, too." Ji Yinxuan asked seriously.

"Well...... this" Shen Xin wiped the sweat from his forehead, how do I know, I just think it will be fun.

"Of course, there must be a reason...... Shen Xin's mind spun rapidly.

"Hmm." Xi Muhan nodded, like a good student who listened carefully.

"For example...... That's right! Shen Xin snapped his fingers, "For example, they have repeatedly caused an uproar at school because of the protagonist's affairs." In order to ensure the peace of the school, the principal felt that it would be better for other students to let them form a club and only move in a certain area. ”

After finishing speaking, Shen Xin secretly admired himself for being able to get the loophole back in such a short period of time.

"Is that okay?" Xi Muhan looked incredulous.

"No problem. Unless it is a reasoning game, other types, such as development games, can have small logical loopholes. Shen Xin's thinking seems to be telling a joke, but it can really be used. Ji Yinxuan nodded and said.

"Alright, that's all for today." Shen Xin stood up from the sofa, "The follow-up is your business, don't contact me again until the script comes out." ”

"Also, it's getting late, and I should go back too." Ji Yinxuan stood up and bowed slightly to Shen Xin and Xi Muhan.

"Is your butler back?" Shen Xin asked.

"It doesn't matter, I'll just contact her. As for the contract, I respect your intentions, and in a few days, I will bring the contract and explain the pros and cons. If you feel that this is a bondage, you can not sign it, but it should be in your interest, and I will never default. When Ji Yinxuan just walked out of the door, she said like two people.

Shen Xin bowed slightly, the contract is the guarantee of the interests of both parties, but some people really don't like to sign a contract, so Ji Yinxuan is indeed asking for their opinions.

"Since it's a business thing involved, let's sign a contract, right? When there is a problem, it is easy to talk. Shen Xin said.

"Okay, we'll see you in a few days."

Shen Xin sent Ji Yinxuan outside the community, and only turned around and went home until Ji Yinxuan got into the car.