Chapter 667: Surprise

Although Shen Xin swore by what he said, Yan Fei couldn't believe his words before the new book came out.

The evil comic itself is already very niche, and with the same theme as "Crime and Punishment", Yan Fei always has no confidence in this comic.

Everything still waits until the name comes out, it's really not good, so I can only talk to Shen Xin.

Yan Fei didn't say anything after learning about Shen Xin's plan, just quietly waited for the new work to come out.

It is not difficult for Shen Xin to draw the name of the short story of "DN", but he has other things to do, one is to sort out the name of "Y's", and at the same time, he also wants to tell Gao Hang and Liu Rui, who are on their honeymoon, and let them take some scenic photos at the tourist spot in case of emergency.

After dealing with these things, Shen Xin finally had time to focus on the short story of "DN".

This short story is actually the prototype of "DN", and many of the settings of "DN", such as sulfur, such as note, and some rules, are reflected in the comics.

In this short story, there is a prop that is not available in serialized comics, the Death Eraser.

Write a person's name on the note, and the person will die, but erase the person's name with an eraser, and the deceased will be brought back to life as long as the body is still there.

These elements make up this comic.

This short story is 53 pages long, and the assistants have to be divided into two groups because they have to draw the plot of "Y's" at the same time, so the progress of "DN" will also be slowed down.

With these 53 pages, it will take two weeks to draw the original manuscript at the earliest.

Shen Xin is not a newcomer, and the editorial department is very familiar with his drawing skills and storyboards, so he can directly submit the name to "Comic Future".

Before Yan Fei left, Shen Xin made an appointment with her, and at noon a day later, he handed over the name of "DN" to her.

So, the night before, Shen Xin began to sit in front of the pen screen and draw name.

Considering the difference in the reading order between the comics in Area 11 and Huaxia, there are also some differences in details, such as the layout of the room, furniture-these small places are often the easiest to overlook-so, when Shen Xin paints, he refers to the name of the original work, but more often he draws the storyboard himself, after all, it is easy to draw some details that are easy to ignore on the name compared to painting.

In order to draw these names, Shen Xin almost stayed up all night, so that when he got up the next day, his spirit was a little sluggish.

At about two o'clock in the afternoon, Yan Fei hurriedly came to the studio, and went directly to the second floor without taking care of drinking water.

Shen Xin saw Yan Fei coming over and printed out the drawn name.

Yan Fei took the printed name, sat on the sofa, took a deep breath, and stared at the name in his hand.

At this moment, it is impossible to say that you are not nervous.

The template for the next comic is in her hands, and whether it can be as long as "Steel Forge" will be revealed soon.

“《Death Note》?” Yan Fei saw the first page and couldn't help but read it out loud.

Because it's name, it's hard to see the picture, and it looks like a person squatting on a sphere, and in front of the sphere is a child.

Death…… Note?

It is indeed different from the Book of Prophecy.

Yan Fei quickly flipped through the name, and the general plot of the story quickly skimmed through his mind.

Death dropped one of his notes in the world, and a junior high school boy named Wang Jing picked up this note, but because he didn't know the meaning of "Death", he thought it was an ordinary notepad, and took notes twice in the way of keeping a diary.

A panicked king asks for help from Sulfur, who gives him a death eraser, and after erasing his name, the dead will be brought back to life.

So, the next day, five students reappeared in the class. When questioned by two police officers, five people died at the same time.

Wang Jing panicked, it wasn't him who did it this time.

Sulfo told Wang Jing that he had actually lost 2 copies, which meant that the other one had been picked up by another person.

Wang Jing immediately thought of Liu Pu, a classmate who was bullied by these five people like him and was interrogated. Wang Jing found Liu Pu and determined that he had used the note, so he used the eraser to erase the name on the note, so that the dead were resurrected, and they also handed over the second note to the police, and finally, the note was burned.

Seven years later, Wang Jing, who kept the first note, wrote a book and published it in a magazine called "DN".

Yan Fei finished reading the name in one go, and her brainskin was a little numb.

This short story called "DN" is the same as "Crime and Punishment", it is both a campus, and it is also an evil comic based on notebooks, but compared with "DN", the brain hole of "Crime and Punishment" is still too small.

From beginning to end, "Crime and Punishment" has only one notebook, and moreover, the initiative is not as good as DN. Compared with the linguistic future, the obvious control of the Grim Reaper can better reflect the characteristics of evil comics.

Yan Fei rubbed her hands, looked at the name in front of her, couldn't help it, and read it again.

Seeing such a work, she couldn't help but be moved, this was the first time she had seen this kind of brain hole.

"Be your editor...... It's good that you can always come up with a manga that exceeds the reader's imagination...... It's the same with this one. ”

Shen Xin chuckled, thanks to Ken Obata and Oba Thrush.

"From a short comic, the quality of this name is high. I don't need to say it, Mr. Shen should be very clear. But, Mr. Shen, there is a question, you should have thought about it, right? ”

"Huh?"

"This short story doesn't really have much content. The reason why it is attractive is because of the brain hole of DN. Of course, the end of the manga is also good, and the protagonist writes one at the end. If the manga could be serialized, the reader would think that this is what the comic is about. So, this one has become the link between short comics and serialized comics, is it possible? ”

Shen Xin glanced at Yan Fei, but saw that her eyes were burning, and the excitement in her heart was undisguised.

"That's right." Shen Xin nodded.

After getting Shen Xin's approval, Yan Fei breathed a sigh of relief and tried to calm her violently beating heart.

So, again, a good brain hole can make a short comic interesting, but it can't hold up a serialized comic. No matter how good the brain hole is, if you use it repeatedly, readers will get tired of it, and if you can't let readers find new highlights, the results of serialized comics will collapse in the middle and late stages. ”

Yan Fei served as the editor-in-charge of "GAME", and both she and Haruka Tamagawa have experienced these problems. The weakness in the middle and late stages of "Game" is actually because of this.

"DN" is very brilliant, but serialization and short comics are two different things, especially, Shen Xin has to take care of "Y's", and he has less time in "DN".

So, if DN wants to be a big hit, it has to solve this problem.

Yan Fei kept thinking about "DN" and "Crime" in her mind, compared with "Crime", "DN" always felt that there was something more, but she couldn't remember it.