Readers thought that looking for trouble in Shan Jing Shou would make the two sides have a hard fight, but the development of the plot made them a little disappointed.

Shan Jing Shou and Tetsuo did find the gymnasium, and,I also saw Hanamichi and Miyanari who were playing basketball.,But the plot didn't have readers.,As envisioned,,The two teams started to play directly.,Instead, Shan Jing Shou and Tetsuo beat Miyanari.。

Hanamichi was about to get angry, but was stopped by Miyanari.

When the reader saw these two words, he felt a little aggrieved.

"That's too much, isn't it? Everyone else came to the door and beat people, and they still didn't fight back? ”

"I misread Gong Cheng, if it's me, even if I don't want to die, I have to teach them a lesson."

"How to teach? You didn't see it, although Gong Cheng fought hard, his height was limited. Standing in front of Iron Man, like a child. ”

"Why can't I teach a lesson? He is short, but Liu Chuanfeng and Hanamichi are not good stubble, besides, isn't there Mu Gangxian? That body, one person can fight a group. ”

"Mu Gangxian doesn't seem to be there."

"Gong Cheng also has a hard time. If the school knows about the fight, the basketball club may be disbanded. That's why he endured it. ”

"But it's too cowardly, Gong Cheng is not promising."

……

"SLAM DUNK" posted two more words after "Bad Boy", and the popularity rose a little, but most of them were voices condemning Shen Xin - the reactions of Gong Cheng and other basketball players made them feel aggrieved.

"Some readers are not satisfied with this plot ......"

Seeing Shen Xin walking out of the studio to rest, Wang Wenhong hurriedly walked out of the studio, took out a glass of juice from the refrigerator, and handed it to Shen Xin.

"Do you feel aggrieved?" Shen Xin said with a smile.

Wang Wenhong shook his head, "I'm not a child. ”

"What about you? What do you think when you see this plot? Shen Xin asked the assistants again.

"Acceptable. Whether it's Gong Cheng or Ikebana, they all serve the plot. As long as they can achieve their goals, they can accept what they are going through, right? Gao Hang explained.

Tool man?

When Shen Xin heard Gao Hang's words, these three words popped up in his mind.

"Huh? Brother Gao, I didn't expect your heart to be so cold? Gong Cheng received these punches, but it was a real fight. Liu Ruoxing protested, "It makes people feel heartache when they look at it." ”

"However, this is the only way to move the plot forward." Gao Hang retorted.

"You can change the plot to another one, right?" Liu Ruoxing still felt that this treatment was too cruel to Gong Cheng.

"What's the reaction of the readers of District 11?" Shen Xin asked Xiang Qianjing Hui again.

"There are also voices of opposition, but not as strong as Huaxia." Hui Asai briefly summarized the posts she had read.

Shen Xin nodded, "Actually, the deeper reason why Gong Cheng was beaten was to mobilize the reader's emotions - angry emotions. ”

"Huh?"

"When creating a villain, it often makes the villain more evil, which should also be a creative technique, right?" Wang Wenhong asked Shen Xin.

"That's right. At the end of the day, it's all foreshadowing. The contradiction between Gong Cheng and Mitsui is the foreshadowing of these two words, and Gong Cheng's beating is the foreshadowing of the next few words. The purpose of these two sentences is to make the reader feel angry. If you think it doesn't matter, it means that these two words have not achieved the effect. When the basketball players fight back, you know why. Shen Xin said with a smile.

This technique is not very common in the Internet, unless the author is a god or even platinum level, otherwise, readers are easy to abandon the book - readers read books because they want to read two chapters after a day of work, to relieve the pressure of work, rather than adding blockage.

What's more, such a plot will indeed make people feel that Gong Cheng is too cowardly, and everyone else has slapped him in the face, but he still didn't fight back, too cowardly.

In comics, however, this routine is often presented.

In "One Punch Man", the King of the Deep defeated countless heroes, and even the S-class heroes were not his opponents, and everyone could not kill him immediately, but one kept the plot brewing until Saitama appeared and killed the King of the Deep Sea with one punch, which suppressed the anger in the reader's heart for a long time before it was swept away.

In fact, in "One Punch Man", this kind of plot still has not been achieved to the extreme.

In Shen Xin's memory, the work that handles the plot better is "Wild Liangshen". In particular, Yato endures the damage caused by Yukine in order to educate Yukine.

Many readers, including Shen Xin himself, were angry at Xueyin's stubbornness and rebellion, because his "sickness" would also hurt Yato, and at the same time, they also felt that the author was too inkblotted and spent a long time dealing with the contradiction between Xueyin and Yato.

However, when Yukine finally confesses to Yato and asks Yato to remove the "sickness" from his body, the reader feels comfortable from the bottom of his heart, as if he had drunk a can of cold Coke on a hot summer day.

In particular, the appearance of "sickness" makes people feel disgusting, and when the "sickness" on Xueyin's back is removed, it is also like removing this disgusting thing.

Of course, as I said before, a good animation company will give comics a bonus, and the animation company that produced "Wild Gods" Bone Society is undoubtedly a representative of this type of company, and the rhythm of the plot and the portrayal of the characters' feelings are just right.

Shen Xin saw that some helpers were skeptical, and he didn't try his best to refute it, but just expressed his opinion, "Actually, because you participated in the creation of "SLAM DUNK", you have watched every detail more than a dozen or even dozens of times, and you have long been numb, even if some of the plots are very outstanding, you may not be able to see it." You'll know when the reader sees the next sentence. ”

Several assistants looked at each other, and suddenly realized that this was indeed possible!

They face "SLAM DUNK" every day, even Liu Rui and Liu Ruoxing have seen the plot more than once, and they are no longer so excited, and readers may be more emotional than they see the plot below.

Whether it's as Mr. Shen said, we'll know in the next serialization.

"What's next? It's supposed to be "The End of the Basketball Club", right? ”

Two weeks ago, Wang Wenhong handed over the original manuscript to Comic Future. This scene does exist, and the first person to fight back is Liu Chuanfeng!

Shen Xin nodded, with a chuckle on his face, "From the next episode, "SLAM DUNK" will usher in another big plot. ”

The 26th issue of the magazine has just been released, and the popularity of "SLAM DUNK" has increased significantly compared with before, whether it is in China or in the 11th district.

Shan Jing Shou still went his own way, and beat An Tian of the basketball club, Liu Chuanfeng couldn't stand it anymore, and smashed the ball at Shan Jing Shou. The person who came with Shan Jingshou picked up the mop and smashed it at Liu Chuanfeng, blood flowed out, and before the others could react, the person punched Liu Chuanfeng in the abdomen again.

Seeing that Liu Chuanfeng did not fall, the man said, "You are quite beaten." ”

Liu Chuanfeng immediately counterattacked, also in the abdomen, but Liu Chuanfeng's punch directly made the other party flow bitter water.

This punch came at the right time, and the frustration that had been accumulated in the reader's heart for a long time was vented with this punch.

At the same time, their hearts are even more depressed - the comics are out of context.