This chapter is probably the one I've struggled with the longest. Three days or four days? I don't remember, but I've been perfecting this chapter for like 3 all-nighters anyway.

I don't know what's wrong, this chapter card is uncomfortable. This is a key emotional foreshadowing, but it has been written very dry and stiff, three or two sentences have brought the process that should have been very difficult, and one or two small difficulties have brought this plot... That's not what I wanted, and it shouldn't have been this book.

I seriously thought about what the pain of suffocation was like, and then I held my breath until I couldn't stand it.

Then describe him with onomatopoeia, words, examples, and examples. I've experienced the feeling of choking on water while swimming, and even the feeling of laughing and squirting soda out of my nose when I drink soda, and then I have struggled to think about it and describe it.

But the real word is poor and can only be used

The word "astringency and pain" sums it up. Then I thought about the escape, and I originally thought that I would just wake up in a safe place and skip the middle paragraph.

But I know, it's not logical. Jumping from a valley to a height of at least 300 meters, even if you give a deep enough dark river, you will wake up safe, there is no such good thing.

There are no broken bones and tendons, and you Kaslana has rough skin and thick flesh, and Sakura is good protected by you. No matter how good you are in the water, you still have a person with you, and you still want to float in so much equipment, it's impossible.

The part that woke up and drowned in the water for so long and didn't die, I think it was a collapse to bless you. All kinds of logical regulations, the development of various things, including the outbreak of flash floods, I also made the foreshadowing of the snow melting in spring and the rain in the spring, and the flash flood is inevitable.

At this point, it's almost good, but I suddenly thought, what about Yae Sakura? She's still choking!

Hydropneumopulmonary effusion is still holding it if it is not discharged! According to the logic, she should die, but Xiu doesn't know how to CPR compressions, there was no such thing at that time, and then reformulate the plot to add the wrong emotional interaction... It's almost, but there's more.

Time at dawn, jump off at daytime? How long has it been flooded? And then again from start to finish... I turned it over and over again, several times, until I couldn't change it and was so sleepy that my eyes were hallucinating, and I watched it again.

And then after saying so much, I want to say that I really did my best, I didn't lower my requirements and grades, but my brain is almost dead now, let me sleep... I don't want to stay up late, it's too hurt... If there's really something blunt and embarrassing to look at... Let me respond in the afternoon.

Thank you (end of chapter)