Destined for self-examination——

The writing of this article made a certain family full of emotion, and Qin Shi Mingyue's biggest mistake was that it was too long, which a certain family also knew very well.

Between the big fish and begonia Qin Shi Mingyue, a low-difficulty and low-grade world should have been added, as a transition, and the foundation was laid casually. Then when it comes to "Qin Shi Mingyue", you can quickly reach a high position, reduce the chapters that improve your strength, and then describe more of the emotions you want to express.

In fact, there are still a lot of mistakes, and I didn't feel it when the outline was set, but I realized that it was too long when I was halfway through writing.

In fact, a third of the outline has been cut; The chapter about Longteng Wanli was deleted, the chapter of Emperor Qin's Eastern Tour was deleted, half of the Mirage invasion chapter was deleted, half of the chapter on the civil strife in the farmhouse was deleted, and a small article about Zhao Qian and Gao Yue was also deleted, and finally some details were directly ignored.

The original ending should have followed the archetype of history, as the beginning of the ending during the second eastern tour of the Qin Emperor.

I want to write a majestic and heroic first emperor who swallows thousands of miles like a tiger, and I want to write a layout and planning, and the Eastern Emperor Taiyi, who is also righteous and evil.

Then the male protagonist successfully conquered the world, and when he ascended the throne as the emperor, he cracked the secret of the Seven Nights of Canglong, changed the world, and broke through the world barrier directly with the luck of heaven and earth.

And the current setting of this ending was originally the ending setting of the next world, and then mixed with the inspiration of another book setting, it became this somewhat hasty thing.

All right! Whether it's good or not, whether the grades are bad or not, you have to call yourself first~-

If you don't believe in yourself, how can you write good works~

As for the next world -

Under one person.

It's a very short chapter, but I will write it carefully.

Just ask for a day off and organize your thoughts.

And finally—

Ten years of Qin, it is difficult to cool the blood.

Come on, Qin Shi!!!!

The book friends of "The World of Guoman" cover up their tears and mourn the many chapters. I am hitting it in my hand, please wait a moment,

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