Carvin, no change tonight
The author likes to have readers who "criticize" the author, especially those who "criticize" the plot.
This at least shows that there are indeed one or two friends who have read your novel seriously and have made a set of "logical" analysis of it.
The problem is that most friends, the point of criticism, is not correct.
The author took the time to conceive the plot, because the author himself knows that when you have a slow hand, unstable updates, and mediocre writing, the only thing you can attract readers is nothing more than the plot.
Maybe most people won't believe that a dog-shitty author who can't even type 2,000 words all day long has the face to say that he spent time thinking about the plot.
In fact, the author gets up at ten o'clock in the morning, and the whole picture in his mind is what to do with the next plot, thinking about it when washing dishes, thinking about it when washing clothes, and even thinking about it when he goes to the toilet, until he finishes his day's work, sits at the computer desk at ten o'clock in the evening, and stares at the computer screen in a daze.
Then I wrote out a thousand or hundreds of words, then I looked at them, then I deleted them, and then I rewrote them.
I stayed up until one or two o'clock in the morning, and my family came to curse them, saying that the light in my room had passed through time and affected their sleep.
Even though I kept the door closed......
It's usually unreasonable when family members are unkind to you, and readers who criticize the author are of course justified.
"I don't think you're right to write that."
"I think Mizuki didn't know how to be low-key and dormant when he was in Konoha Village."
"I think that after you let the protagonist slap the ape flying sun head-on, the ape flying sun slash will definitely kill him immediately! Just like the ancient emperors did to their courtiers, the tyrants of history know about it? ”
"I think the protagonist is too relaxed and stress-free when facing Orochimaru, but people are Orochimaru, you should tremble!"
"I think the garbage novel written by the author of Spicy Chicken is not as good as Fei-Lu's cool article!"
In this regard, the author wants to say: "I think you should register an author account, personally handle it, and write a masterpiece of the world." ”
In terms of plot, some of the readers' criticisms are wrong.
The problem with the plot of this novel is that there are too many elements of mystery and fiction, and the characters are too vague, and the reader has no time or interest in pondering the causes and consequences of a certain event.
"I just want to see if you can make me happy, no, you're garbage."
The concept is right.
However, the critics attacked that "the author can't make me happy" is wrong.
I broke a bowl today, and you say I stole a hundred of you, which is unacceptable.
The author is not new, but it is indeed the first time that he has written a novel of more than 200,000 words.
To a certain extent, the author doesn't know how to write online novels at all, so he has received a lot of criticism and spitting, which is understandable whether he accepts it or not.
Because "the author can't make the reader happy" is the original sin of online novels.
Since the publication of the novel in March 17, the author's update time is one-tenth of the time of the interruption, so the scolding continues, and the author accepts it with sincere fear.
I just hope that some readers who can't make you feel good, don't be full of "go to Nima", "damn mentally retarded", and "those who write Japanese anime fanfiction are traitors and lackeys".
Nowadays, the author is sincerely afraid, all the jokes about asking for votes, the foolish words that make the novel more exciting, and the superfluous words written by thinking that he is analyzing social essays, have been completely deleted.
It's not because the author takes himself too seriously, and it's not that the author is fake and serious.
It's just that I often hear that "if you are serious, you will lose", and the author wants to say: "If you are not serious, you will also lose." ”