Chapter 16 An Yilun who entered the pit
"Okay, I'll send it to you now."
Since the codeword software mobile phone and the computer are interrelated, the mobile phone also has yesterday's saved manuscript, which is very convenient. Mu Fan poured out the 40,000-word novel that he coded yesterday from his mobile phone, and all of them were sent to An Yilun.
Anyway, Mu Fan has only been in this world for a short time, and An Yilun's identity as a world-renowned blogger should be able to see the merits of a book and whether it is in line with the market.
An Yilun also,It's a standard otaku.,Usually like to read some novels and anime and play youth love games.,Every month, I will make some comments on the light novels and animations on sale.,This has also won the support of many fans.,Become a well-known popular blogger famous for ACG information.,It can be said that he has read countless light novels.,The understanding of light novels is also quite profound.。
Today, he happened to hear that his best friend Mu Fan, who worked in a restaurant and was a classmate at the same school, started writing light novels, and he was immediately interested.
In his opinion, Mu Fan belongs to a newcomer who has just entered the pit, and there are many problems that newcomers in light novels need to pay attention to, and he needs to list them one by one to Mu Fan and give him some guidance, but as soon as he saw the plot synopsis of Mu Fan's light novel, An Yilun was shocked.
"The story of "Accelerating the World" takes place in the future where everyone is wired with a terminal device called a "neurallinker" neural connector, living in the online world? Become an overclocker with a thousand-fold faster thinking? ”
Although the story introduction is simple, judging from the fantasy of this kind of brain hole, it is likely that a newcomer will not be able to control this kind of subject matter at all.
As soon as I saw the introduction, An Yilun couldn't help but be interested, this should be a sci-fi theme, although there is also a sci-fi future theme in light novels, but from the point of view of the neural connection device alone, the setting should be a very novel theme.
But looking down further, An Yilun's brows furrowed.
Haruyuki Arita, a student who is bullied with an obese body and a cowardly personality, lives a life of cursing reality while hiding in a corner of the school network to improve his highest score in a squash game, and can only find happiness and confidence in the game as a teenager as a beginning?
In today's novels and animations,It's definitely a taboo to start with the identity of a fat man.,After all, people who like to read novels can roughly fantasize about their favorite characters in their hearts.,But if you start with a fat man.,I'm afraid there will be many people who can't stick to it, right?
Not to mention, this fat man is still relatively weak and incompetent, and he is bullied every day.
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But it is precisely because of the weakness of the male protagonist that he wants to see how the male protagonist will fight back to solve the incident, and An Yilun also continued to watch. He didn't realize that he had been completely substituted into this novel before he knew it.
Although the male protagonist is weak, he has his personality, and the biggest advantage of this novel is that the characteristics of the character are particularly obvious.
The next day, Kuroyukihime, the revered student council president, breaks into the world of Haruki Arita and joins the ranks of "burstlinker" overclockers who can speed up their thinking by a thousand times. It is precisely with this speed of thinking that Kuroyukihime helps Haruki Arita get rid of this oppressed life.
But also because of this program, he was also involved in the battle between the "overclocking connectors", and in order to repay Kuroyukihime's favor, Haruki volunteered to serve the black king Kuroyukihime and rebuilt the story of the Black Army......
At this point in the story, the plot of more than 40,000 words is over.
After reading all the current plots, An Yilun was also completely stunned, just on the subject matter, this accelerated world is very novel in today's light novels, it can be said that Arita Haruki's battle can completely affect reality, and his heart is eager to see what the plot is next, Arita Haruki's efforts to become an overclocking connector and what kind of development will be in Kuroyukihime's feelings.
As a well-known and popular blogger, he has read countless light novels, and judging from the previous plot alone, it can be seen that "Accelerating the World" is definitely a masterpiece, because a qualified masterpiece first has a novel theme, which means that it is more than half of the success.
"Mu Fan, I didn't expect you to be just a newcomer, the light novel is so well written, it really opened my eyes, what is the next plot?"
An Yilun also admired Mu Fan without pretentiousness. After reading it, he couldn't bear his own temperament, and hurriedly sent a message back to Mu Fan.
Mu Fan, who was sitting in the food department, saw An Yilun's reply, and smiled as expected.
Speaking of which, speeding up the world abandons all settings, this novel is in his eyes an inspirational story of a weak knight who grows and progresses in order to protect his beloved princess.
Besides, he belongs to a light novel that carries the fire of his previous life, and the acceleration of the world is in line with the market of the current world, which will naturally attract many readers who like it.
As for the original, we will start when it attracts some popularity.
Newcomer light novel?
Mu Fan raised his eyebrows, he wrote novels for four or five years, but he was just not in this world.
"Wouldn't it be boring to spoil them without writing them? A qualified author will not spoil them. ”
Mu Fan smiled and replied to An Yilun with a message.
"Oh, I took the liberty of it."
An Yilun was also too anxious about the plot below just now, and only then did he think of the most hated spoilers of one of his novels and anime after being reminded by Mu Fan, and then thought of what Mu Fan began to say, and asked, "Mu Fan, are you going to submit the denki library?" I do know an editor there, and we can go together on Saturday if you want, and I'll introduce you to that. ”
"Okay, actually, I'm going to participate in the Rookie Award of Dengeki Bunko, since you have a familiar editor, then let's go on Saturday."
"Okay, then the follow-up plot should be written quickly. If you don't have to look at me, I'm going to die! ”
"Don't worry, I won't let you die."
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Mu Fan turned off his mobile phone and began to continue coding, at this time, Yuki Asuna walked over, glanced at the rapidly changing text on the phone, and the chapter information on it, and asked in surprise: "Mu Fan, ..... you Is this writing a novel? ”
"Yes, yes."
Mu Fan nodded, and suddenly remembered the OP of "Love Metronome" sung by Asuna Yuuki, and couldn't help asking, "Could it be that classmates also like light novels?" ”
"My family has been buying me some famous books and business books, and I'm almost tired of reading them! So when I'm bored, I have a little free time, so I will read light novels to relax, just like the light novel "Love Metronome", which I only discovered recently. ”
Yuuki Asuna stuck out her tongue in displeasure, and then walked over and sat on the chair opposite Mu Fan, holding her chin with one hand, and a pair of plump peaks rested on the edge of the table, letting the table bear the gravitational pull of the center of the earth for it.
To be reasonable, Yuki Asuna, as a recognized beauty in the school, is not only good-looking, but also very popular, and Mu Fan, who watched it, couldn't help but swallow his saliva.
"Mu Fan, what's the name of your light novel?" Yuuki Asukina asked curiously.
Hearing Yuuki Asuna's question, Mu Fan quickly retracted his gaze and said truthfully: "It's called "Acceleration World". ”
"Can you show me first?"
"The number of words in this book is too small now, wait for me to write more and then read it to my classmates!"
In fact, it's nothing to speed up the world to show Yuki Asuna now, but now the word count is too small, and "Acceleration World" is originally relatively slow, Mu Fan still decided to give Yuki Asuna a little more.
After all, there was already an An Yilun who urged him to change, but fortunately, An Yilun was also in the second year B class and the chance of meeting him in school was relatively small, but Yuuki Asuna was different, he was in the food department every day, he didn't want to run the food department at the same time, and when he was cooking, he was constantly urged by this beautiful minister to change.
"Okay, then you must show me when Mu Fan goes on sale!" Seeing Mu Fan say this, Yuki Asuna could only nod.
"yes, okay." Mu Fan smiled slightly, and was about to say something when Mu Fan heard a commotion at the door of the food department behind him, and Mu Fan and Yuki Asuna turned their eyes away,
At the door, a petite girl, dressed in a brown blouse, a plaid skirt, short burgundy hair, a black bat-shaped hairpin pinned to her hair, and a delicate little tiger tooth at the corner of her mouth, looked very playful and cute, walked in, swaggered down on the first table, looked at Mu Fan with her little head and smiled proudly:
"I am the Great Demon Sattania, the one who unites hell, human, come and serve a bowl of Yangchun noodles marked on the sign outside!"
"Poof!"
Hearing this sentence of the boiling of the second disease, Mu Fan couldn't help but squirt out the sip of water that he had just drunk into his mouth, and turned around to find that Yuuki Asuna was also staring at him.
The two looked at each other, and they both saw the helplessness and caring eyes of the mentally handicapped from each other's eyes.....